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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

hiii...!!!
😉👏😳
have read it long back... !! and just now completed reading it...!!
yup.. have read ur os.. and thank u so much u made sequel of it..!!
i'm dearly loving it..!!
my rotu piya.. oppxxx.. abhay's rotu piya..!!
sometimes she is so much insecure of her relation bcox of their deadly seperation..
i'm loving this whole scenario bit by bit or say whole...
someone obviously not from their gang is following them or just having an eye on them... lets see...
can we demand for abhiya some lonely moment ... jealousy part... cochiee cooo.. as u know CV doesnt fulfilled her dreams ...
plxxx update it soon

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Awesome Update and loved the car part very much but who is following Abhiya hope he is not that dumb Jai

thanks so much dear! 😊 glad to hear you like it. 😳

No. It's definitely not Jey. But that someone isn't their friend either. We will find out soon who.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: 2Obsessed
I love this SS.
Not many stories on Abhiya have Abhay and Piya with their exact characters like that in the show. But you are doing a good job. Thank you. 😊 I missed them and the show so thought to bring them alive through this fic. 😊

Many moments from this story takes me back to the show.
Happy to know that. 😳

Are we getting to knw who is following them any time soon?
We will. But not in tge next update. A little later.

Continue this sooner dear :)
I will update tonight. 😳

Once more thanks for commenting. :)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
brilliant update . Thank you Megha.😳

poor pia she got confused once again thanks to her previous experiences. loved how abhay pacified her and made her understand the situation. Yes. You have seen it just right Megha! Indeed Abhay is in a way responsible for it.

And yes whenever she swings in doubt, Abhay will be there to clear it. 😳

it is indeed hard for her to keep pretense as she is not someone who is used to doing it. abhay has mastered this art. loved how they are trying to make the most of the time they are getting to be with together. so now abhay gonna audition for the part of romeo i guess for pia.

Yeah. .Indeed he had! 😆 Piya on the other hand is just the opposite.

Yes no matter how hard the situations are, they will always make it. 😉

he left in a hurry. i feel he might have gotten some lead on the person following them. That's right!

superb update indu and waiting to read next.
Thanks once again Megha. Your comments are always wonderful to read. 🤗

btw when will u update the forbidden?

Forbidden is next. 😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: doll.12
hiii...!!!
😉👏😳
have read it long back... !! and just now completed reading it...!!
yup.. have read ur os.. and thank u so much u made sequel of it..!!
i'm dearly loving it..!! Thank you so much dear. 😳 I am glad to hear that. 😳

my rotu piya.. oppxxx.. abhay's rotu piya..!!
sometimes she is so much insecure of her relation bcox of their deadly seperation.. She had a bad experience in the past. And that certainly had its shadows even now! Although Abhay has changed his decision for the better. 😊

i'm loving this whole scenario bit by bit or say whole...
someone obviously not from their gang is following them or just having an eye on them... lets see...
can we demand for abhiya some lonely moment ... jealousy part... cochiee cooo.. as u know CV doesnt fulfilled her dreams ...
plxxx update it soon hmm. There are more or say better lots of intimate scene coming up. Jealousy too will be one among them. 😳

Thanks so much for reading. I hope you enjoy this story further, just as much as you did the previous ones. 🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever
Di plz update soon
Eagerly waiting 4 nxt update

updating today! 😳

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

What's going on? Why was Piya avoiding him earlier? And honestly do they take turns trying to ignore each other or what?

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 10 years ago

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Liked it..will read lil later .. When free

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

amazing update

glad to see abhay behaving normally in college like other students. pia was a nervous wreak and no wonder she was worrying too much to even find time to talk to him. i think abhay was trying to give her some space by not intruding too much but i feel he should have made an effort to talk to her atleast once. any way i kind of liked that for the first time he got a taste of his own medicine(silent treatment)😆

jeh was warning abhay regarding pia if only he knew but abhay was right in reprimanding her to let pia decide for herself. the way jeh talked about pia it was like he owned her and so not surprised that abhay didn't like that. hopefully he would heed to abhay's warning.

pia was envious and annoyed at the closeness b/w abhay-alina and i can understand that as she hardly gets these moments with him. she is having many insecurities and is not completely wrong coz the thing is she can't even clear them out with abhay due to her other fears. she sang his fav song to get him to look at her but abhay was too much in to his character of keeping distance. sometimes abhay forget the fact that pia unlike him is not too hard enough to tolerate everything and he need to soften himself a bit .

i think it was a bit of an impulsive reaction from pia to get abhay's attention in which not only was she successful but also managed to pass her jealousy bug to him😆

abhay's entire convo was quite intense with pia. that entire part where he talks about his not so restrained version and not liking to share his belongings was pretty passionate. that was definitely very well written indu. all of abhay's dialogue were superb.

simplu outstanding update and i am really intrigued to know what did pia find out actually ? i think it's realted to abhay or is there something else? are khuranas responsible for the problems in dehradoon but they alone can't be so i think there are other ppl too.are the other vampires too behind them or is it someone from abhay's past has come to haunt him??

can't wait to read more

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago

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Anon

@raintrifle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Whoa! this is really opposite of Abhay to be so helpful in college drama stuff 😛. Whoopsie , Pia did quite sparked a flame of jealousy in Abhay with her daring act . I have a request plzz make Pia a little outward , i mean i am getting Abhay vibes from her ! during the whole SS she must have said only a few words more than Abhay has . hmm one more thing just how did misha accepted the job of delivering Juliet-dialogues . Behind the curtains or whatever it is still ahem unbelievable of her .

Edited by withered - 10 years ago

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