*I have loved you deeper than any ocean* - Page 2

Originally posted by: PayaDesire95

Great poem!! Totally is perfect for PaYa! Thanks for posting 😃

Thank you sooo much for reading... means a lot! 😳 you're welcome!

Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Great1 Sonia

missed ur poem threads

Thanks a lot for reading... sorry for the delay will try to be consistent! 😳

Originally posted by: ankur281

wow Sonia...wonderful indeed...👏..., i was kinda feeling somewhere in between as if reading a professional poet...Do you publish these somewhere, since it is one notch higher than the ast one i read...Bravo.👍🏼

Most lines are so perfect for Harish-Avantika, it is so true people should live life for their loved ones since life is one so why waste it mincing with ego and petty selfish thoughts...It always feels great at the end to live for someone else...someone whom you really care for..

Thanks soo much Ankur bro for such a detailed and wonderful reply really made me smile! Oh wow! No I am not a professional and I only publish my work here infact this is the only forum I write for! 😳 PaYa are special for me that's why! 😃 Yeah this one was a lot better and took longer as well! 😳 Really!? Yeah of course life is too short for troubles, live life to the fullest! 😃 Yeah you are 100% right! 😊

Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH

Nice poem Sonia, and very much poignant in terms of relationships.👍🏼

Specially love these 2 lines❤️
Don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
It will only help our relationship to grow..

They are so very true.👏

Hats off for such nice lines, and overall the poem is quite significant in terms of relationships. Can't agree more. Quite heartening to read these lovely lines, truly heart-warming. ❤️

Keep writing more such lovely poems👏

Thanks soo much bro glad you enjoyed those particular lines! Hehe 😳 Yeah it is based on all relationships not just PaYa! 😃 Will try too! 😃😃

Originally posted by: sameersaagar

Your efforts in writing are clearly shining in your words & are appropriate for the romance between Pankhuri & Aditya👍🏼

Thank you sooo much for a wonderful reply! 😃 Everyone's love and support helps me to write! 😳

Originally posted by: preethi18

superb poem.😳

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ShivTRSS

Wow. This was absolutely beautiful. Really expressed the deep feelings Adi has for Pankhudi.

I absolutely loved it and read it three times already.

I most loved these lines

Don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
It will only help our relationship to grow...

At times our lives get complicated,
Inside somewhere we feel so frustrated...

so frustrated that we feel like spreading our wings and fly into heaven

But we can't at all let it interfere with us,
In our love we have to trust...

These I absolutely loved. So true and so inspiring you know. That however much hurdles come, we have to keep going and we have to express ourselves. Lovely

Thank you sooo much Aashna baby! ❤️ Really happy you commented and you really enjoyed reading my work! 😃 WOW! Three times I have only read it once! 😆 Really happy you liked those lines in particular... I am flattered with your positive response and I completely agree with you love has no end keep love alive and keep smiling!

Originally posted by: sudipta1988

beautiful poem <3

Thanks a lot! 😃

Originally posted by: pjsolanki

Mast poem che.

Love your guju reply! 😉

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI

Always LOVE ur work Sonia. Its Great and Awesome. U changed ur name? Lol.

Hey Dev! Thank you so much for reading and really happy you loved it! 😳 Yeah changed it to Tacker_Holic! 😉 the name says everything! ☺️