How about if the story went like this...

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Following Zoya's attempt to reunite Asad and Ayaan, Zoya and Asad actually have a conversation about what happened. Zoya shares her own experiences and how she too is looking for her father. The two form a "connection." Zoya realizes in due course that Asad is not a spy (have not seen today's episode), and of course is furious. Nevertheless, Asad offers to help her find her father. Over time these two form a cordial friendship but there is no love from Asad.

Dilshaad presents a rishta for Asad - the perfect girl for him who comes to the house. Asad likes her and thinks she would make an ideal wife. Zoya is not too keen on her and suspects "something is not quite right." Nevertheless she is who Asad wants. Asad and Zoya have no luck in finding her father and the day comes and her visa is ready for expiration.

Asad realizes her frustration and the chance he has to marry an ideal girl, so at the last minute he decides to make the ultimate sacrifice and marries Zoya so she can stay in the country. Dilshaad and Najma are delighted. Zoya is stunned at Asad's offer and begs that he does not ruin his chances of marriage. Asad tells her that other women will come but she might not have a chance again to find her father.

Zoya is taken back at the idea and at first she refuses. For her marriage is not a matter of convenience but a commitment but for Asad this is a kind gesture on his part to help her. She does not want to ruin his life and she wonders what to do. She does not want to tell the truth to Zeenat or her brother-in-law and like in the beginning of the show she prays to God for guidance and inspiration.

She looks at the family...if she marries Asad she gets a wonderful mother-in-law and sister-in-law, a home that she feels a part of and a man who has constantly stood by her. Granted he's serious and stern, and sometimes he is too old-fashioned but she realizes that he is a good human being and loyal and dedicated...and plus he has that six-pack. Zoya realizes that somewhere deep inside she can love...if she does not already...love Asad and that the idea of him even marrying someone else had been bothering her for a while.

Zoya suddenly realizes she is in love and agrees to the marriage but she cannot admit to Asad or anyone that she really does want to be married to him. The marriage takes place and only Asad and Zoya know it is fake. There begins the comedy of Asad and Zoya pretending to be husband and wife but for Zoya it is real. Neither Asad nor Zoya seem to click at first. She's messy; he's too organized. Zoya tries but since Asad is not committed to the relationship, he doesn't invest in it like her.

They do argue...and then one day the marriage simply falls a part. That is when Asad divorces Zoya who is madly in love with him. A devastated Zoya breaks down and Asad realizes his stupidity and wants to marry her again, but this can only happen if Zoya remarries.

Asad turns to Ayaan and he agrees to marry Zoya with the plan to divorce her. It is upon her marriage to Ayaan that Zoya soon finds out that her father is mamujaan. Mamujaan is delighted to find out who is his true daughter. He thinks Asad married and divorced her to get back at him and embraces her with open arms as Ayaan's new wife.

Ayaan is very hospitable to his new wife (his sister-in-law). However, Humaira and Raaziya are furious and make Zoya's life hell. Shireen hates her and find the whole idea of her marrying two brothers revolting. Zoya's life is a nightmare in the house with Humaira hating her new found sister and blaming her for destroying her chances. Zoya tries to confide in her that the marriage is fake and only there for her to be able to remarry Asad.

While married to Zoya, Ayaan develops a crush on his "new wife" and suddenly finds himself in love with her. He doesn't know who to handle these feelings. What makes matters worse is he confides in Humaira with these feelings who decides to take advantage.

She plants a seed in Najma and Dilshaad's mind that Ayaan and Zoya are in love and want to be together. A regretful Asad suddenly feels betrayed by both Ayaan and Zoya and anger ensues in him towards his brother and ex-wife.

Ayaan awakens from his fantasy of marrying his sister-in-law forever and makes the right choice of divorcing her when the time comes but an angry Asad at first does not want to marry her as he thinks she was intimate with Ayaan when Zoya never so much as hugged him. Asad agrees to marry her with the plan of hurting Zoya thinking she is fickle and never sincere in her love for him.

A broken Zoya delighted to return home realizes she must win Asad's love. A broken Ayaan wants his brother back. An angry father - Mamujaan - vows revenge on Asad and Rashid is determined to reconcile with Asad after what has happened.

It is Nikhat and Nuzat who eventually reveal to Asad that Zoya is pure as the snow and that nothing ever happened to Zoya. Will Asad be convinced and willing to love Zoya again and will Dilshaad embrace Zoya again?

As for Ayaan and Humaira, will Humaira be able to forgive Ayaan for leaving her for one year to be with Zoya?

Stay tuned for more:

(I did not proof read this post - too lazy - so sorry for the poor sentence structure).

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Eternal1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice thoughts amazing write up👏...but ayaan and zoya together even for a while😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It will be awesome if Asad marries Zoya so that she can stay in India to find her father..and even after marriage they will share a good friendship, and after then eventually it will be developed into love.
but whatever, audiences prefer only AsYa and I doubt if there will ever Ayan-Zoya marriage happens bcoz many viewers would stop watching the show then.

There is possibility that Ayan will marry Humaira for the sake of his mother's happiness. After marriage, Ayan's heart will grow fonder for humaira.

There are a lot of viewers who love both Asad-Zoya and Ayan-Humaira as couples. And creatives won't ruin it.

Just my POV.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that definitely is a very good story, so well done on that 😃, however, I don't think i personally want that to happen. The idea of marriage being "played" with to such extent, and marrying/divorcing/remarrying, does not have the same impact as a love story. I don't want Ayaan to come between Asya, as I think it would somehow ruin the story..although i would like to see asad jealous, and ayaan being his playful, flirty self, could do that, but for me...nothing serious between ayaan and zoya would be healthy for all relationships.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all for your feedback. I am so not a fan of the Ayaan-Zoya jodi or even marriage. However, the writers are hell bent on doing a triangle. I wrote this in the hopes the writers can still go with their dreams of a triangle but giving us something more bearable than the painfully disturbing synopsis on Zeetv's website. Here Ayaan and Zoya are not only married but in love with the each other. And, as mentioned earlier, there is the horrible risk that the marriage might be consummated.
I sincerely hope that this version might be more popular...my hope is that before divorcing, Zoya and Asad are intimate with each other which makes the whole divorce for Zoya even painful. For Asad his intimacy is not as deep as he thinks Zoya is simply having fun when in fact Zoya loves him deeply and wants to be with him for ever - this was not just a marriage of convenience but of love. For Asad, he was doing her a favor, but had fallen in love with her but thinks she only wanted to marry him to stay in the country and was only having fun.
Asad never understood or appreciated Zoya and the goal of this story is for Asad to finally wake up one day and realizse what a gem he has in Zoya and fight to win her love in the end after he has trodden on it multiple times.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just join the PH please! :$
This was WOW.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!
Really, and I mean really, good prediction :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb angle to the story...you write really nicely
Annu.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow.. couple of things here are completely against Islamic laws..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all for your kind words. This is not a fan fiction but an attempt to figure out how to include the "triangle" without destroying the Asad-Zoya romance.

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