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Posted: 10 years ago
I am so so sorry Shreya for not commenting..You know how lazy I can get at times 😳 But today I had to comment..U know why? Becoz I finally had Sid-Piya scene..Lately I was gonna request you to put some sid-piya scene becoz I really miss Sid-Piyali bond and somewhere I couldnt help but wish to see that bond again...
The sid-Piya scene was so beautiful especially when Sid realised what Piya was upto! I was like yes..thats what I wanted to read for so so long!!!

Alina and Sid Finally!! OMG!! I cant believe this is happening finally...I think Sid too deserves to have someone and who could be better than Alina!!

And ABhiya?? God! The are so so cute! And did they start making out in front of Alina and Sid? 😆 God help their NOT-SO-INNOCENT Eyes 🤣

Did u just kill of Madhu- Arnab? Please tell me Misha is gonna be fine!

I so so loved the updates..I cant comment for all the updates now becoz that will turn into an essay but Yes..i so loved it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update Shreya

Finally Sid is coming back to his senses...Sid n PiYa was cute
Abhiya scene was soo Romantic
Poor Misha feeling bad for her

Update soon n thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Continue soon .
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Starting was awesome and ending was horrible !! Sorry fr short comment,coz of short of time.. Waiting fr the next one
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow again one nice hell of a update. But I just come to know that now few updates left and u not going to give any new story soon. I really like the way you write and I am addicted for your story. So this is very disappointing for me. Now come to update, like I said it is amazing. Piya's training progress and she really beat Abhay. Their hot hot time after their dual fight training. Now nice to know that Piya is capable to fight with Maithili. Must say she improved. Felling happy about Alina and Sid also Piya, Abhay and Sid. I like the talk between Hasena and Piya. I agree with idea of Piya is the one who will be stake to Maithili. I really want that. Fell bed for Arnab and Madhu for being dead by Maithili and I really hope Misha will be safe and some one will be there before any thing bed happen to her. Egarly gone wait for your next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
mind blowing as always
awe sid want to know if alina regret of being with him 😃 😃
alina didn't regret whatever happen bw her & sid
loll sid become chipku want to b with alina all the time 😆 😆
abhiya saw them hand in hand
finally sid getting his senses 👏 👏
he said sorry to pia 👍🏼 👍🏼
pia training session was quite rough
so abhay make distance from pia so she can think abt how to defence 👏 👏
pia felt so lonely that abhay wasn't with her
haseena & pia convo was nice
finally pia got improve in her training 👍🏼 👍🏼
abhiya romance was so passionate 😳 😳
abhay & luke history was emotional 😭 😭
oh hell maithali killed pia's parent 😡 😡
im worried for misha 🥺 🥺
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update

abhay's style of making sure pia isn't distracted was indeed weird and so typical of him. their fight scenes were awsum and if his ignorance made pia pull her hairs she did managed to make him do the same when they were training. sometimes this silent behaviour is indeed annoying no wonder pia was pissed off and more determined to beat him. her strategy was brilliant and it was only sid who could actually guess that.

sid apologizing to pia was indeed a welcome change .the best part was his apology catered to everything that has happened over the years and it's great to see him accepting his mistakes. loved when pia slammed door on abhay's face..he kind of deserved that though he did that only for betterment of pia. disha bought a puppy for luke ...that was sweet.

haseena and pia convo was awsum. haseena had promised to help her . finally pia defeated abhay..the shock and happiness on his face must have given her some consolation. abhay must have felt so proud of her after all he hasn't been defeated in a century and later she earned praise from chand also. that must have raised her confidence.

abhay's behavior was luke was instead cold that too when he was kind of idolizing him but he himself wasn't in a state to take up any responsibility i guess at that time. luke is indeed a nice character in this ff.

so finally abhay reveals to pia about maithili making her copies and how menacingly she had kind of slaughtered madhu and arnab. i hope pi and her group arrives on time to save misha but it's gonna be a hell of a task for them to stop maithili .

simply brilliant chapter






Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a very good update Shreya

The training part is very well detailed. Not just in physical action but also the thoughts of every one and after all sometimes mind controls the body and it has to have its answers.

Abhay is Abhay with his own ways thinking what is good for Piya and Piya no less and she proves that she is the perfect match for him and Sid realizing all this and having his moments of entertainment.

Its is the same trio - Abhayendra - Siddhartha and Piyali when they trained her to fight and One trained while the other watched and now its Abhay - Sid - Piya. Yet how different and detailed both the training are.

And how different and yet same their minds think. Its really a treat to read the training past and present.

Alina and Sid might have had a good entertainment watching Abhay and Piya, but they had their own secret which they wish to keep it discreet atleast at the moment.

