HKKMJNM: Part 24a, Pg 145

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asya04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

wow i realy love u r ff alot tnxxx a lot 4r pm me

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Hey! Thank u for updating. I am glad that asad and zoya are together. At least that zain is out of their reach to mess up with asad. Please post the next chapter soon. 😉

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

I absolutely adore this fan fiction! I've been following it ever since you began it, but I wasn't a forum member at the time. However, now that I joined, I knew my first post had to be for your fan fiction. I love how you have a different story from the actual show, but you manage to keep the same feelings in your story through the characters. The pace of the story is also amazing as I don't think you are dragging it out, nor is it too short. As for the story's current content, I love the protecting instinct and subtle feelings Asad is experiencing, along with their strengthening bond.

I keep refreshing this page for updates! Waiting eagerly! Please update soon, I'll be here waiting to read it (: 😊

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

plzzz update aur aaj ka epi bhi mast aanewala hai

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Archita

@ITV_Loverr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Sorry for being so late jerry. Awesome update. Jelouse asad? Haha.. And 12 children? Rolf..

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crazzychips

@crazzychips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

wow superb story yaar
i just read it in one go
and i absolutey loved it .
superb...i have no words, you are an awesome writer :-)
i have sent you a buddy request pls pm me when you update
pls update soon

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crazzychips

@crazzychips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

pls...pls...pls...
pls ...pls...pls...
update soon pls...
can't wait to read the next part

Edited by crazzychips - 12 years ago

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JarenM

@JarenM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: fee-fee
Great update! Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: luvushivin1
haha 12 children...was awsum concept anyways awsum update waiting for their romance..and thanxx for the pm

Originally posted by: aman93
Hahaha... the precap... nice update

Originally posted by: Asyalover
OMG the precap is ROLF

Originally posted by: Kaya13
Fantastic!!! Cntn soon!!!

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Nice.. Continue soon!!!

~Dee~

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
haha.. nice update..
loved the precap..

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
ehehehe.. PRECAP! cracks me up! 🤣
Childern! NOT A BAD IDEA ahan
Awesome Part

Originally posted by: Surish
Excellent literary work 👏 Keep me posted!

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
Awsome Update.

Originally posted by: bigj66
Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait to read what happens next This FF has me hooked. 😃

Zainab

Originally posted by: ish12
you are really good... !!!

Originally posted by: marialuvsarshi
great update i hope zoya and dr. sapna finds out about zains true colours

Read the next part for that. :D

Originally posted by: irock321
Loved the chapter! And Zain is such an arse!!! like W*F?!? Anyways LOL at the precap! Can't wait!!!

Originally posted by: sophie420
Awesome update!
Really good; looking forward to the next part!

Originally posted by: neenabinu
the precap looks fun

Originally posted by: --Kriti--
gr8 update

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
nice..😊

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
I have read all the parts of this FF and it's amazing. Absolutely love it. You're doing a fab job. Keep it up!

Welcome to the ff Kirann. I hope I keep up with your expectations. Thankyou for the feedback. Means a lot to me.

Originally posted by: -Laiba-
hehe tht was awsome * laugh * totaly love the jealous Asad haga cntnue soon

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-
Lovely update jerry :)

Originally posted by: awesome
mind blowing

Originally posted by: mijanur
great update

Originally posted by: asya04
wow i realy love u r ff alot tnxxx a lot 4r pm me

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Hey! Thank u for updating. I am glad that asad and zoya are together. At least that zain is out of their reach to mess up with asad. Please post the next chapter soon. 😉

Originally posted by: Asyalover
plzzz update aur aaj ka epi bhi mast aanewala hai

Originally posted by: Archi02
Sorry for being so late jerry. Awesome update. Jelouse asad? Haha.. And 12 children? Rolf..

Thank you all of you for the lovely comments. I am really busy as of now. I had planned to update the next part tonight but have a night duty and tomorrow I will be off to a med camp myself for two days. :) I will try my level best to update if I get time any free time today. Also the result of my exam which I had taken when I was writing the initial parts of this FF, is expected next Friday. I am really nervous due to that. Can't think of anything else. Please pray for me.

Edited by Jaren93. - 12 years ago

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JarenM

@JarenM

Explorer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: crazzychips
wow superb story yaar
i just read it in one go
and i absolutey loved it .
superb...i have no words, you are an awesome writer :-)
i have sent you a buddy request pls pm me when you update
pls update soon

Originally posted by: crazzychips
pls...pls...pls...
pls ...pls...pls...
update soon pls...
can't wait to read the next part

Welcome to the forum dear. I am really glad that you liked it. I have accepted your buddy request and will surely pm you when I update further. Thank you for the awesome feedback.

Love, Jerry

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JarenM

@JarenM

Explorer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: rennie
zainn is such a pest...glad that zoya and asad is getting more time to spend with each other and the best thing is, its a zain free day...eagerly waiting for the next update after reading the precap...

I am myself looking forward to writing the next part but due to my tight schedule, its difficult right now. Thanks for commenting. 😳