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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanx

Will update soon

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Thanx

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Thanx

Am working on the next prt

delayed as it has to be as awsum as AsYa

read on will update later

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry guys bahut intezaar karwaya hai

will try and update by late evening

have to come up with something AsYa style awsum

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update eagerly..😊
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Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

waiting for the update eagerly..😊

Sorry for update delay

haven't finished editing

Will post nxt part by tom morn surely

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome FF. Looking forward to the next update!!
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Originally posted by: JULIEL

Awesome FF. Looking forward to the next update!!

Thanx

Will update soon

Need to edit and make part more awsum

comments and compliments welcome

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awsm update.
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Part 17

Zoya went with the girls to the personal lounge booked by Asad. There she would tell them everything about her and Khan Sahib's relationship keeping intimate details a secret. Zoya told them how she had first met Asad and he had accidently hit her with his car. On the fateful day they had their first argument. She told them how she and Asad kept bumping into one another and always ended up arguing. No matter how hard they had tried to stay away from each other but Allah had other plans for them. They were like two ends of a pole. She had moved in with Najma, Dilshaad phuppi and Mr. Asad Ahmad Khan. The same pattern continued. Asad and Zoya had kept on arguing and getting into each other's hair. They had a situation like Zoya proposed a task and Asad disposed it and vice versa. They never saw eye to eye on anything.

"Nuzz aap pooch rahi thi na ki kya humaari love marriage thi? Nahi. Humaari arranged maariage thi jisme ab bahut saari mohaobbat shumaar ho gayi hai. Humein dekhkar lagta nahi na ki humaari arranged marriage hai par it's the truth. Mere jiju aur Dilshaad ammi ke bhai dost hain is liye main ghar rehne aayi thi kyunki mujhe Bhopal mein bahut zarrori kaam tha. Ammi aur aapi ko laga ki main aur aapke bhaijaan ek doosre ke liye perfect hain is liye humaara nikaah karwa diya. Main har roz unka shukriya karti hoon ki unhone mujhe is nikaah ke liye manaya. I am the lickiest woman on earth because aapke bhaijaan mujhse mohabbat karte hain."

Nikhat heard Zoya say such sweet things about Asad. She too wanted the same kind of loving relation with Imraan. "Nahi Nikhat main nahi chahti ki tumhaara aur Imran miya ka rishta humaare jaisa ho. No no don't get me wrong humaare beech sab theek hai actually more than theek hai. Touch wood. Par Nikhat humein yahan tak pahuchne mein bahut waqt laga. Mujhe aapke bhai se mohabbat ho gayi thi par wo izhaare ishq se katrate the. Wo unke apne reasons the. Har pal main tadapti rahi unse wo alfaaz sunne ke liye. Wo tadapte rahe ki main unki baat bina kahe hi smjhoon. Iss beech hum dono lade jhagde chillaye aur bahut bahut aasoon bahaye. Wo tadap wo intezaar khuda kisi ko na de. Isliye main nahi chahti ki tum Imraan miya ke izhaare ishq ke liye tadpo. So I don't want your relation to be like ours."

"Zoya bhabhi aap to saalon se NY mein rehti hain. Aapke khayalaat kitne modern hain. Humne aapko jeans mein bhi dekha tha. Aap itni independent hain phir bhi aap..?" "Phir bhi main what? Nuzz." "Aaap Asad bhai ka naam nahi leti. Aap unhe .." "Shh sirf main unhe Khan Sahib kehti hoon aur kehne ka haq rakhti hoon. Wo kya hain na ki main bhale hi modern hoon par aapke jo 'zille ilahi' types bhai hai na wo to abhi bhi 17th century mein rehte hain. Unhe pasand nahi ki main unki biwi apne shauhar ka yaniki unka naam loon. Ha ha ha. No seriously wo kya hai na jab hum mile the toh main unhe Mr.Khan ya Mr. Asad Ahmad Khan kehti thi. (Najma laughs as she remembers all names Z bhabhi used to call her Asad bhai by) Kabhi unhe seriously unke naam se nahi bulaya aur bas phir nikaah ke baad bhi kabhi aadat nahi hui unhe sirf unke naam se pukaarne ki. Tab unhe aise formally pukaarna thoda ajeeb laga. Maine unhe pehli baar Khan Sahib kaha tha gusse mein humaari shaadi ke baad ki first fight mein toh wo gusse mein the but he smiled thodasa tabse main unhe aise hi pukarti hoon."

Najma, Nuzz, Nikhat (N3) and Humaira were like WOW. How romantic? Najma and Nuzzrat had got on like wild fire. They teased Zoya and Nikhat. One was married and the other was about to be married. They wanted juicy details of Asad and Zoya's life. "Kya bhabhi sab upar upar se hi bataya. Kuch romantic aur filmy nahi hai batane ko? Kuch aisa jo serial and filmon mein hota hai. Kiss shiss waali baaten bhi bataiye na. aap toh kuch nahi bata rahi aur bhai thodi batayenge." She pouted. Nuzz was 16 and such things were very exciting to her. Najma and Humaira made her understand that it was not her age to ask about such things. Harmless teasing and innocent questions were enjoyed and answered by Zoya. She was having fun with the girls. This was a totally different atmosphere for her. Asad had booked a private lounge specialy for them so that there they could have fun and be themselves without being pointed at.

At home she had adapted to Asad's rules which had been upgraded far more after she had moved in. She loved her life. Asad's rules had not binded her but had moulded her into becoming more cautious and mature. She had come to understand his rules and regulations better as she grew to know him. He was no Hitler as she thought of him initially but was the man of the house and had to be protective. It was like second nature to him. He was never protected so he understood the need to protect the ppl he loved and thus he used to lay so many rules and regulations.

