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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG i just read the whole FF it was so good i wished there were more parts to read Simply loved reading every scene was so perfectly written
u r such a wonderful writer


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Posted: 12 years ago
I just love you for writing this superb fanfic...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: senorzorro12

OMG OMG i just read the whole FF it was so good i wished there were more parts to read Simply loved reading every scene was so perfectly written
u r such a wonderful writer



thanks a lot. and don't worry by morning i will be posting the next part. hope you enjoy it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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I only get to use internet for a few mins nowadays which is why I've saved your FF on my USB so I cud read it even when I'm not on net ;) so will comment when I'm done reading.<3


omg! thats great. hope you enjoy it. and after you finish reading it tell me what you think of it. even criticism is welcome.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KoolKatz

I just love you for writing this superb fanfic...


thanks a lot. hope you like the next part too.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


Okay I know it has been a long time but I had to take time off for some specific reasons. Anyways I have written the next update. Hope everyone likes it. Now can be a little boring as zoya gets to know ayaan's family. Btw love you guys for being so patient and encouraging. You people are the best readers in the world. Love you guys loads.❤️❤️



Najima was seated on the bed as zoya hugged her sideways to subdue her sobs. Zoya was very angry. Najima had explained to her everything about ayaan and their relation. She could not believe that the man she had considered to be her dost had done such a thing to her phupi. She knew divorces happened. She practically saw many of them happen in America but she was of a firm belief that once commited to someone the commitment should be hounoured till one's last breath. And to leave your wife for another woman with the responsibility of two children was unforgivable. Now she knew why mr. khan was the way he was. And she could connect to his grief. She could feel his pain and anger. But then she had seen Rashid burn with the guilt. She had not been able to stop herself from trying to relieve him of his pain and burden.

Zoya decided that she would go and talk to Rashid. If he was still burning from inside then there had to be a reason for his actions 17 years ago. She got up as najima went to the wash room and set out determined to talk to Rashid.

Razia was pacing in her room. She had never wanted for dilshad and her children to come to her house but now not only were they in her house, asad was actually sharing the room with ayaan. She had been against it but there was no choice left. Also her husband reasoned that the only reason they did not want ayaan to meet asad was because they did not want the world to know about their connection but now that everything was out in open they could not do anything. Razia said to her self.

Razia: chahe jo kuch bhi ho mein dilshad ka saya tak Rashid miyan aur shireen ki khushiyon par padne nahi dungi. Dilshad hamesha se dusri aurat thi aur hamesha rahegi.

Zoya came out searching for Rashid when she saw him sitting in the garden. She went to him. She saw that he was deep in thoughts so she cleared her throat. Rashid looked up taken by surprise and smiled at her but she did not return the smile. Rashid understood that now zoya knew everything. He sighed.

Rashid: kuch bhu kehne se pehle yahan tashrif rakho aur meri baat suno.

Zoya sat down next to him and looked ahead waiting for him to continue.

Rashid: main janta hoon ki satra saal pehle main eek bohot badi galti ki thi. Aur vo thi dilshad ka saath chodna. Ab tak apne aap ko main maaf nahi kar saka. Aur isiliye main yeh umeed bhi nahi karta ki koi aur bhi mujhe maaf kare.

Zoya turned her face to look at him and at that moment all she could see was a man desperately trying to rise above the despair he was sinking into. Her heart went for him but he had commited a huge crime. How could she feel sympathy for him?

Zoya: aap ne jo kiya vo galat tha. Shayad aapki apni vajah thi par apne jo kiya vo bhool nahi galti thi.

Rashid: janta hoon. Lekin vo bhool karna meri majbori thi.

Zoya: ji?

Rashid: kuch nahi. Par zoya main abhi bhi dilshad se maafi mangna chahta hoon. Janta hoon ki ab shayad tum bhi mera saath nahi dena chahti.

Zoya: aap chahte hai kimain abbhi apki madat karu?

Rashid nodded his head.

Zoya: thik hai main aapki madat karungi.

Rashid looked at her surprised and full of gratitude.

Zoya: mujhe galat maat samjhiye. Main aapki nahi balki meri phupi ki madat kar rahi hoon.

Rashid looked at her confused. Zoya sighed.

Zoya: jante hai main india kyun aayi. Kyunki main apne past ko face karke zindagi mein aage badna chahti hoon. Aur main chahti hoon ki phupi aur mr. khan bhi yehi kare. Apne zindagi mein aage bade. Aur vo yeh tab tak nahi kar sakte jab tak vo apne andar ke ghuse aur cho ko bahar nahi phek dete. Isiliye unka aapko maaf karna bohot zaruri hai.

Rashid smiled. For a young girl zoya was very matured to him. He nodded as he felt a new ray of hope touch his heart.

Asad entered ayaan's room and the first thing he saw were his clothes on the bed. Asad pinched the bridge of his nose in frustration as ayaan quickly tried to make an excuse and pick the clothes up to stufft hem in his cupboard. But when he opened the cupboard an entire avalanche of clothes fell on him pinning him to the ground. Asad quickly sprinted towards ayaan and started searching for him inside the clothes and came up with ayaan's hand. He helped him to his feet and glared at him. Ayaan quickly caught hold of his ears in a gesture to apologize and asad's irritation melted away in a second.

Dilshad and najima were unpacking their stuff when they heard a knock on the door. They both turned to see shereen at the door with towels.

Shereen: kya main andar aa sakti hoon.

Dilshad: haan.

Shereen came in and placed the towels on the bed. She was still looking down.

Shereen: yeh towels hai. Aapko fresh hona hoga na. aaj nikhat ki sagai hai toh aapko bhi toh tayar ho kar niche aana hai.

Najima: ji hum aa jayenge.

Shereen nodded and started to walk out. When she reached the door she heard dilshad call her.

Dilshad: shereen. Towels ke liye shukriya.

Shereen turned halfway and nodded her head and walked out.

i know this is short but i will try to write the next update by tomorrow so i think this should be enough for now. also this one is a bit boring but i have to show the relationships between both the families before zoya inflluences them. so this part was necessary. please do tell me how it was. also if you think that i could have made this better in some way then tell me so that i keep that in mind the next time i write.😊

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part 14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75425925

Edited by Ayuzawa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
u r an amazing writer and we love u too for sharing such awesome ff on ASYA...it was a short update but was so good they way u described is really good and love the way this two family are understanding each other except RAZIA...plzz updt soon will be waiting to read more tomorow and HAPPY REPUBLIC DAY...<3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

u r an amazing writer and we love u too for sharing such awesome ff on ASYA...it was a short update but was so good they way u described is really good and love the way this two family are understanding each other except RAZIA...plzz updt soon will be waiting to read more tomorow and HAPPY REPUBLIC DAY...<3

thank you and happy republic day to you too.😊 i will try to update as soon as possible.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm!
And thanks for the update, it was really good!
Hope all your problems are solved!
~Sophie ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey I JUST started your FF and I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon and pm me for the update

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