Abhiya ff: PAINFUL LOVE * chapter-7 updated* 16/10 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
When u gonna continue dear?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

When u gonna continue dear?

After my exams dear..😊.. After 30th march
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pkyekdiehardfab

After my exams dear..😊.. After 30th march

all the best for ur exam dear👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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sorry I kept this ff on hold ...coz m running out of ideas🤢
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pkyekdiehardfab

sorry I kept this ff on hold ...coz m running out of ideas🤢

hope u will get the idea soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Post new update soion dear
We are waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rather than Sorry I have nothing say plz forgive me for the last time friends 😔..

CHAPTER-6

Piya: What r u doing here ..why can't u leave me alone ... why are u irritating me ...don't have anything else to do..

I started shouting on him.

He came closer and put his hand on my mouth,n I starts hitting him and in the process I was about to fall,but he caught me.
For a moment I get lost into his blue eyes.

Kabhi jo baadal barse

Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke

Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa

Tere pahloo mein reh loon

Main khudko paagal keh loon

Tu gham de ya khushiyaan

Seh loon saathiya

"Bapre kitna bolti ho...' His words bring me back to reality and only then I realized our position.

I tried to push him, but he was really strong.

He tightly hold my hands n said
" Shhh... Ekdam chup...now I'll speak n u'll listen to me"

I silently nodded my head

" see I have no interest in following u ...but insaniet ki nate I'm here... ye jungle bahut hi khatarnak hai...full of wild animals u know..so I can't leave u here like this...now m removing my hand and don't you dare to start blabbering again okay!!.."

Again I nodded my head coz he was right, its not safe to be alone here.

He removed his hand and start walking towards the road n I follow him silently.

But suddenly my leg got stuck in something and fall on the ground with a thud.

He turned to me,I thought he'll help me.

But that idiot instead of helping started laughing at me.

Aargh...!! How I want to tear him into pieces.

ABHAY'S POV

I turn around hearing a thud sound.

And the sight in front me make me laugh.

She was sitting on the ground with mud all over her face.

I know its rude to laugh,but I can't help it.

She glare at me n angrily wipe her face.

Getting a grip on myself I offered my hand in order to help her.

But this Jangli Billi pushed my hand and got up own her own.

I shook my head n started walking suppressing my laughter.

After walking for an hours. I said
"Guess what we are lost"

"What?? Where have I come? Shit..I hate animals!" She murmured to herself.

PIYA'S POV

"Hey bhagwan main bacche paida karne se pehle marna nahi chahta ,please take me out of this mess!" He said looking at the skies above asking to give him a way ahead.

God what a drama queen n I rolled my eyes.

"You won't die here if we both stick together." I blurted out before I could keep a control on my tongue.

"Sorry did you just say something to me?" He asked

"Um nothing... Just ignore it" I said n started to leave only to be stopped by a firm grip on my wrist.

I jerked his hand away and pounced on him.

"Ohh mister don't act smart ,just because I said we can stick together ,you can't just hold my hands." I pointed a finger at him and shouted.

"But you are unable to resist me ,what is the mistake of this poor guy?" he said pouting like a puppy and I started hitting him on his chest.

"Acha this is great ,you can hit me but I can't hold your hands? How "abla-naari" types." he said and I shook her head at his idiotic talks.

Its just point less to argue with him, so I move away and he start following me with a stupid grin on his face.

We reached a pond and I thought to drink water from it but the water kept slipping from my hands as much as I tried to drink it.

Suddenly I saw a hand in front of my mouth and looked up to see him standing with his hands full of water. He signalled me to drink from his hands.

ABHAY'S POV

She bent forward and start drinking the water, all this while I was just staring at her innocent eyes which flickered as the water touched her lips.

I smiled seeing her and she returned her smile.

She started searching for her hanky but I forwarded my own to her and she willingly took it.

"Thank you!" she replied and I thought to tease her a bit and leaned closer to her making her breath hitch in her throat and forgetting myself too why I had leaned in at the first place.

"Shouldn't you say sorry?" I asked gathering my voice back somehow and moving away from her.

"Huh?" she asked still recovering from the close proximity we had shared a second before. "Ya ,I mean no.." she stammered along.

I burst out laughing at her distraught expressions and said ,"I know I am pretty hot ,you will learn to match up!"

She glare at me and I tried to change the topic.

"It's quite late and I guess humein raat yahin rehna padega." I said sitting down at a rock and took two stones and started stroking them.

"What the hell are you doing with those stones? Kam se kam unhe toh chod do." she said sitting across me in her shorts.

"Hello madam aap shorts mein hain ,you will start feeling cold soon ,so lighting a fire." he explained as the fire started.

PIYA'S POV

I appreciated him in my mind. He seems to be a gentle man.

Breaking my reverie he said ,"You can praise me openly too." and I smirked in a oh-so-thankful way.

"Waise tumhe bacche paida karne ki itni jaldi kyun hai?" I asked trying to control my laughter reminding his earlier words.

"Because you know.." he said moving his hands and I stopped him,"Leave it ,I don't wanna hear."

"Oh ho vulgar people ,I meant mujhe love mein padne ki jaldi hai so bacche are automatically free!" he said and I smirked.

"Ya bacche free free free!" I said imitating a AD movie selling a product.

"Chi ,gandi soch wali ladki." he said earning a glare from me.

The weather grew colder and I shivered and squirmed at my place.

He started removing his shirt and I looked at him shocked ,eyes open in horror.

"Koi horror movie nahi chal rahi hai ,ye lo.!" he said offering his shirt to me and I saw he wasn't wearing anything.

"But tum?" I asked pointing at his bare body.

He shrugged and asked me to go ahead and wear the shirt ,I looked to and fro from the shirt to him.

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If you liked it then plz hit the like button and do comment...bye See you in next update
Edited by Pkyekdiehardfab - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
i'm so glad u gave us update dear🤗
it was awesome
loll abhiya fight like kids😆
abhay teasing piya whenever he get chance🤣
on the other hand piya got sometime irritate sometime blush😉
thank god abhay is with piya in that jungle otherwise what would have happen to her
awe abhay is so caring toward piya😃
just hope abhiya will reach their home safely
continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
It's been really longtime dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90
still no planing to return dear?😭

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