Abhaiya SS:- Forever As One' -- Check out my Note on Page 50 ! :) - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update! it's wonderfully penned!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
ummm...pufff!!!! when will they be finally together...god am sick and tired of this jeh the werewolf...
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Posted: 10 years ago
What the..???

Why Piya was avoiding him now? Bcz she feels insecure or she was jealous?
When i read Abhay comes to her hostel then i thought 'Here comes Abhiya scene' ;-)
But Noo
n after reading all the update it comes woh b fight.

Piya shldn't hv danced with that boy to make him jealous n i think it hurts Abhay. Arre in dono ko koi samjhao :-P
Jeh & Abhay scene was totally dhamaka dar. What is Jeh upto now n what is coming 4 Piya?

Waiting for that Update was nice
n plzz try to update this within this week Plz :-*
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update... !! I love it whenever abhay is jealouse... !! Precap sounds interesting.. !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully penned Abhiya's emotions 👏
Its completely normal for Piya to feel insecure at times. She is human after all. But what's with Abhay ? One call or msg wudn't have cost him a lot.
Piya's singing wud have made Abhay happier had she not danced with Ritesh.

Interesting precap. Wud wait for it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read from chapter 4-6 in one go. sorry couldn't comment earlier. I will say what i always say, you write abhiya like a poem. so poetic and same here. love how you show their relationship and good to see Abhay finally meting and he even is going to audition for Romeo part which is surely for Piya only. i love how deeply connected they are. thanks to your writing. 👏
part 6: I love how Abhay reminded Jeh Piya isnt a thing n its her wish with whomever she wants to be. but why is Piya avoiding him now? whats the issue? but anyways i cant help thinking Abhay should get such treatment too sometime and feel how disturbing and hurting it is to get silent treatment from someone you really love. that too without knowing the reason.
Pia was jealous seeing Abhay and Alina and i completely understand why. while she has to stay apart from Abhay. and what she did while singing i wasnt expecting but yes im glad she have Abhay's attention completely. and boy dont we all love a jealous possessive Abhay 😆 whole function scenes were very well written specially Abhay and Piyas reaction to each other. and Abhay's dialogue as usually amazing. you are the best Indu 👍🏼 love this lines to much. waiting to know what exactly is wrong with Piya or any reason for that matter.

"Do not forget Piya--, that deep inside-beneath this facade--this me; there lives still the same Abhay!"

amazing.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

What's going on? Why was Piya avoiding him earlier? And honestly do they take turns trying to ignore each other or what?

It's nothing complicated 😆..

On a serious note--Piya is hurt. She expects certain things from Abhay! On the other hand Abhay is his own boss! Besides he doesn't think about such matters as of much importance. Hense all the trouble. ..

And now less communication leads to more misunderstanding!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for update Dear :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update


glad to see abhay behaving normally in college like other students. pia was a nervous wreak and no wonder she was worrying too much to even find time to talk to him. i think abhay was trying to give her some space by not intruding too much but i feel he should have made an effort to talk to her atleast once. any way i kind of liked that for the first time he got a taste of his own medicine(silent treatment)😆

Haha...yes. Abhay knows now how it feels to be shunned. 😆
Abhay is of a broader mind and therefore he wants Piya to have her own interests apart from her relation with him. But Piya..As you can see is insecure with too many things. Not that anybody can blame her for that.


jeh was warning abhay regarding pia if only he knew but abhay was right in reprimanding her to let pia decide for herself. the way jeh talked about pia it was like he owned her and so not surprised that abhay didn't like that. hopefully he would heed to abhay's warning.

Hmm. Let's see. Afteral Jeh is too stubborn! 😳

pia was envious and annoyed at the closeness b/w abhay-alina and i can understand that as she hardly gets these moments with him. she is having many insecurities and is not completely wrong coz the thing is she can't even clear them out with abhay due to her other fears. she sang his fav song to get him to look at her but abhay was too much in to his character of keeping distance. sometimes abhay forget the fact that pia unlike him is not too hard enough to tolerate everything and he need to soften himself a bit .

Hmm true. Abhay misjudges Piya and her capabilities as a human. But we also must remember she'd had the guts to love him irrespective of his identity. So it's not unnatural for Abhay to hope the impossible from her! 😉


i think it was a bit of an impulsive reaction from pia to get abhay's attention in which not only was she successful but also managed to pass her jealousy bug to him😆

Haha...so well you said that. 😆 the outrage from Abhay was obvious. 😆


abhay's entire convo was quite intense with pia. that entire part where he talks about his not so restrained version and not liking to share his belongings was pretty passionate. that was definitely very well written indu. all of abhay's dialogue were superb.

Thank you so much Megha. 😳 glad to hear you have enjoyed it. 😳

simplu outstanding update and i am really intrigued to know what did pia find out actually ? i think it's realted to abhay or is there something else? are khuranas responsible for the problems in dehradoon but they alone can't be so i think there are other ppl too.are the other vampires too behind them or is it someone from abhay's past has come to haunt him??

Thank you. 😳
Mmm...you are close. But the actual fact you will know only in the upcoming chapter. 😉
But yes I can reveal this much that other Vampires are behind. And that quite naturally calls for more trouble.


can't wait to read more

I'm writing the update. So it won't be long. 😊

And once more thanks so much for your invaluable comments. I hope you enjoy the next parts too. 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

Whoa! this is really opposite of Abhay to be so helpful in college drama stuff 😛. Whoopsie , Pia did quite sparked a flame of jealousy in Abhay with her daring act . I have a request plzz make Pia a little outward , i mean i am getting Abhay vibes from her ! during the whole SS she must have said only a few words more than Abhay has . hmm one more thing just how did misha accepted the job of delivering Juliet-dialogues . Behind the curtains or whatever it is still ahem unbelievable of her .

haha...yeah. but don't be too ecstatic dear. He just led a helping hand, nothing more. 😛

Don't worry. Piya will have lots to say in the coming days.! 😊

😆 lol...that's Misha for you! She can take up things and do anything she wants. Don't forget that she is intelligent! And this she took up as a challenge. Plus she'd no way to disobey the teacher. 😛

P.S. Thank you so much for the queries. Convinces me that you guys are really enjoying this story! Keep commenting. 🤗

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