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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
This is sooo beautiful.. thanx 😳
I loved it so much..
Do u have any plans to continue it? yup. will try to update on sat 😳
Asad's surprise and then the proposal was just mindblowing. wait to get a blow 😆
You are an awesome writer dear. thanx again! 😳 😳
Plz come up with more such wonderful ideas. will try coz im nt getting much since a few days 😆
Take care!

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Chapter - 2
"Bhopal"

Next morning...
Sunlight entering the room just felt like a new start for the two lovers sleeping in each others embrace. It surely was a new feeling for Zoya. It isn't that they have not been with each other ... but what happened between them the last night was what send shivers down her spine. A single thought about the night made her cheeks get hot. She opened her eyes just to see him sleeping peacefully nuzzling close to her.
She passed her finger from his forehead to his chin. She bit her lower lip as she saw him frowning but then she nuzzled closer to him more as such his breathe was hitting her lips. Their lips were just a few mm apart and the mere thought of what can happen next send chill down her spine.
But alas she had already packed up her virginity and thrown it out of the window. She pecked his lips and soon the very next second she was trapped under him. She pouted thinking it would work but that didn't.
"You invited it zoya"
Winking at her he took her lips in between his giving her a fierce kiss.
A call on his phone made him leave her while she ran into the washroom holding the sheets closer to her body. Asad wore his jeans and answered the call.
"Salaam walekum ammi" He spoke out with a content smile playing on his lips.
"Asad waapis kab aa rahe ho?" asked dilshad sounding somewhat scared?!
"Ammi koi problem hai?" asked asad sounding serious a bit.
"An... haan wo..." dilshaad fumbled.
Someone snatched the phone from her and gave the answer.
"Bhaaijaan najma ki tabeyat theek nahi hai... bahut tez bukhaar hai aur zid kar rahi hai ki college jaana hai exam ke liye. Aap hi samjhaaiye is jhalli ko! Allah hi iska maalik hai!"
"Najma?!! Ayaan phone do use."
"Tamatar what is this?"
"Bhaaijaan kuch nahi hua hai mujhe! Ye sab aapko waapis laane ka plan hai!"
Najma blurted out the truth while Dilshaad and Ayaan glared at her.
"Ammi se bolo kuch dino mein waapis aa raha hun wo bhi akele nahi!"
"Akele nahi?! Bhaaijaan mujhe bataao na kaun hai wo?"
"Hai koi..."
"Bhaijaan bataao na" najma pouted.
"Mujhe abhi jaana hai tamatar... bye!"
He ended up the call and turned back only to see her staring at him with a confuse look.
"Who is gonna go with you?" she asked confusion crystal clear on her face.
Asad inched forward and whispered in her ear "You". And he left to freshen up.
It took her a lot of time to understand what he meant. But alas she got it! He wants her to meet his family. Damn this brought another blush on her face.
~*~
They both at present are living in new york and for sure she is gonna love her life in bhopal too. But little did she knew, a huge pile of secrets are waiting down there for her...
A pile of secrets which will harm not only one life but a numerous life...
The secrets which will destroy the relations...
Secrets which one will never be able to forget...

Sorry for a short one guys!
I'm stuck in my studies which are gonna result in delayed and short updates.
SA's are not easy to handle up with!
Apologies.
Love
K

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

res

unres...

K ab aap ki tareef k liye to humare paas alfaaz hi nhe hai...😆

aap is qadar acha likhti h k dil ko asya k yaad aa gayi...😆

ab bataye meri urdu kisi h??😆

K it was fab...

loved it...

the way u expressed everything was MINDBLOWING...

it was a MASTER BLASTER part...

And i must ur an AWSUME writer...

And Zoya said Asad that he is more than ftnd u reminded me of KR...

And the second part itna chotu but koi baat nhe next wala bara chahiye mujhe samji...

Edited by Angel56 - 12 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Angel56
res

phirse rewa

unwaan 😭

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Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

phirse rewa

unwaan 😭

isko paakka unres karungi...promise...😳

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AroraN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Beautifully written 😃

Please update soon

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

res
buhahahaha! mai unres march mai karungi!

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: aditi061
res
buhahahaha! mai unres march mai karungi!

arh!!!!!

the devils 😡 😡

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

arh!!!!!

the devils 😡 😡

i m loving it! tu bhi mujhe aise hi tang karti hai na! so suffer now! and dare u started putting those huge page demands here! let it b till KR only!

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: aditi061

i m loving it! tu bhi mujhe aise hi tang karti hai na! so suffer now! and dare u started putting those huge page demands here! let it b till KR only!

maine kahan koi demand di??? 😕 😕

ab toh kahin aur bhi nahi deti coz all the devils r disappeared from d forum!

I always gave it so dat dey can do deir very fav thingy i.e. spamming 😆