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Posted: 11 years ago
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Coming to Abhay, my heart really broke at his plight. I felt the same ache which I felt (still feel when I see the episode) on seeing the 23rd May episode.
How did he feel right now - betrayed (perhaps not exactly betrayal but something close)
If yes then by whom.

He had wiped out her memories so that she could forget him and lead a normal life.

Even on coming back he did not want to give her back her memories. She was now united with her family and has every chance of leading a normal life.
Though she lost her memories, on seeing him, she demanded answers on their relationship and he successfully evaded. Then she suddenly disappeared only to return back as a changed person.
He could feel the change in her, but never imagined that she got her memories back and knew everything about him, about them.

And all these days, she had been with him carrying on his own lies.
So she got back her memories and what did she really think of him, what are her feelings for him.
She did slip up on a couple of occasions but again she used to distance herself from him.
His dead heart really ached at her indifference. He might have felt better if she confronted him immediately on return of her memories. But she didn't .
She also seemed to know that Siddharth is a vampire and how he had attempted to kill her for his own selfish needs. Still she seemed to trust him and work in his office. Even he was aware that she got her memories back. She trusted Siddharth but kept this fact from Abhay.

Then coming to his own parents. Haseena and Chand also knew that she got her memories and even they kept him in the dark what if they had their own reasons for not telling him.

Siddharth, Haseena, Chand, Alina, every one knew that she got her memories back except him. And everyone kept him in the dark.

I really felt bad for Abhay. But then, did he not conceal things, for his own reasons. I wish he could understand the turmoil Piya is also going through. She could have even ended her life as a way out of this mysterious misery (I liked it very much when she tells Alina that she could have used these tablets to end everything for ever). I wish Abhay would get to know her this state of mind. Of what he did to her.
Haseena and Chand's conversation with Abhay was also mind blowing. The considerate mother and the practical father. (Oh my ! Shreya, I really loved the way you wrote Chand's dialogue "I think you should not blame her for it. We all have our own..." He glanced at Haseena, "..secrets." How well you understood PKYEK characters and also portray them in a more refined way. My salutations to you)

Then Piya's self talk again was mind blowing. I really dont have words to express this (You are spared this time from my comment 😉)

Coming to Misha and Piya's conversation. Yes this was really needed. All the time, Misha was telling bad about Abhay and then suddenly she tells that she is in a relationship with him. That was bad. And Misha really felt that she had to apologize to Piya for that. (Something neither Panchi nor Misha felt necessary in the show). But I failed to understand why Misha thought that Abhay could have been the reason for whatever happened to Piya that night. Every one knew that Siddharth was a vampire and he took her to Maithli another vampire who wanted to kill Piya. Even when Abhay tries to call Misha, Maithili who pretended to be Piya cuts the call asking her not to involve Abhay as he is a normal human. Even when Piya insists on going back , she never mentions about Abhay. Then how did Misha think that Abhay was there that night and was somehow responsible for Piya's state. Ofcourse he disappeared all of a sudden and and there was no denying the fact that Piya cared for him and if she asked for him, he was no where to be found. But there was nothing that they could relate Abhay with what happened that night.
Whatever Misha, realized that Piya got back her memories and was excited to share this with her parents and others. Something which was never given importance in the show. But knowing Misha's character, this is how it would have been. That is why I repeatedly say that you not only refined the characters but also patched up the missing links in the show.

Now why did we have Nicholas all of a sudden. Is this just a filler or does he have an important role to play, (in the supernatural world)?

And then enter again the psychologist Alina. She perfectly knows the spot she has to touch to bring Piya into action.

Siddharth - Piyali conversation is another mindblowing one. Sid may have lured many people into his confidence. But Piyali was one person where he opened up his true self. He considered her a friend. He is grateful that she had come back for him, giving him an opportunity to explain?
He opened up his heart on how bad he felt at the things that had gone and how wrong he was about Maithili. He had done everything for her, not even giving a second thought if he was doing right. He betrayed his own brother while he was human. After he turned into a vampire, he was against Chand and Haseena and his jealousy for Abhay was always there. He opened up all his guilt and sincerely confessed whatever he felt in his heart. But then why was there a gleam in his eye which confused and scared Piya. Alina wanted Piyali to make Siddharth feel guilty about what he did and he did feel guilty. So their mission for now is achieved. But why did Piya sense something fishy? Why was she afraid for Sid, that he would be harmed by Maithili some day?
And when she thinks to her self that Sid plotted to kill her, it was Piya last year, right and not Piyali. What does Alina and Reina want from Siddharth and does he have some other plan?

