Abhiya ff My Vampire Mate

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Awesome Story and cute little moments but please update soon

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lily2003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

yay! u are going to update i just love this ff please pm me whenever u update😊

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Namrata Patil

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Posted: 8 years ago

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First of all

Happy New Year everyone.

I know i have missed the dead line as promised but I could not recollect the tracks that I had lead in my mind and so thought to start over but with a slight difference in the track i.e. now there would be a leap and not of years but of centuries. This is so because as I reread the 1st two part they were like royal and modern, to clearly state lets just imagine that we live in the era of kings and queens no vehicle except the carriage but still we have mobile phones technology that won't be good to read. Therefore, to take a good leap of centuries.

Hope you all will like it.

Chapter 3 - This is not the END but also not then NEW START.

In a dark room where the source of light is only through the window from the moon. A figure is sitting on the window slide have a body as good as any girl would fall for him, but still his eyes portrait different emotions of pain, guilt, grief, longing, loneliness. He looked towards the moon with the same emotions in this eyes and spoke to himself, "I'm sorry so sorry for what I did with you both. I really don't what had happened to me at that time that I did this to you guys, I'm really very sorry, now I know how it feels to be away from the one you love the most." Now looking at the photo frame in his hands, "I die every passing seconds because of the deeds that I have done in the past. But still, I am trying my best and every possible way to bring you back and to make you one and I guess then only I can be able to forgive myself and my love would accept me. I know this is not the end but also not the beginning. Please come back please, if not for me then for your love to fulfill it and to make all the worlds be in peace with each other. Only you both can do it, please come back", he said in his shaky voice.

But the thing he don't know is that, a shadow at the door of his room has listened to all that he had said to him self and watch him with those eyes that showed pain, hurt, betrayal, love and longing.

The shadow retreated and entered another room which too was dark and the only light came was from the fire place. As the shadow walks towards the fire place, the light fell on her. She is an young teenage, her body a little bit skinny. She spoke to her self, "I know and I can see your pain, guilt and grief. But if still I want to, I cannot forgive you, not for what you did to me but for what you did to your own family and my only family, my best friend. Yes, this is true, that I still love the way I used to before and that's why my decision lies with them because it's them who m you have betrayed and not me." Then she got up and walked towards the window and opened it and said to the moon, "I know they will and they have to return, not for you, not for me, not for the peace, also not for the balance of the worlds but just for their love to complete their story of love, because jo Pyaar kii yeh ek Kahaani ko vo adhura chod gaye hai, unnhe usse pura karna hi hoga varna koi bhi pyaar ki kahaani chahe vo kisi bhi duniya se ho kabhi puri nahi hogi. Unn dono ne saath me itni saari muskilon ka saamnna kiya hai itni ladaiya ladi hai jo kabhi koi na kar saka vo undono ne kiya hai, sirf iss liye ki unki hi kahaani adhura rehe jaye? No this is not acceptable at least not from me. Agar vo dono bhi na chahe magar unke pyaar ko hi unnhe milana hoga ... Ha... ! Har baar pyaar pariksha leta hai magar iss baar pyaar pariksha dega, jis pyaar keliya undono ne khudko kurban kardiya, apna astitva hi mitadiya , vahi pyaar ab undono ko ek karvayega. Humesha pyaar karne walon ne apni kahaani likhi hai but iss baar pyaar khud hi apni kahani likhega aur usse pura bhi karega..."

The winds started to blew fast in a new direction, trees started to make melody to welcome love. At the other side, at the beginning of the forest, where the tress are not so close, there's a small stall and near that stall a man is sitting near the born fire, noticed the change in forest sounds and the direction of the wind with the speed and spoke, "Lagta hai jaise koi aane wala hai jiske aane ki yeh sab rah dekh rahe hai ye sab... Shayad koi wapis aane wala hai ... sabhi tute, bikhre rishton ko jodne...Lag raha hai jaise bita wakt fir se apne aapko dorahaayega... magar ... Apna hi ek ethihaas (history) banane ke liye... Sab kuch badalne wala hai bas uske aajane se ... or vo bita wakt ka hi koi hai... Bhala kis ki niyati (destiny) hai jo bite wakt ko hi badal kar rakh degi... or naya ethihaas rach degi... Lagta hai inn sab ko ussi shakshs (person) ka intezaar hai... toh hum bhi usska intezaar karte hai innke saath..."

Finally, I have made it.

I know this is not big as you all must have expected n sorry for that but kiya karu ghar me doo doo shadiya thi ek 18th ko or dusri 31st ko toh ussme itna hi suja. Abhi aage ka kuch matt puchna because mujhe bhi nahi pata ki aage kiya hoga or haa tum tab tak in dono characters ko guess karna ok

Me jaldi hi update kar ne ki try karungi and ya if anyone has a problem with english-hindi language tell me then, I'll give sutitles from next updated ok and also I have and will be using sanskrit words in my updates but don't worry i will give the english word for the respective in bracket like I have done in this update.

Also let me know your views even criticism is allowed, so write your view till your heart contains. This will make me know your expectations from me about the story and if you have a track for my story do share, we will see and if possible then work on it.

And also I don't know how to update index so sorry if you have to go through each page to find the update...and also parts😆, I put them in reply box😳So please😃 tell me that too so i can make it convenient for you all😊😃

Once again thank you for waiting and a

HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR 2017!!!!

Edited by NamrataPatil - 8 years ago

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Supervampire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Happy New Year

finally u update as a new year gift

i think its Kabir nd misha who are talking to moon

abhay nd pia are no more

kabir did some mistake nd feeling guilty on it

misha has not forgave him still

they are waiting for abhiya nd their incomplete pkyek would be complete

thanx for updating

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Namrata Patil

@NamrataPatil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Supervampire
Happy New Year
finally u update as a new year gift
i think its Kabir nd misha who are talking to moon
abhay nd pia are no more
kabir did some mistake nd feeling guilty on it
misha has not forgave him still
they are waiting for abhiya nd their incomplete pkyek would be complete
thanx for updating

Thanks
And ya I won't speak of characters as I myself have not decided anything about them hope you like the change.

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Supervampire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: NamrataPatil

Thanks
And ya I won't speak of characters as I myself have not decided anything about them hope you like the change.

I only said what i guessed 😛

yeah...u can change 😊

i love this story 😃

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lily2003

@lily2003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

nice update👏

i think its kabir and misha

happy new year😊

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Happy new year..
I really like those dialogues..
And the hindi lines..!!

To update index..
Go to first page of the thread.. Click on edit post button of ur first post..
Then made the necessary changes like writing parts & page no. Then click on post reply button..the chamges u made will get posted..
Hope this help..!!

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Namrata Patil

@NamrataPatil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
Happy new year..
I really like those dialogues..
And the hindi lines..!!

To update index..
Go to first page of the thread.. Click on edit post button of ur first post..
Then made the necessary changes like writing parts & page no. Then click on post reply button..the chamges u made will get posted..
Hope this help..!!

Thanks dear you helped me a lot I'll soon make the changes.
Stay tuned.