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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry that this chapter is going to be an extremely short one but I have a party to attend so I couldn't write more. I'll update it soon though. Hope you guys enjoy it. See ya!!😊


Next morning Asad looked up from his paper as he saw zoya come towards the dining table. Zoya stopped when she saw him but then quickly feigned indifference and took her seat. Dilshad came with rotis and kept them on the table.

Zoya: good morning phupi!

Dilshad: good morning zoya.

dilshad was happy to see zoya in her good spirits. Just then najima came and zoya looked at her and smiled.

Zoya: good morning tamatar.

Asad looked at zoya and zoya looked at him.

Najima: good morning zoya. Good morning bhaijaan.

Asad: good morning.

Najima: main apki coffee lati hoon.

Zoya watched as najima went to get asad's coffee.

Zoya took the roti's and moved forward to pull the bowl of sabzi towards her. But before her hand could touch it she felt asad's hand grip hers. She looked up at him surprised.

Asad: bowl garam hai. Aapka hath jal jayaga.

Zoya: oh. Okay.

She had expected him to leave her hand but when he didn't she looked at him confused. She signalled him with her eyes to bring his attention to the fact that he was still holding her hand. When asad saw what she was doing he was confused. He looked down and realised what she was saying and hurriedly let go of her hand. Both were feeling awkward. Asad picked his paper up again and zoya ended up putting two more rotis in her plate. Asad looked at her and was about to stop her when she looked up and realised what she was doing and started putting the rotis from her plate back into the container. Asad didn't know what to do. He started to tell her not to do it but then stopped himself because he knew he would hurt her again. he facepalmed himself and that made zoya more nervous.

Zoya held the spoon to serve herself sabzi and ended up splling a little on the table. Again!

Asad got up with a start unable to see this anymore and that startled zoya so much that the spoon flew from her hand and went and landed on the asad's shirt. Zoya's hand flew to her face covering her mouth. Asad closed his eyes and drew a deep breath in to calm down. He opened his eyes, looked up at the ceiling and walked away. Zoya sighed with relief. But suddenly asad came back and zoya looked at him like a helpless kitten. He glared at her as he grabbed his coat from the back of the chair and walked away. Zoya held her breadth till she saw the door close behind him and then she let it out.

Asad was in the office when he got a call from ayaan. He rubbed his index ffinger on the bridge between his eyesbrows in uncertainity. He answered the call. he heard ayaan's frantic voice.

Asad: ayaan? Ayaan calm down. Batao kya hua?

Ayaan: bhai. Bhai jaldi ayiye. Yahan ghar pe gadbad ho gayi hai.

Asad: ayaan yeh kya keh rahe ho. Mein waha nahi aa sakta. Yeh tum'

Ayaan: bhai hasina bee yahan aa gayi hai. Aur..aur who aapka birth certificate le kar aayi hai.

Asad froze. His birth certificate? Where did she get that? And that meant she now knew his relationship to ayaan and nikhat. He felt like his heart had stopped beating. Nikhat, her marriage? Everything was going to be ruined. His sister's happiness was going to be destroyed.

Asad cut the call without even bothering to answer ayaan back and sat on the counch. His head held in his hands as he tried to stop it from swirling.

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Edited by Ayuzawa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
akhir aa hi gaye haseena apni aukat pe
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update yar... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mindblowing <3
Short but worth reading, hope Haseena falls off a bridge😆
Continue Soon
P.S enjoy the party
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Posted: 12 years ago
@crazy4KASH_AR

was my post that bad that you gave a didn't have words to comment?
lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.
I loved the whole dining table scene a lot.
I loved Asad's concern for Zoya so much.He forgot that he was holding her hand because he was lost in her face..
Aww!! So cute..
The whole roti and then spoon flying scene was hilarious.
Poor Asad's shirt got ruined.
Zoya's oops reaction and Asad's silent treatment were mindblowing.
Ayaan's phone call is so scary.
I wish I could kill Haseena bi..
I hope Asad may set all the things right soon.
Plz update the next part soon with lots of ASYA scenes.
Take care!
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm and interesting update :D can't wait to read what happens next

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Siddhi I posted a good long comment.I wonder where it disappeared.I'm so sorry for that.I noticed the blank post now..
I'm re-posting my reviews..
Well this part was brilliant as usual.
II loved Asad's concern for Zoya a lot.He got lost in her so much that he forgot that he had her hands in his.Awe!! So cute.Zoya was also surprised by his thoughtfulness.
Zoya is such a messy lady.The spoon flying scene was too much for Asad.Poor guy was already controlling himself from showing any disapproval.But then that was the limit.He stood up and poor Zoya got scared and shut her mouth.I love this reaction of hers sooo much.
I loved his silent treatment to her and his glare while taking back the coat.
Haseena is such a pain.She has got the birth certificate now.
I hope Nikhat's engagement may remain safe.
It was good that Ayaan called Asad and told him everything.I wish Asad may control the situation somehow.
This part was amazing.
Plz update the next part soon.
Take care!
love u
Asma
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Posted: 12 years ago

Lucky how I and the actual serial ended up at the same spot yet again. helps a lot to write the story further. And again thanks to all of you who commented and liked my story. Hope you continue to encourage me further also. and again sorry for such a short post. i have to go out today also.