Its not surprising that Abhay left home. He would never have felt this lonely in all his existence as a vampire that he decided to leave his parents and home. But it is surprising that Haseena acually called Piya and told her. I mean in all these years, Abhay would have had difference of opinion and would have left them then why did Haseena want to involve Piya. I think even she sensed the heart break of Abhay and felt that only Piya could convince him.

I always wanted Abhay to go to her and explain to her, his actions. But looks like she has to find him and he would take it out on her that she never told him about the return of her memory. Atleast for a short while, I wanted Piya to back off and Abhay to bring her back. But looks like it has to be the other way round and Piya has to make him accept his love. Otherwise it may not fit.

With Dipannita dead, Jeh gone and Siddharth changed, would Abhay feel that Piya is no longer in danger and therefore it is the best for her to be away from him?
And final question have you disclosed Reina's identity that she is none other than Alina or is the suspense still on?
If Abhay realised Alina was Reina then why did not he not confront her on what she did or intends to do with Piya?
He merely acknowledges her presence when he sees her as Reina and assures her that he will keep her identity safe.

Will we get to see Abhiya scenes in the next update? Any teasers?

Thanks Shreya for a fabulous, mind blowing update.

My favourite line in this update - you sentenced Abhay to a lifetime of loneliness"
This one sentence speaks everything about PKYEK.. How a person sentenced to a lifetime of loneliness breaks it to be united with his true love.

Extremely sorry about the long comments. Couldnot help it 😳


Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
awesome update piya's part was intersting indeed and yes really eager to know where abhay went ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update di...loved alina-sid part...yeh abhay ka dimag kya ghaas chadne gaya hai?now why did he left?paagal kahinka..thanks for the pm di..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
chap37..
abhay wants to console piya but he is helpless
a heart touching part
haseena n abhay convo over da phone was a realistic one
abhay sensed something n then reina?
abhay had a glimpse of piya in danger
jeh came to bid good bye to alina n told her about piya being in danger n depanitta behind her fr trapping abhay
alina n dishu part n theen sid going after alina were also amazing
then coming to da fight part piya not willing to call abhay n abhay without caring fr his life goes dere fr his piya dis is da epical love impressive n un matchable dats da reason v love them like crazies as dey love each other like crazies
sid n alina were dere too
piya killed depanitta good nw going to read chap 38
loved dis chap to core
thanx fr pm shreya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear Shreya, please please please please please. Do not even think of discontinuing C&C because you are not getting enough response. The concept is new and people are definitely curious about it. Please dont go by the number of comments at each update, instead go ahead and write it as long as it does not stress you or take too much of your time from studies or other priorities.
Please do continue as long as writing gives you pleasure.

I am so sorry to put this comment in this FF. But I could not think of a better place where you would read it.

Believe me, your updates will find their own way to the readers...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all i would like to say--after reading this update i was left with no words! This time i am literally at loss of words. Believe me i dnt know what can i say to make my thoughts apparent...i am searching for the right word..bt of course infront of your writing-no word can i express that would fit.
I just want to say you are 'Magnificient' in the true sence shreya! 👏

When i was in the middle of the update i was sure that i want to see your work in a binding formate-nt soon bt asap! And you know i dnt say things i dnt mean.
So yes-i mean it.

Through time your work has matured. It has cultivated, emerging as the most finest forms of storytelling. ⭐️

You know i will repeat it again-writers like you should write. Writing is actually for talented guys-like you!
Literature needs intelligent and intellectual minds to make writing more pleasurable and words impeccable!
And you certainly fall in that league!

