~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page

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Anita

@AnnetteSpring

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Paint.It.Black

P.S. I agree with Shreya. This story and every other story deserves more than nice or awesome! The writer has put her time into it, so we too should not hesitate to put on our thoughts,whatever that might be. Good or bad, reviews matter more to a writer, than we often think it does. :)

I don't know if I should speak on this matter considering I have hardly written much , but I feel that one who actually loves to read can never sum up a whole story in just one or two words , good or bad , they would always have more to say. 😊

Edited by 2Obsessed - 10 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

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Isha Simon

@Ms.Purplegoth

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Ok, u r officially the fairytale OS queen 😃

First off , mermaid people and abhiya ? Wow, an Awosome combi that I did not see coming. And reading the whole thing I couldn't predict where Abhay would fit in . Could he be the sorceror? Or the human Pia likes ?

I am excited for the next update,and can I just ask when u r going to update ur ff? I miss it :(

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R Mifzala R

@rmifzala

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

hey shreya thank u so so so much dear for writing on a mermaid fairy tale I love mermaids...a lot...& I'm so happy to read this...that to this is on my favorite abhiya so...it was a treat reading for me...
coming to the story...I was waiting for abhays entry...u know in this update whenever u a guy I thought he is abhay... 😃 but again I read the title & I understood that abhay is a prince 😆 so...I really enjoyed reading it...
pls shreya pls pls pls haath joad ke vinti karti hoon...jaldi update kardo yaar bcz ur an amazing writer which IF has... & I donno abt others but I I'm really a fan of ur writings... 😳
& I eagerly wait to read ur stories...so pls mere liye jaldi update kardo 😃

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shreya

@Willy_Wonka.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Its really fabulous! Loved it

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#206

this is one of the most unique story i have read on IF so far. the mermaid concept is different.

pia is madly in love & is ready to risk everything for it. she has made a deal with the sorcerer where chances of her loosing almost everything are too high. i liked her determination.

the best thing about this update was the description. it was so perfect right from the colours in pia's tails , the way her mom dies in oil spill and also the entire underwater life was simply written very well.

it's brilliantly written. can't wait for next part.

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Awesome update eagerly waiting for nxt part

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Noor

@Abhiya-4ever

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Shreya, This was really a fairy tale It was Amazing & Beautifully written...
Piya surely luved that human alot that she was ready to lose everything just for him
Luv that convo
Is Abhay a Vampire or a human whom Piya loved??
Waiting for Abhay's entry now
Whole thing was very well done written Shreya
Waiting for next part now Update soon..

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#209

so piya fell in love with this human and wants to be a human too so as to spend her life with him...thats all ryt...bt who is this soccesr...and who is this prince...hope everything will be ending well...

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#210

I read this story on the first day ... But surely it was so magnificently written that I didn't get words to tell you how good and well written this piece of writing is.. U r surely a great writer... U should write a book .. Or u have?? I don't know... please update your stories too.. Waiting for them too