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@KSGforever08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

loved it thank u 4 postin😃

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice, add me to the pm list

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faye.

@ohsehun.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Can I just say that I absolutely love love loved this? I mean it was written beautifully. And this is just the first chapter but you just have such a way with words that I'm now dying to read the rest.

When I saw the word 'raven', I immediately thought 'Vampire diaries. It has to be vampire diaries...' 😆 and then there's the note saying that it is inspired by it. 😆

Well, since you seem to be a Delena fan, I'm hoping it's gonna be biased to Delena...And our hottie Asad is like our other hottie Damon. 😳

So anyway, just wondering about that whole 'undead' thing and how it'd work. But I'm pretty sure you will nail this FF.

I actually thought you wrote this better than LJ Smith...You're a brill writer.

I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter.

Faye x

Edited by ..Labyrinth.. - 11 years ago

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

sounding gr8 so far plz continue soon😊

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Priyanka!! :D
When I read the words "Grave" and "Raven", I was like: VAMPIRE DIARIES!! :P
Haha!
Okay I really liked the intro.. Quite interesting..
Would love to read more..
and oh!
This is the first FF i'm reading on AsYa! :P
Do PM me :)
Love,
Rhea

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Farhana

@risingsea101

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Beautifully written Priyanka

the intro was to die for, especially how you detailed everything!

Inspire by Vampire Diaries, must be awesome!

Continue soon <3

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Priii I miss you! How've you been?!
Congrats on finishing grade 12 you lucky bitch 🤣 I've got like 4 more months to go 😆

I don't watch QH so I probably won't be following this FF but update your AR stuff sooon okay? :P

xoxo

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey Priyanka! Congrats on the new FF :D Finally getting to read you work after such a long time. I really liked it, the beginning seems interesting so waiting for the next part :D BTW even I thought of TVD when that raven part came :P Continue very soon and do update the AR ff's super soon :D Keep up the great work :)