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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

You enjoy writing fantasy, am I right? :P
Okay so... I guess Piya is a reincarnation, but that throws up another set of questions. I'm waiting for the next update! Lol.

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

It's interestingly nice... Thanks for the pm sweety.. Woohhoo... It was all like a roller-coaster ride... There was so much happening... Dipanita the granny... I think is hiding her and piya's reality maybe... On the other hand piya was laying on pool of blood... Her soul wasn't in the body no more.. But now she is out of it... She is seeing abhay who has pain in his eye but she can't do anything.. Misha also comes there... Piya moved into the jungle there again she witnessed some shocking scene... Princess piyashre .. Sidharth ... Misha... Abhay... All is so confusing... Don't know what's that all about.. Is she the same princess or her soul is connected to that princess somewhat... All queries has to be answered... It was really good the way u have written the situation.. Thank u update soon

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

yippee finally got update
god that prabal so idiot 😡
living in pia's money still so much attitude
I feel dipanita so mysterious 😕
loll dipanita ne toh prabal ki band Baja di 😆
oh hell that jerk jay liar 😡
OMG what was that? 😲
pia's soul left her body? 😲
abhay was in so much pain & fear for pia 🥺
is that pia is piyashree reincarnation?
hope soon pia will recover & get that jerk jay to hell
continue soon

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

awesome update...so piya was a princess in her previous birth...and mish and sid frnd and bro...and abhay was abhay...the lover...so now what happens...

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Fabulous update

I enjoyed reading it

So piya is seeing her past life

Pretty interesting

Thanks for pm

Please continue soon

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Noor

@Abhiya-4ever

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Anita that was really really amazing..

The way u described Deepanita & Prabal convo n Depanita's concern for Piya that was soo nice.
That jungle scene was well done written
Its Piya's past or Piya is reborn?
N how Abhay connected to her?
& he was immortal thn..
It was worth waiting dear
Updt soon n thanks 4 pm

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Wow amazing update... !! I feel lyk am watching pkyek all over again... supernatural activity & all u potrayed..you are an awesome writter must say...And am sooo happy u decided to convert it into ss... Thanks for pm :)) :))

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Pia is in form of soul watching her past & present simultaneously, so that is how she meet abhay & in that accident she lost her parents..Poor pia doesnt got the luv she need..Deepu knws sumthng abt pia which she is concealing..Now pia'll gt 2 knw hr past.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

amazing update

so pia looks like a reincarnation of piyashree..would luv to know what exactly happened in past.

is dipanita too a supernatural creature? she seems too know something which others don't.

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Hey dear great that you turned this story into a ss👍🏼
awesome update 👏simply loved it very interesting one👍🏼
well written and thanks for pm update next part soon ... 🤗

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