FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 61

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow yar what a update. Your every update left me speech less. The way u describe every visiting place like we are visiting with them. I don't know but looks like u have very much know about that visit. To much information. And what I can say about our beloved Abhay and Piya. Hey what about that pretty Big cliffhanger. Please be kind to us and give us next update quick so we can relived from that your teasing mind game ( cliffhanger ). U are really amazing writer. Loved it very much. I gone read that agin, so I can enjoy this properly and remember this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww full of Abhiya update.. I always want it. I just loved the every bit of romance !! So, the tension is Pia's life still in danger ?? I love this wild Pia !! No word to explain ur writing.. Just awesome.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update and thanks for such a long update😊

i loved the description of all the places u have mentioned here in update shreya. it indeed looks like it has been written by a person who had not only visited them but made sure to learn about their history.👍🏼

abhay was playing around with pia and i loved his prologue and epilogue dialogue...that was awsum and damn funny😆

pia wants to share abhay's worries but abhay being abhay won't do it and i liked the fact how he was trying to get into his head but couldn't so she does it smartly and makes him teach her that. abhay was bowled over by pia's move.

abhay finally teaches pia how to hunt also..that was cool. pia was admiring him while he did that

their romance was hot and wild like vampires.

abhay infact went to a club only for pia..that was sweet of him. they behaved like typical strangers meeting there..that was nice. time for abhay to have some fun also.liked how pia got him to beach and she made him walk with her bare foot. that scene was good when she was seeing the view of city from the top of building and kept abhay at bay.

abhay was like a walking encyclopedia for pia on the entire tour.

loved the scene where pia tried to remove abhay's worries regarding her as a vampire. loved all of pia's lines there. infact i liked how abhay admired her fighting spirit after all that is why they are together now.

pia called abhay a dictator😆she was jealous of girls staring at him and abhay wore black even in night😆

pia and abhay in paris was awsum to watch. so many fans pia had there and abhay must have felt proud of her.

haseena was lost in her past memories when she was turned to vampire and i can feel she was a bit of envious of pia coz not only did she lived her human life but was also turned by the men who she loved the most. but who bit her in that forest that night?just a random vampire?

i loved luke and pia scene a lot. i can see a future good friends in them. luke it seems too have some tragic incident in his past which i guess when he will get comfortable with pia he would share. may be pia can help him understand human behaviour more as she has been turned recently.


so a trouble is looming large over them? what is it? maithili? what was it that abhay discussed with reina ? the 4 letter word ...what can it be...u have ended it on a cliffhanger! whatever it is it has to be related with maithtili only.

awsum chapter
can't wait to read further
Edited by MS-meghasharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all Hearty Congratulations for completing half century

But you know what we want. We want one full century

Another mind blowing update. Coming to the update

Piya is now a vampire. But sad that Abhay could still not share all things to Piya.
I really loved his reply to her when she asked why he cant share his burden with someone

Why are you still doing this, Abhay? Why can't you let someone else take your burdens for once?" He smiled sadly and kissed her forehead. "Because I can't be sure they'll be able to carry it."

She may be a vampire but still Abhay cant be sure if she can take all the burdens.
And why did he want to meet Reina now. He now guessed who she is but did he know where to find her or did she send for him?
And did she share with Abhay on what she wanted from him and Piya.
But why did she share with Abhay alone? Piya was included in her plan of action all the time.

It was really interesting the way Haseena remembered about her past after seeing Piya. Its not all times one things about their past. Something triggers old memories. But is there more about Haseena's past and would this also show how her life changed after meeting Chand?
Luke also seems to have some painful past.
I wish Piya got to learn how to block her thoughts from mind from Luke and teased Abhay for sometime.

Coming to their honeymoon, yes I was expecting some kind of action But the tour of all the places you mentioned is a real surprise and along with Abhiya we had the pleasure of seeing all the places.
I cant believe you never visited these places. You explained them as if you really enjoyed all the spots. I had been to Finland and Sweden ,Scotland and Hungary, and a night at Paris. Still I cant describe the way you did.
While reading, really felt that that we toured the places, attended the concert, played in the beach and sand, enjoyed the view from the tower all the historic buildings and believe me thats all (nothing further *innocent face*)

And Abhay might have been to most of the places he took her. But he would have really enjoyed them only now.
And the way he hunted for her and helped her to get on this life. My God, no wonder Abhay Raichand is loved so much.


But please for once, let Piya play with Abhay shielding her thoughts (not the silent treatment before their confession which was a torture to Abhay) and not just her thoughts but her feelings too and want Abhay to go for her once. It was here in this update also. But it was both of them seducing each other and Abhay getting the upper hand. Please this time let it be Piya and I do want Abhay to feel jealous of her too.
Why should boys have all the fun? Let Piya have her fun once.

But looking at the last part, it looks like all the fun time is over.
I was expecting something bad to happen because Maithili would not lie low for a long time now that her rage would have multiplied, Not only Abhay and Piya are married and are on their honeymoon, now even Sid betrayed her. So its time she struck.

When Piya was showing Abhay the places in Paris, I was thinking she must be thinking about Misha who was with her then. Will Piya meet Misha, Kabir and her family again?

"They would have to go back a month shorter than planned" Does this mean that they would have to start immediately.

Hope nothing happened to Misha, Kabir or her family. Horror and Panic engulfed her means something would have happened either to her family or to Chandeena. Or it could have been Alina or Sid and is the four letter word "DAMN"?

Now this suspense is hard to bear. But then FF bhi jaldi khatam ho jaayega. I want to eat the cake and have it too. What to do?

But thank you so much for the tour especially with Abhiya and their - you know what moments. Sone pe suhaaga. Enjoyed it a lot.
Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all three last updates at one go. They were all beautiful.
Updated my comments in wattpad.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hii Ive read up to chapter 47 and i must say, you've got talent girl!! such good writing skills.. I was completely engrossed in the story :) why can't i see the updated chapters? Can you please PM me.. I'm super interested to read chapter 48 onwards please please 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Hii Ive read up to chapter 47 and i must say, you've got talent girl!! such good writing skills.. I was completely engrossed in the story :) why can't i see the updated chapters? Can you please PM me.. I'm super interested to read chapter 48 onwards please please😊




Thank you so much- Tanya, right? :)
The thing is, I was irritated by the lack of response from my readers, so I shifted it to another site till I finish the FF and then I'll post it all on IF. I can PM you, if you're willing to leave a response behind :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chaitalip

Chapter 50 is amazing n the places u hv described it is just wowww.

Waiting for next update😊



Thank you so much, Chaitali :) Glad you like the descriptions :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Res , m speachless . thaaannnxxx a lot for such a long update


Better unres soon, I'm planning to update in a few days :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek.VDian

wowww full of Abhiya update.. I always want it. I just loved the every bit of romance !! So, the tension is Pia's life still in danger ?? I love this wild Pia !! No word to explain ur writing.. Just awesome.



haha I'm not telling who is in danger :P

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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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