HKKMJNM: Part 24a, Pg 145 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Zain is such a pain in the *. I knew he wud trouble Asad for protecting Zoe. I hope Zoya does not believe da jerk. the precap is really interesting. waiting for it eagerly.

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I hate Zain soo much.
I felt really bad for Asad.
What's up with Zoe?Why didn't she agree with Asad when he told him about Zain messing up with him.
I liked the childish games between Asad and Zain a lot.But Zain went too far this time.
So Zoe and Asad are going alone.
I'm so happy.
Waiting eagerly for the next part.
You are a wonderful writer Jerry.

Originally posted by: nRiya

stupid zain😡 what a low mannered work to get back Asad he played with a patient's health he's such a 🤬

whatever because of him AsYa going to spend some time alone😆

Overall this is an Awesome Update

Thanks for the PM & plzzz update sooon

Originally posted by: Aphroditefallen

woke up till 3 am , couldnt sleep.. came across ur ff n fell for it.. :) really fab concept, awsum characteisation and an amzing story.. plz pm me and do continue.. n needless to say u write fabulously.. grt going sugar..:) :*

Originally posted by: Alveena12

Ughhh i hate zain!!!

but i love the way Zoya stuck up for Asad and took responsibility for his mistakes, awww its cute and i love the fact that they are going to the village togather, away from Zain

hahahah that old lady in the precap is hilarious, i'm looking forward to reading it, when will you update?

Originally posted by: Mahi982

Thank you so much!!! You really made this week go by good for updating everyday!! Plzzz continue I love ur story. I love it when asad tells zain to stay away from zoya;) jealous asad!!!
Plzzz update soon!!

Originally posted by: teddyyy

I absolutely adore this fan fiction! I've been following it ever since you began it, but I wasn't a forum member at the time. However, now that I joined, I knew my first post had to be for your fan fiction. I love how you have a different story from the actual show, but you manage to keep the same feelings in your story through the characters. The pace of the story is also amazing as I don't think you are dragging it out, nor is it too short. As for the story's current content, I love the protecting instinct and subtle feelings Asad is experiencing, along with their strengthening bond.

I keep refreshing this page for updates! Waiting eagerly! Please update soon, I'll be here waiting to read it (: 😊