~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page - Page 14

Originally posted by: Purple.shade

This os was Awo-some !! I just broke the word in 2 syllables , because this deserved it 👍🏼

I was in love with the concept of u changing the age old Cinderella story , with the girl always going with the rich , all perfect, cold prince ( Gah!) . I mean Edmund liked her the first time because she was dressed all Nice and stuff and Abhay liked her even when she was her real self .
The part where Abhay teaches her all those ladylike stuff , it kinda reminded of the classic movie 'My Pretty Lady'.

And loved the final kiss moment .

Overall loved it ! Do write more Os's ;)

Originally posted by: pirl18

👏

So much beautiful sparkie n awesome os

New theme of cindrella
Loved it

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

That's a really nice spin off from Cinderella story Shreya. it was brilliant. Abhay as an angel very acceptable any day 😆

the story was beautiful and i loved how Abhay and Piyas relationship grows up and how in tit bits Abhay helped her with everything and how she grows the affection towards her. and also i loved the wing part when Piya touches his wings ❤️ Edmund was indeed a good man but like piya said he doesnt know who she is for really and Abhay does and accepted her, helped her just for who she is and she liked Abhay just the way he is. thats what matters. it was a beautiful story and i loved your language and writing style in this. too good. 👏

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Thank you so much! I know right? The rich perfect hero is SO cliche.😆exactly. Edmund liked the full oackage whereas Abhay knew her right through. My Pretty Lady? Which movie is that? I havent watchedAs for OS, I have written quite a few well not so much on fairytales but I think I have written five or six.

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Renewed version of Cinderella 👏 amazing . Thanks a lot shreya , it's always pleasure to read ur wrk 😃😃

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

Fairy Tales...

Nostalgia. .. and fairy tale have an intimate relationship..😳

As children, fairy tales makes us dream and hope... we learn to believe in miracles and overcome any sort of obstacles! 😳

And some stay with us till the last day. Forever. And this one was one among those very dear to my heart. :) Cinderella ! It was always a pleasant yet a sad experience to read it. And i never in my gravest of dreams thought that it could ever be retold in a way that in my mind i would have a different vision when thinking of Cinderella! !

And yet that's what happened, when I went through your version of the fairy tale ! It was beyond beautiful. ... ❤️

I couldn't say if it was Cinderella or the style of your depiction, that took me in a hold of pleasure and ecstacy! 👏

I didn't know before this that an alternate version could be this beautiful if i hadnt read yours or if you had not thought of penning it !

OMG thank you. huge compliment Indu honestly 😳

I loved the way you blend Piya's story with the original and the incorporation of Abhay as Angel, was really fantastic!!! ⭐️

I applaud you for this concept!! It couldn't have been any better than this. 👏

thanks! I really didn't know if anyone would like it. I literally say this everytime I write anything 🤣 but its always true😆

Your style...your manner of approach--everything from start to end was brilliant! And i didn't in the least feel that the end was rushed! It was just apt! 👍🏼

I like the way you have taken the Prince track. I felt bad for him but good that in the end he at least was not left alone n broken hearted, as that would have left a sad veil over the happy ending! :)

thank you. Yes I didnt really want the Prince to well suffer u know😛

All in all...an unforgettable and wonderful...version of Cinderella! Bravo!!! Keep writing. ..and i hope you pen more..so we could keep relishing... 🤗

And thank you so much for writing here! Means a lot!! 🤗

thanks Indu. hopefully I will write again. this is fun playing with fairytales. suggest me some to write on😆

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--