About the update-i dnt have to say much. Dnt mistake to think because there rnt any,bt there's actually so many that i dnt know how to begin n cmplete my comment in a compact way.
The point i like to mention-Alina and sidh convo. It was in single word 'Excellent'!! Truly truly excellent! Every word they exchanged and the way the situation was explained was truly..honestly brilliant!! 👏
And the portion that left me speechless was sid! The brief bt intricate detailing u gave on him was excellent! His dialogues, moves every action and reflex is incridibly well explained!⭐️👏

one hobby of the writer we have got long back n another we got now with the color!😉

cuming to alina-certain thing-very few in number-am afraid-i certainly cnt encourage! Bt except that i would say she is one of the most balanced supernatural in their imbecile world. Till nw the way she has pulled off truly deserves an accolade!
And so does pia! 😊 i admire her for the strong nerve she had shown all thru this time. If she lost that a little nw she is nt to blame considering the circumstances she had to face!
Regarding Abhay -i feel here he behaved just the way he should have! Just the way abhay shud have. (i hope u get wat i mean!) a storm was cuming i knew that the moment he startd giving short replies. bt i hope it wnt last too long as pia will be on her way-i suppose,(if am nt wrong) n hopefully misunderstandings will be sorted out. 😉
abhay n sidh are diffrent frm eachother yet similar in so many ways!
Btw i forgot to point out that while reading sid's part several times i was forced to think of Damon. Though definitely it cudnt replce sid as his persona was strong and too powerful to be washed away by other influence! Really this time u explaind sid part so well that for the first time it even transends abhay !!great job!👏
well i guess i hav mre or less covered everything! N if i havnt then its ur fault-that i cnt think clearly! 😉
p.s. And last bt nt the least-i want to say that whenevr i dare to comment in your works-its solely as a reader because as i writer i have zero rights to comment !
p.p.s. Abt abhay's pov nt including here, u did the right thing. So dnt worry!😊
And the humour in dis updat according to me was perfectly balanced! 👍🏼
Now plz carry on-and thanks a lot for pm.🤗
and sorry 4 late,am outside.so it took dis long. :-(

Edited by Bleak_House - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Dear Shreya, please please please please please. Do not even think of discontinuing C&C because you are not getting enough response. The concept is new and people are definitely curious about it. Please dont go by the number of comments at each update, instead go ahead and write it as long as it does not stress you or take too much of your time from studies or other priorities.
Please do continue as long as writing gives you pleasure.

I am so sorry to put this comment in this FF. But I could not think of a better place where you would read it.

Believe me, your updates will find their own way to the readers...


I was at a point where I was about to put up the discontinued note. But I decided I won't let people affect me. I will continue it, if only to prove a point to myself.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes Shreya, I am damn sure you will feel a sense of achievement once you complete it. Please please do believe me just this once. Let your talents floe freely. I am sure this will be one if your master piece.

Please, you need to know that you do have readers who are waiting earnestly for you to update it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Comment updated above!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shreya u were really thinking to discontinue it??😲 OMG here i was thinking u r d only one who wont let anything or anyone affect u!! D way u express urself in ur works, it seems dat u r writing to develop urself, 2 please urself, 2 say what u really feel about dat situation, not made up situation n description, i can really see Shreya through ur writing. Though Abhay is same 4 all writers bt yet i feel d diff b/w ur Abhay, n Abhay in other ffs, A basic similiarity yet difference. Ii hope u ve gave up this thought by now. This ff really gives words to our feelings n thoughts dat remained unfullfilled due to an altogether diff track in d show. Here we were pining 4 Abhiya, there they were introducing more n more crappy side stories, nothing focussed on Abhiya. So I hope u understand my attachment wid d story. I m sorry, i usually 4get after resing all coz of no net at home. Thru mbl i ve limited data n i keep myself on fb only dat uses less data :P bt i never miss any of urs or any other stupendous writer's update ever.

Coming 2 d update, I would come 2 my most fav yet shocking part. Abhay left???😲. I had expected by his rxn 2 whole thing in front of Chandeena bt not this!!! OMG I m so damn eager 4 this part now😭.

Does he know Piya is Piyali?? May be he guessed?

Loved d whole epi. So Dipu got killed. A shock as expected frm Piya's side as a human n on killing her best friend's mother bt did anyone notice how she killed Dipu? I mean she kiled her in a similiar way as Piyali.😲

Sid-Alina convo was damn good. I m waiting 4 next part😈

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4 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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