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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii everyone heres the first part.😊
Half of the inspiration comes from Rk and Madhu,😊
But its still true that i still wanted then to elongate that episode, but i dont know why they elongate those plots which shouldn't be. 😕😭

Disclaimer : Apology to anyone who felt hurt by any of my words or phrases used. Hope you forgive me if i have as it was done purely unintentionally. And please do critically criticize my piece, as this is the first time i am posting my work publicly. Hope you all enjoy it.😊

Part 1

Hum ghar aagaye hai Zoya, Abb sab kuch theek hojayega.

His words echoed in his own ears for a long time.

Kya sacchi mein abb sab theek ho jayegaa? He wondered. As he knew he had done something today, which might have costed someone's life. Zoya's Life.

He knew his deed had ashamed Dilshaad and Najma and most of all himself the most. Worst of all, he knew he wasn't worthy of deserving any forgiveness, from anyone of them. Asad Ahmed Khan, a man who could do no wrong, today had made such a decision that he knew he would still regret the better half of his life.

Didn't he want her to go away? Go away from his life and his family, so that he could live peacefully?! So that he could live his CODred life would be left in peace and can control over all the things that happened like before? Yeahh right, controlled his emotions too which he was incapable of doing after the entry of Zoya in his life. So that, that unknown feeling in his heart died, and the thing that sparkled everything in his heart would just stop forever.

She was the biggest Mussibat ever. He did state that. Or was she a musibat to his lifeless heart? As when ever he saw her it had hopes from nowhere to be alive again!! What had he done today?!

Asad Ahmed Khan LOOK What you literary did, shes broken, shes withered, shes DEAD. And you wanted that isn't it? Asad you killed you emotions, your feelings, your heart, and now see You killed her too. Satisfied aren't you Asad?

Battling his thoughts yet all alone once again stood waiting Asad outside Zoya's room, until the doctor came out.

As he came out, all he managed to ask was "Do you think I should shift her to the hospital?"

The doctor replied "Mr. Khan that wont be nee'"

"Are you seriously sure that wont be needed? X-rays and check ups and . . ." Asad cut in.

" Mr Khan she has no severe injuries apart from the slashes on her hands. She needs plenty of rest and please take good care of her. You know she is still in shoc--- "

"Are you really sure that we don't need to shift her to the hospital?" Asad not yet convinced from the doctors words.

"Yes, Mr Khan, there's nothing to be worried about. Only the IV Drip needs a regular checking. I am sending a nurs---"

"Noo!! I cant, I mean we can take care of her!" Asad protested.

Meanwhile Dilshaad came out of the room and joined the conversation.

"We can take care of Zoya Dr. Sharma, but are you sure that she wont be needing the hospital trip?" Dilshaad asked with full of concern.

"Yes, Mrs. Khan, Zoya just needs a bit of extra care. And there wont be any problem hopefully tonight, If there is you know whom to contact." Dr Sharma smiled.

Long after the doctor had left, Asad still found no reason to be convinced of. His Ammi and his Tamater had gone so red in fear and sadness that he knew he would cry any moment now. Let alone the reason that he was himself behind all this. He was the one who himself pushed himself into the mouths of flaming fire, and if he wasn't there today, Zoya would have got a life worse than death! All he thought was Had he really Turned into a MONSTER?

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So how was it? Do let me know pleaseee


Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago


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darkangel93 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww poor asad! no he isnt a monster... hope zoya makes im feel better!!! nice update!
WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeaa😊 😊
Thanks everyone 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...very nice update dear. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it!! Pls continue and update soon!😊
Edited by ps62 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazing dear! plz continue soon!
saruu. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue continue continue continue continue continue PLEASE CONTINUE RITE NOW!!!
I LOVE these kind of stories :P
Aww, I really like the way how asad kept interrupting the doctor and asking him if she needed to go to the hospital <3
He called himself a monster.
It broke my heart. </3
Could you pm me WHEN you update?
Please?
Oh, and if I forgot to tell you, you need to continue :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, I felt so bad for Asad ! Love the way you described the turmoil within him. Babe, make it a little longer next time ? Unless you plan to update it every 2-3 days ? 😆

Keep writing ! This fic will really do very very well considering that you started off SO well with the besttt part of the show so far :D


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Rachel
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*super elated*
Ohh my gooosshh thank you sooo much everyone!! this means seriously a world to me 🤗
Thankss sooo much 😳

AussieChick : The monster inspirations comes from PKYEK 😃😉😳 every time i see AsYa coming closer, on Asad's face its always written "Mat aaoo mere kareeb Aag hoon main Jaal jaogi" 😆😳
Thanks soo much 😊

Rachel : a Big Thank you 😊 😳and yeahh dear, i will either make it larger or continue posting every 2days 😃

aditi061, ps62, Archi02, darkangel93, Eternal1234, _Oishi_ : Thank you sooo much <3 🤗

Rach. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Humptyyy ! What is your name ? I dont want to be calling you everytime :P

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