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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Happy New Year dear.
This ff is beautiful.
I love it a lot.
The whole police station scene and Asad's concern for Zoya was so wonderful.
Asad and Zoya can fight over anything.
Asad didn't wish Zoya to answer the awkward questions of police inspector while Zoya answered all the questions in order to satisfy her self-confidence and independence..
I was so angry on Asad.He left the girl midway in the late hour of night just because he could not control his temper.
Allaj miyan what's wrong with jahanpanah.inke gusse se jwalamukhi na phat jaye kahin pe.

I was left amused by Ayaan and Zoya's scene.I loved it sooo much.
The way Ayaan cheered up Zoya and gave her hope and confidence was mindblowing.I loved this scene from the bottom of my heart.This scene was serious,logical and funny at the same time.

Back at home,Zoya's entry was awesome.Asad's reaction to it was very good.
I loved the way Asad tried to make things normal between him n Zoya by deliberately picking up a fight.
ASYA are sooo cute.
I love the way Asad is all worried about Zoya.It's so nice to know that you are planning to get Zoya out from her depression by Asad's help.
Looking forward to the next part eagerly.
You are a very talented dear...
Don't feel low about the number of likes and comments.People would surely come around in sometime.
Being a newbie is not a problem dear.
IF is very welcoming and we all love to have you as a part of Qubool Hai and IF family.
I hope you may make lots of friends here.I'm Asma.
I was having my exams coz of which I used to give one liners.Now I'll try to post a bit longer comments.

Take care!
love u

hey asma!
thank you so much. and my name is siddhi.
i loved you detailed comment an i am glad you liked the whole thing and understood it well.
and about the comments. i was not feeing low about it. in fact i mentioned it because i wanted all of the people who had commented to know that it means a lot to me and that each comment is worth millions to me. thanks for being so supportive of me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Loved the update and thanks for the pm :D


Nikki <3


you are welcome. and i am glad you liked it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Happy New Year dear.
This ff is beautiful.
I love it a lot.
The whole police station scene and Asad's concern for Zoya was so wonderful.
Asad and Zoya can fight over anything.
Asad didn't wish Zoya to answer the awkward questions of police inspector while Zoya answered all the questions in order to satisfy her self-confidence and independence..
I was so angry on Asad.He left the girl midway in the late hour of night just because he could not control his temper.
Allaj miyan what's wrong with jahanpanah.inke gusse se jwalamukhi na phat jaye kahin pe.

I was left amused by Ayaan and Zoya's scene.I loved it sooo much.
The way Ayaan cheered up Zoya and gave her hope and confidence was mindblowing.I loved this scene from the bottom of my heart.This scene was serious,logical and funny at the same time.

Back at home,Zoya's entry was awesome.Asad's reaction to it was very good.
I loved the way Asad tried to make things normal between him n Zoya by deliberately picking up a fight.
ASYA are sooo cute.
I love the way Asad is all worried about Zoya.It's so nice to know that you are planning to get Zoya out from her depression by Asad's help.
Looking forward to the next part eagerly.
You are a very talented dear...
Don't feel low about the number of likes and comments.People would surely come around in sometime.
Being a newbie is not a problem dear.
IF is very welcoming and we all love to have you as a part of Qubool Hai and IF family.
I hope you may make lots of friends here.I'm Asma.
I was having my exams coz of which I used to give one liners.Now I'll try to post a bit longer comments.

Take care!
love u


red: oh well i had not meant for it to be night. i think i showed the whole day and it was somewhere close to lunch time when he left her. i don't know if i goofed up because i continued the story after so long.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

hey asma!
thank you so much. and my name is siddhi.
i loved you detailed comment an i am glad you liked the whole thing and understood it well.
and about the comments. i was not feeing low about it. in fact i mentioned it because i wanted all of the people who had commented to know that it means a lot to me and that each comment is worth millions to me. thanks for being so supportive of me.



Siddhi you really deserve appreciations for this wonderful writing stuff.
I'm in love with this ff.
I read about how you feel about the comments.I'm a writer and I understand what effect the number of likes have upon all the authors.That is why I simply wanted to tell you that in the beginning this is what usually happens but slowly more and more people start liking the ffs.I'm sure the number of likes and comments will slowly increase.

I just want you to be happy and cheerful about this ff and forum.
I hope you are having a good time over here.
Take care!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Amazing update!!!
Loved AsYa in the update...
Happy New Year! :D
Pls do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR



Siddhi you really deserve appreciations for this wonderful writing stuff.
I'm in love with this ff.
I read about how you feel about the comments.I'm a writer and I understand what effect the number of likes have upon all the authors.That is why I simply wanted to tell you that in the beginning this is what usually happens but slowly more and more people start liking the ffs.I'm sure the number of likes and comments will slowly increase.

I just want you to be happy and cheerful about this ff and forum.
I hope you are having a good time over here.
Take care!


thanks a lot again and i understood what you said. i really like the way you write though myself. i mean not only here but you post and analysis. i find myself really looking forward to reading them.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Happy New Year
Wish you all the best
Really loved this update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Beautiful yaar <3
I loved the Ayaan and Zoya part
Asad worried about Zoya...imaginable😆
Continue Soon
Thanks for the PM buddy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
hey i love your story and i think you're a great writer. please add me to your pm list and have a happy new year

Ashi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: can_pak

hey i love your story and i think you're a great writer. please add me to your pm list and have a happy new year


Ashi


hey ashi. thanks. and i have added you to my buddy list. my name is siddhi.

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