~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page - Page 22

Originally posted by: Purple.shade

Ok, u r officially the fairytale OS queen 😃

First off , mermaid people and abhiya ? Wow, an Awosome combi that I did not see coming. And reading the whole thing I couldn't predict where Abhay would fit in . Could he be the sorceror? Or the human Pia likes ?

I am excited for the next update,and can I just ask when u r going to update ur ff? I miss it :(

Originally posted by: rmifzala

hey shreya thank u so so so much dear for writing on a mermaid fairy tale I love mermaids...a lot...& I'm so happy to read this...that to this is on my favorite abhiya so...it was a treat reading for me...
coming to the story...I was waiting for abhays entry...u know in this update whenever u a guy I thought he is abhay... 😃 but again I read the title & I understood that abhay is a prince 😆 so...I really enjoyed reading it...
pls shreya pls pls pls haath joad ke vinti karti hoon...jaldi update kardo yaar bcz ur an amazing writer which IF has... & I donno abt others but I I'm really a fan of ur writings... 😳
& I eagerly wait to read ur stories...so pls mere liye jaldi update kardo 😃

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

this is one of the most unique story i have read on IF so far. the mermaid concept is different.

thats such a huge compliment. thank you Megha.

pia is madly in love & is ready to risk everything for it. she has made a deal with the sorcerer where chances of her loosing almost everything are too high. i liked her determination. ya thats like her main character trait. I really liked writing her here😆

the best thing about this update was the description. it was so perfect right from the colours in pia's tails , the way her mom dies in oil spill and also the entire underwater life was simply written very well.

oh wow. i feared it wasnt descriptive enough, thaaank you. so relieved😃😃 as for the colours in her tail, they are an echo of the fish Lyretail Anthias (as I wrote above)i liked the colouring of the fish in a picture I saw😆

it's brilliantly written. can't wait for next part.

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

Shreya, This was really a fairy tale It was Amazing & Beautifully written...
Piya surely luved that human alot that she was ready to lose everything just for him
Luv that convo
Is Abhay a Vampire or a human whom Piya loved?? >> for this u have to read next parts😉
Waiting for Abhay's entry now
Whole thing was very well done written Shreya
Waiting for next part now Update soon..

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

so piya fell in love with this human and wants to be a human too so as to spend her life with him...thats all ryt...bt who is this soccesr...and who is this prince...hope everything will be ending well...

Originally posted by: doll.12

I read this story on the first day ... But surely it was so magnificently written that I didn't get words to tell you how good and well written this piece of writing is.. U r surely a great writer... U should write a book .. Or u have?? I don't know... please update your stories too.. Waiting for them too