*I have loved you deeper than any ocean*

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Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey my lovelies!

Guess what?! Another poem! 😳 I am really sorry guys for the delay and I know you are all used to seeing a lot of poems! 😳 But here I am to please you all?! I really hope you like this one as well as this took me forever! 😆

What a wonderful life we are building together,
A castle around us to protect us forever after...

I have loved you deeper than any ocean,
Since the day our love was set ...

And as the sands of time slowly lighten,
I swear to you my love will remain forever more...

The waves come lashing down,
But in the calm are beautiful sounds of tranquillity...

Words of truth and passion for each other,
Promising we'll never leave for another...

No matter what...

Don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
It will only help our relationship to grow...

At times our lives get complicated,
Inside somewhere we feel so frustrated...

so frustrated that we feel like spreading our wings and fly into heaven

But we can't at all let it interfere with us,
In our love we have to trust...

Always remember we're together for seven lives,
For you are my husband and I am your wife!

Forever...

Always Forever, hand in hand, side by side.

This one is dedicated to Adi from Pankhuri! Hope you guys enjoyed reading it! 👍🏼 Thanks!

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PayaDesire95

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great poem!! Totally is perfect for PaYa! Thanks for posting 😃

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anusha.cochin

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great1 Sonia

missed ur poem threads

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ankur281

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow Sonia...wonderful indeed...👏..., i was kinda feeling somewhere in between as if reading a professional poet...Do you publish these somewhere, since it is one notch higher than the ast one i read...Bravo.👍🏼

Most lines are so perfect for Harish-Avantika, it is so true people should live life for their loved ones since life is one so why waste it mincing with ego and petty selfish thoughts...It always feels great at the end to live for someone else...someone whom you really care for..

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Saibal Routh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice poem Sonia, and very much poignant in terms of relationships.👍🏼

Specially love these 2 lines❤️
Don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
It will only help our relationship to grow..

They are so very true.👏

Hats off for such nice lines, and overall the poem is quite significant in terms of relationships. Can't agree more. Quite heartening to read these lovely lines, truly heart-warming. ❤️

Keep writing more such lovely poems👏

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Sameer Mariwalla

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Posted: 12 years ago

Your efforts in writing are clearly shining in your words & are appropriate for the romance between Pankhuri & Aditya👍🏼

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ShivTRSS

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow. This was absolutely beautiful. Really expressed the deep feelings Adi has for Pankhudi.

I absolutely loved it and read it three times already.

I most loved these lines

Don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
It will only help our relationship to grow...

At times our lives get complicated,
Inside somewhere we feel so frustrated...

so frustrated that we feel like spreading our wings and fly into heaven

But we can't at all let it interfere with us,
In our love we have to trust...

These I absolutely loved. So true and so inspiring you know. That however much hurdles come, we have to keep going and we have to express ourselves. Lovely