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Ayesha

@__AyEsHa__

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi guys..
This is my third OS..I hope u like it.

Adi-Hey whats going on..?
Pankhu-kuch ni..
Adi-Teen devia ek saat n kuch ni!!
Rubel-Haan haan...adi..kuch to chal raha hai in k bich..1 hr ho gaye hume office se aye hue...n humare biwio ko kuch khayal hi nahi hai.
Kaira-To kya...sirf 1 hr hi huwa hai na...waise v hum baat kr rahe hai aap log bahar niklo..
Pankhu n Payal:haan haan aap log bahar jao..
THEN THEY PUSHED ADI N RUBEL OUT OF KAIRA'S ROOM..
Adi-Ye tumlogo ne thik ni kiya...n kaira tune humare biwi o ko humse dur karke thik ni kiya...tujhe tujhe...?? wo kya tha
Rubel-kya?
Adi:haan...shrub lagega...chal pata lagate hai ye kya baat kar rahe hai..
AT THAT MOMENT...RUBEL'S PHONE RANG..
Rubel-Payal ka phone hai.
Adi-utha utha n ek kaam kar loudspeaker mei laga..
Rubel-ADI!
Adi-Oops sorry abi to mera bhai shadi shuda hai..(with naughty smile)
THEN RUBEL RECEIVED THE CALL N TALKED WITH PAYAL..
Adi-kuch pata chala.?
Rubel-kya?
Adi- woh kya baat kar rahe hai..
Rubel-Payal ne to sirf mujhe sorry kehne k liye phone kiya tha...sor na yaar unko...chal mere room mei hum v kuch gappe sappe karte hai...
Adi:Arre tu to ek dam joru ka gulam ban gaya...payal ne bolo na phone mei yaha se jane k liye...
Rubel:NI NI payal ne kuch ni bola..
Adi:Mujhe pata hai...main to sirf majak kar raha tha...chal chal tere room mein...
AFTER SOMETIME BOTH ADI N PANKHU WERE IN THEIR ROOM
Adi-Finally kisi ko time mila...aaj tu kuch jada ni kar rahi thi...tujhe ni lagta tujhe mujhe sorry bolna chahiye..
Pankhu-Sorry n mujhe...apko bolna chahiye.
Adi-acha...pata hai Payal ne Rubel se sorry bola.
Panku-so?
Adi-Tu to hamesa larai karne ki mood mei rehti hai.
Pankhu-haan haan mujhe aapse larai karna pasand hai na.. Mujhe apse baat ni karni..
Adi-mujhe v tere se baat karne ka koi sok ni hai...gudn8..mujhe sona hai
Pankhu-maine roka hai kya..gudn8.
AFTER SOMETIME..
Pankhu-haan bolo..tum v bohot handsome ho..meri pati bohot boring hai...tum kitne ache ho...meri pati so rahe hai..main bahar jati hu..
Adi-ye kis se baat kar rahi hai phone pe...pata lagana parega...
Pankhu-abhi mei bahar hu...terrace pe ja rahi hu...waha ja k baat krti hu...ni to kisi ne dekh liya to problem ho jayegi..
Adi-ye kya chal raha hai...n main tujhe follow kar raha hu..(in mind)
Pankhu-meri pati bohot bewakouf hai ushe ni pata chalega..haan mai terrace pohoch gayi..luv u 2.
ADI WAS TOTALLY CONFUSED...N THEN HE OPENED THE DOOR TO ENTER IN THE TERRACE...N HE WS SHOCKED... THE TERRACE WAS BEAUTIFULLY DECORATED WITH FLOWERS,BALLOONs,ribbons n LIGHTS.. N PANKHU,RUBEL,KAIRA N PAYAL WERE SINGING...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U...HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR ADI...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U..
ek choti si surprise humare taraf se...
Adi-THANK u thank u...OMG...Tumlog ye plan kar rahe the..waise mujhe pata tha..
Rubel-Mujhe pata hai adi har bar ki tarah tu is bar v bhul gaya..
Adi-hehe..haan..waise tumlog drama bohot ache kar lete ho...
N THEN THEY CUT THE CAKE N CELEBRATED HIS BIRTHDAY..
Kaira-abhi i think miya biwi ko akele sor dena chahiye..
Rubel n Payal-haan chalo chalo.
Pankhu-aur thori der ruko na
Kaira-ni ruk sakte ye adi humlogo ko mann hi mann kosh raha hai na..hahaha.
THEY LEFT PAYA ALONE..
Adi-Meri birthday gift?
Panku-Apni aankh band karo..
Adi-Ok..fir se surprise
PANKHU KISSED ON HIS LEFT CHEEK N SAID SORRY Jhoot bolne k liye..n then on his right cheek larai karne k liye..ye raha apka gift..
Adi-mujhe ni chahiye...pehle tu i love u bol n asli wala kiss de..
Pankhu-asli wala kiss?
Adi-Madam hum utna v bewakouf ni hai
PANKHU SMILED N CLOSED HER EYES..
ADI put his lips on her n they started kissing each other..
How ws it?likes,dislikes all are welcome..plz do comments...😊

Edited by Aieshaa - 11 years ago

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Sonia

@Bobbi.

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Haha this was a cute OS, Aieshaa!

I liked the simplicity in it, keep writing more often :)

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Laugh.Out.Loud

@Laugh.Out.Loud

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww that was really very cute! Enjoyed reading, do try to write more often! <3

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely OS!!!! 😃please continue!!!😳

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Ayesha

@__AyEsHa__

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DiorRouge.
Haha this was a cute OS, Aieshaa!

I liked the simplicity in it, keep writing more often :)

thank u..ok i will try..:)

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Ayesha

@__AyEsHa__

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linaya
Aww that was really very cute! Enjoyed reading, do try to write more often! <3

glad that u like it..hehe..ok i will try..:)

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Ayesha

@__AyEsHa__

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaily1008
lovely OS!!!! 😃please continue!!!😳

thanks shaily..continue?dear its an one shot..:)

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Diana08D

@Diana08D

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww so cute..Lovely OS.!! Keep writing more.!!

Love the Last Part.. 😆Hayee PaYa are so cute..

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_Nish_

@_Nish_

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was a lovely, sweet OS Aiesha...loved it...

Keep writing!!

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Tacker_Holic

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Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Loved your work Aiesha! It was so cute! Loved the way they threw Adi and Rubal out and then Payal rang Rubal. Adi fell for the trap. Then the little argument between PaYa just like the show. The surprise was so cute...I think you should continue this OS! Keep writing and inspiring!

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