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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you guys for all the encouragement
Continuing

Part 2:
The rays of the sun peeked into the room, revealing a not-so-clean bedroom. Books on the edge of the bed, shoes one on the sofa, while the other on the floor, a box of pizza, with a couple of slices left in it, the room was a total mess.
On the middle of the bed lay Zoya Farooki. (Brief Intro)Zoya was a modern girl who changes with time, follows all trends, but one thing of hers that doesn't change was her values, and what she was taught by her elder sister. She was born to a middle class family and at the age of 5, her parents died in a car accident, from then on Zoya and her sister, who was 12 years older than her, were left to face the world by themselves, they face though times until her jiju entered their lives.
Zoya is a 22 year old student at the Fashion Institute of Technology, and is at her final year
Her eyes opened hearing the constant ringing of the alarm clock, she sat up frustrated with the clock and slammed it off, she pulled the sheets off as her feet touch the cool floor she quickly slipped her feet into her slippers. Another day of her boring life...well that's what she thought of it as she headed to her walk in wardrobe, to find something appropriate to wear.

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He steeped into the dining room to find his mother and sister preparing the breakfast table
Asad- Good Morning Ammi, Najma
Dilshaad+Najma- Good Morning
Asad Sat down and as usual began reading the newspaper as his mother and sister started serving everything.
Najma-Bhai....
Asad put his paper down and looked to his sister
Asad- Kya hua Najma?
Najma- Woh... college meh meri final year hai toh meh sochrahi thi ki...kyun na meh fashion coarse ke liye appyly karloo...
Asad sat quiet for a moment, she knew very well how much he hated girls with fashion, especially modern day, where they walk around half naked
He looked to his right, where his mom stood, and she signaled him to give it a thought
Asad- Najma, tum kya sach meh yeh coarse karna chhatii ho?
Najma stood shocked, was her brothergiving her an open opportunity?
Najma- Ji Bhai...agar apko problem na ho
Asad nodded
Asad- I'll think about it
He went back to reading the newspaper
A smile spread onto her lips, now he will surly let her apply

Thats it! How was is? Do leave your oppinions and I've sent a pm to those who asked <3
TheSexyDevil thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Awesome
finally zoya came
loved it
continue soon
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1210

Awesome
finally zoya came
loved it
continue soon


Thank you <3
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice please add me to the pm list and update soon
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The next update will be coming in a couple of hours guys<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hey dear
awesome part
loved it yaar
thanks for pm
plzz update soon
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys I really wanna say sorry for the delay, My computer is broken and I am using my sisters, but all my saved ideas are on my computer😭
hopefully I'll get it fixed by Sunday, so I'll definitely post!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part
plz cont soon
and dont frgt to pm me
gn tc ks hsd
Posted: 12 years ago
#20
pretty well written.👏.. waiting for next update

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