Coming to Haseena, though initially she wanted Piya out of Abhay's life, she realized that Piya and Abhay belonged to each other and she was the one who really believed that Piya and the love of Abhay and Piya could break the curse of Maithili and free Abhay from the ice grave.
And it was not just to the human world, but she really considered Abhay and Sid as her own children. She had seen Abhay mourn the death of Maithili for decades and she also realized what Piya's absence could do to Abhay. Even if Piya was to remain human, lead a normal life. She was to grow old and die some day and leave Abhay back to loneliness and this might be even worse than than the loneliness and the years of grief he felt for Maithili. Its not surprising that she wanted Piya to be a vampire so that she could be in her sons life for a long long time, if not forever. And she had a good mind to talk to Piya about shielding her thoughts. Not just from Abhay, but like she rightly pointed out that other supernaturals might control her mind.

So Piya gave back to Abhay and like Abhay said it was he who won and we get to see some intimate moments 😳 *blush blush blush* What happened to the wooden cabin? Oh my and their dress were not so damaged when they returned *blush blush blush*

Abhay was sorry for his behaviour towards Luke and he had a good reason for himself. He felt betrayed not just by his brother but also by Piyali, who was his friend. Thinking Maithili dead, he had no wish to live and here he was turned into a vampire, cursed to live for eternity.
Abhay and Sid disliked each other and obviously they cant sing Hum saath saath hain in a family note and that explains Abhay wanting to be away from everyone including Haseena and Chand.

And his good nature could not stop him from helping Natalya and Lucas in getting their revenge and he already read a great pain from Natalya's mind. Though he may not have disclosed it Piya - Natalya had her life of agony and pain - She lost her beloved brother to a vampire. She herself was turned to a vampire and had to be away from her real family. And the worst part, like you described here, is the inability of High Witches to kill vampires. (It is really a very good one you mentioned it here and it seems good for any vampire witch story. Else there would be a big fight with all the supernaturals destroying easily for any reason of their own which they think it as justified)
But Natalya is now a vampire though she was born as a High Witch. Maithili is a vampire, but she acquired the powers of High Wizard by killing Mikhail. Both Natalya and Maithili share the same powers, of being a witch and a vampire. So would Natalya still not able to kill Maithili ? Or is there more - something like a prophecy on how Maithili would be destroyed. Reina has told Abhay that Piya is the one to stake Maiithili. The way Natalya had planned some strategy of training Piya, with Abhay and Alina, she too seems to share the same thought of Piya to fight Maithili. Is this due to some prophecy or is it something to do with Piya being look alike of Maithili or did it still have to be something from the past?

Natalya trusts Alina who is a werewolf. Alina is also gifted with some witch powers. So why was it not Alina to destroy Maithili. Werewolves can kill vampires. Alina might not be able to kill on her own. But she can with the help of Natalya and her own henchmen. Natalya cannot ask Abhay to destroy Maithili as he once loved her. Sid is not to be trusted. No one really knew him till now. Even if he says that he would want to kill her, not everyone would believe him. Luke seems to be in some kind of danger , so she might not want to put him in danger.

But choosing Piya over other century old and stronger vampires, is there something more to it.?
Alina was also overjoyed when Piya was turned into a vampire as if it was working out for good.

Luke really seems to have some comfortable moments with Disha and Disha is also able to sometime lose her shield with Luke. It was really cute when she gifted that adorable puppy to Luke. I never used to like dogs barking at vampires (even the good ones) which they show in movies. Its after all love which brings all living things together and it should be no different to vampires and pets. It was so cute you described the little puppy's antics and I was enjoying imagining that scene. So full of warmth.

Maithili killed Arnab and Madhu and that too in front of Misha's eyes. What happened to Misha?

Abhay tells Piya that she is taken care of, but by whom. Poor Misha, even if she survived she would have to face the trauma for the rest of her life. She lost Panchi, her parents and to witness them die in this way, it would be agonizing for ever. And if she remained a human, Piya is also not one to be close to her. Feel really sorry for Misha. and Piya, she would feel guilty for whole of her existence for whatever happened to her family and Abhay would never forgive himself for this. Maithili wants to break Piya fully even before the final battle starts and she gets her way.

Now Chand, Haseena and Abhay prepare Piya for the battle which might mostly be the final one. Abhay and Piya have all the reasons to destroy Maithili at the moment. But does Maithli want a battle right now or would she prefer to toy with Piya and Abhay by evading them?

Dont bother to answer my questions Shreya, for they are always answered in the next updates.

Feeling really sad that the FF is ending and I will be missing it a lot.
Edited by harinisriram39 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Absolutely fantastic update shreya 👏 . The training part is awesome with almost every1 getting involved be it abhay , Sid , Luke and chand too. It was good to see Sid n piya sum thing Sid has missed so much as piyali was his bestie. Poor Sid , every1 warns him to b Gud to Alina😃 it was sad to c how abhay behaved with Luke but abhay is abhay . At the end mr. N mrs dobriyal r killed, hope nothing happens to misha as she's da only family thing left for piya. P.S- feeling really sad as dis is going to end soon, cud u pls write another 1 on abhiya? Pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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