AsYa-FF-{Ya Allah, Yeh Mohabbat!}pg 10 Ch-3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's great pls continue! im actually imagining zoya and asad doing these scenes...its like watching extra episodes but in my head 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey i m silent reader n huge ksg fan...:)
Awsume ff yaarr:)
plzz continue soon...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Chapter One
Zoya: kya baat hai Asad miya, aaj toh aap bade dashing lag rahe hai
Asad: hai..zoya begum yahi sunne ke liye toh hum is duniya mein aaye hain
Zoya: Jaanti hu, isiliye toh Allahmiya ne aap ko hamare naseeb mein likha hai..
Asad grabs zoya by waist from behind her, rest his head on her shoulders and says: Biwi Zoya, Hum toh bane ki aap ko dekh sake, aap ki ibadat kar sake
Zoya: Allahmiya, aap ko patience de..
Asad sniffs Zoya's hair: Patience hi ek cheez hai jo Allahmiya hume dena bhool gaya..
Zoya turns...and hugs Asad
Zoya: Asad dont love me too much, I dont think I will be able to handle it...
Asad closes his eyes: Zoya you are the fragrance of my life...
Zoya closes her eyes too, : Asad you are the best thing happened to me..
They break the hug...
Asad and Zoya head towards the breakfast, Dilshad, is preparing Asad's seat, when Asad Zoya walks in..
Zoya: Ammi, leave it, I will do it...
Dilshad: Smiles and makes room for Zoya to do it...
Zoya thn makes everything perfect before Asad sits in and Asad has a smile on his face, Zoya finishes and looks at Asad, who is smiling,
Zoya: Asad aap kyun itna muskura rahe hai
Asad: Kuch nahi,nothing
Asad heads towards his seat..but cannot stop smiling..
Dilsha: Asad beta kya baat hai?
Asad: Ammi, if you remember, jab Zoya hamare ghar mein mehman thi, tab kitni, different thi,..I mean usse itni samaj bhi nahi thi..
Zoya: Asad, I am always proud of what I am or was, I havent changed, I still prefer the way I was yesterday but ...I dont want to change you too, I prefer you as you were yesterday..
Asad: Dekha Ammi, aapki daughter in law kitni samajdar ho gayi hai..
Zoya: Asad yeh toh aapko lagta hai,mein toh hamesha se samajdar hi rahi hoon..
Dilshad: Acha baba..ab aap log apna breakfast toh kar le...office ke liye der bhi toh ho rahi hain
Asad-Zoya: Ji Ammi..
While having breakfast, Asad grabs Zoya's hand...
Zoya thn bursts: Allahmiya whats wrong with you..
Asad quickly lets go her hand and stutters: Wh...Whats wrong Zoya..what happened
Zoya: Woh...I mean..I ..
Dilshad notices wht must happened and clears her throat: You too can feel free to do anything..but in bedroom..Asad...Zoya
Asad-Zoya both look at her..
Zoya:Ammi see , Asad always keep on harrasing me over little things
Asad: Zoya, aap, bhi na...kuch baatein apne tak semit rehni chahiye..pata nahi yeh aap kab samajengi...
Zoya makes a long sad face and Asad leaves for office, noding his head..
Dilshad: Zoya beta..you werent wrong..but Asad doesnt like his more gentle side to be known outside his bedroom..but I am glad that he loves you ...becoz the way you two started..
Zoya goes in flasback
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hCIruMF-Ras[/YOUTUBE]
Zoya: Ya Ammi, our first meet now that I think of it was very strange and weird...I mean he was driving and I was on a run away from my NIkah
Dilshad: Oh Zoya..leave the past and lets prepare Lunch and remember Asad doesnt know about your Nikah...
Now he does: Asad who was standing...have heard Zoya say that he ran away from her Nikah..
Dilshad and Zoya shocked..
Asad gives his disappointed look to Zoya and thn heads out without saying what he came for..Zoya goes behind him...
Zoya:Asad ...Asad..Listen to me just once
Asad stops and turns...: Ran from your Nikah?!?..Zoya ..aap ne itni badi baat mujhse chupayi..aap ko kya laga tha I wont ever come to know..
Zoya: Asad that happend before I Met you..and that day...I would have regretted if I didnt run away..we wouldnt have been together
Asad: True we wouldnt have been together...but do you know that in Hindustan what kind of girls run away frm their NIKAH! ...slams his fist on Car...
Zoya in tears: Asad..you hurt me today
Asad: If I were you I would actually think...who hurt who...opens the car door and leaves for office..
Zoya left behind seeing the car zoom away...
Edited by -ZoyaAsadKhan- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Awesome.
I'm loving this sooo much..
Thanks a lot for this lovely ff.
Your username is beautiful.
Take care!
Keep coming up with such amazing ideas.
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kindly add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is sooo good and promising start..mwouldmlove tonread more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
superb starting
asya is married
loved it
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome


Very well written? Please send me a pm when you update
Edited by Nandiniraizaada - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey awesome one...loved it...fab one...cont soon...nd plzz PM wen u update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome loved it
plz cont soon
plz pm me when u updated

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