Najma and Nuzz were teasing Zoya, Nikhat and Humaira by taking names of their respective spouses. Humaira became sad when they linked her with Ayaan. She ran out of there. Nikhat and Zoya followed her. Zoya told Najma to keep Nuzz busy while they talk to Humaira. Humaira was sitting on a swing set in the garden. Tears rolled down her cheeks. Nikhat and Zoya ask her why she was sad.

Nikhat knew that Humaira liked Ayaan. She told this to Zoya. "Yeh toh acchi baat hai. Tum Ayaan ko bachpan se jaanti ho. Tumhaare ammi abbu bhi use tumhaare liye zaroor pasand karenge. You have to tell them. You and they both know him and the family too. You are related par ye toh humaare mazhab mein allowed hai." "Par bhabhi Ayaan bhi toh mujhe pasand karne chahiye na? Mujhe yaad hai maine unse unke pasand ki ladki ke bare mein poocha tha aur main bilkul waisi nahi hoon. Unhe toh modern ladkiyaan pasand hain."

Zoya and Nikhat simulteanously tell her," Humaira ladke paagal hote hain. Unhe khud nahi pata hota unhe kya chahiye. Hum ladkiyon ko unhe realize karwaana padta hai." Zoya was speaking from experience because Asad's one such secret had been revealed in front of her. "Nikhat Baji, Zoya bhabhi ab tak ammi abbu bhi humaara nikaah karwaana chahte the par Ayaan ki gair zimmedaarana harkaton ki wajah se wo shayad apna faisla badalna chahte hain. Wo koi kaam nahi karte maana ke Allah ke fazal se abbu aur Rahid phuppa ke paas sab hai par ek ladki apne shauhar ki kammai se hi ghar chalana chahti hai. Mujhe bahut bura lagta hai jab sab unhe nikamma kehte hain par unhe koi farak nahi padta. Aise mein agar hum dono ek doosre ko pasand kare bhi toh kya ho jayega?" Humaira shared her worry with the two.

Zoya decided to talk to Asad about this. He was the one who always sheltered Ayaan and the results have to be suffered by Humaira. They tell her to calm down and Zoya promises her to find a solution. They see Najma and Nuzz approach them so change the topic. Ayaan and Asad all this time had been engrossed in their brotherly game of tennis. Ayaan was losing but Asad let him win like always. Zoya saw this and shook her head in disappointment. Asad saw this and was definitely question her about it.

Asad and Zoya leave everyone in the lawn having fun. They come in their room. Before Zoya could complain about him letting Ayaan win the tennis match Asad told her,"Zoya B Ayaan mera chota bhai hai. Baccha hai wo haar jaata toh use bura lagta. Main use haarte hue nahi dekh sakta. So I let him win the game. Kya galat kiya maine?" "Khan Sahib Ayaan ab chota nahi hai. Wo ab baccha nahi hai. He is a grown man almost the age to be married. Aap use tennis ki match jeetne de sakte hain par uski zindagi ki match wo haar raha hai. Aap use itna protect kar rahe hai ki wo uski zindagi ki sabse ahem cheez kho raha hai. Wo aappar is kadar dependent hai ki koi aur uspar dependent hone se katra rahi hai."

Asad was confused. Zoya sat him down and said,"Humaira Ayaan ko pasand karti hai. Suddique sahib unka nikaah karana chahte the par ab wo Ayaan ko gair zimmedar maante hue apne faisle par dobara soch rahe hain. Life ki choti badi har problem main aapka Ayaan ke saath hona, Is not wrong but aap use kisi bhi mushkil ka saamna nahi karne dete That is wrong. Aap ekdum se use akela mat chod dijiye to face life and its problems alone par dheere dheere use problems ka saamna karne de. He needs to grow up use kaam karna chahiye. Koi ladki aise shaks se nikaah nahi karegi jo Pocket money leta ho apne abbu se ya jiski har farmayish uske bade bhai poori kar de uske kehne se pehle. Kya Ayaan nikaah ke baad Humaira ko tohfa dene ke liye ya use date par le jaane ke liye aapse ya apne ammi abbu se paise mangega? Uske bacchae honge tab kya karega? Humaira ko ye sab kaisa lagega? It's not just about financial independence. Ayaan is kaabil to ho ki wo emotionally Humaira ko support kar sake. Ayaan ki koi buraai kare wo kaise bardasht karegi? Zimmedaariyaan uthani padti hain nibhani padti hain Khan Sahib for the people who mean the world to you."

"You also need to find out ki Ayaan uske baaremein kya sochta hai before she falls more in love with him. Mujhe lagta hai ki wo bhi Humaira ko pasand karta hai par hide kar raha hai. Aap dono bhai ek jaise ho dono sabse bade duffers. Ayaan apni feelings ko aur ladkiyon ke saath flirt karke hide kar raha hai aur aap mujhpar naraaz hokar apni feelings chupate the. Don't you dare try and deny it Khan Sahib aapne khud ye confess kiya tha." Zoya made Asad fully aware of the Ayaan Humaira situation. He was the one who could find a solution to his irresponsible baby bro.

Asad heard his wife say all things about making Ayaan responsible. He was very proud of her that she was not only taking care of thier family but also of his father's other family. She had made him realize that Ayaan needs not only his love and care but also his guidance. He had decided to talk to Ayaan privately not here. Thye were not comfortable displaying their bhaichara in front of others even if it were N3, Humaira and Zoya B. His conov with his bro would happen but first he needed to talk with his wife who just called him a duffer. He also needed to be with her and be her M and B, SR or SD type lover. He had decided to blow her mind by making love to her like never before.

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago

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