Also a warning. This part does not have zoya in it. Sorry for that but this is all about nikhat, imraan, asad and ayaan. So please don't expect anything romantic. Its all heartbreak type. I wanted to finish this as fast as possible because I personally don't like rona dhona but seems like when I start writing it becomes really hard to not express every tiny aspect of the characters' feelings. I hope it is not too boring to you all.



Haseena was standing in the presence of all the people present for the engagement. She was visibly angry. She had holding a paper in her hand which she had clearly told to be asad ahmed khan's birth certificate. And this had caused all the people present take a kneen interest in what she was about to say. Rashid expected that her next attack would be aimed at him but instead she announced that the engagement was cancelled. Everything was crumbled. Nikhat had frozen and shereen had held onto her arms, tears streaming down her cheeks. Razia came forward to handle the situation but haseena told her off. She grabbed Imran's arm and started to drag him out.

But Imran stopped right at the door. He pulled his hand out of his mother's grip and turned around to see his would have been in-laws with a hope that whatever reason his mother had broken the engagement for was not true. But their heads were bent down. He didn't know why his mother was accusing them of treachery and deceiving but she wouldn't tell what it was. But apparently his in-laws knew what they were being accused of and not a single one was trying to deny it. So they had lied and his mother was not wrong. He felt betrayed but still he held on to hope and looked at nikhat, the one he fell in love for her simplicity and sincerity.

Nikhat was not even listening to anything after her engagement was declared broken. Just till that moment everything had been perfect but now everything seemed like a nightmare. Her worst nightmare. She had been staring at the ground for what seemed like hours. But when she finally looked up her eyes met his. She could see the pain in imran's eyes. he was looking at her hoping for something but what she couldn't register it. His eyes were searching hers for answer. He could see pain and hopelessness in her eyes. but he wasn't looking for that. He was hurt by it. It pained him to see those eyes which always were shy to look at him filled with unshed tears but what pained him more was that she was also not denying it. Had she lied to him too? That was what was eating at him. He barely noticed as his mother pulled him out of the door. But till he was out he was looking back at her, her eyes hoping that she would just tell him to stop, to hear her out. If she would just say that he would not care about anything and listen to her and try to understand her but only if she stopped him. But she didn't.

Nikhat had seen him be pulled out and her mind was screaming at her to call out to him. To tell him to stop. But she had never learned to speak out loud. Her mother's hands on her were feeling like chains. She looked helplessly as he was pulled out. She also wouldn't say anything because somewhere she was scared. Scared that he would not understand her and the reasons for her to have been quite about this. She was not ashamed of her relationship to her eldest brother but she was scared that he would say something that would hurt the sister in her so much that never again she would be able to forgive him. And that scared her. She didn't want to be unable to forgive him.

Asad had tried to call ayaan as he was on his way to the house. He didn't want to go there. He did not know what he would do when he got there but right now the only thing he was concerned about was his sister. He had to be there for her. He reached infront of the house. But when he looked up at the gate everything came crashing down on him. His ammi crying, his father walking out the door, he holding on to his mother's dupatta. His head was hurting from all those memories but he forced himself to think of nikhat. He had to go there. If not anything then be there for her in her hard time. he walked in the gates and his heart sank. The entire place seemed quite. Too quite. Not a single sound. His legs became numb. Was he late? He didn't want to think of it.

All were looking at nikhat who was standing frozen, tears were falling from her eyes on to the carpet. Ayaan was was fidgeting to just go to her and comfort her but he didn't know what to do. Her tears were slashing at his heart. Nuzat went to nikhat and humeira followed. Both held her and started. Mamu asked them to take her to her room. Her dadi went to her and wipped her tears and led her all the four women to the room. Razia looked at them shattered. She was about to say something but froze as she looked at the door. All who were looking at her followed her gaze and froze. The only word that broke the silence was, "bhai". Ayaan who had been on the verge of tears ran up to his brother and hugged him. Rashid's gaze softened. But mamu and razia glared as they saw asad and ayaan part.

Thank you for reading and take care.😊

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Edited by Ayuzawa - 12 years ago

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