Another update which left me speechless. It was really very nice of you to give an update on new year.
A Very Happy New Year dearest Shreya
The update was so deep and touching that it left me with a heavy heart. Almost had the same impact like the 23rd May wala episode.
I am not good at commenting and it may be really tiring to read them. But cant help from commenting. You will have to put up with it
So far, I have read your OS, SS-MD, several updates of T&A and C&C and I can say that , you really rock in creating concepts and mold them into interesting tracks - be it romance or action, or drama or humor. Your writing skills are excellent. They communicate the point. They describe the person in general and the feelings in the respective situations, in simple conversations.
I should not be surprised at your writing skills after reading all your works, though your updates never cease to surprise me.
But what amazed me is the way you understand each and every character and you bring life to the character by weaving the appropriate dialogues into a well patterned track. Not everyone has this skill - of understanding the character. This is how, this person, in this situation, will behave, will communicate, will conceal, will express,will act, will react. I have seen this talent of yours in MD itself. But you still continue to amaze me with every update of your works. Every SS/FF/OS is different in its concept and you bring out the strength of the character accordingly.
Why PKYEK had been one of my most favourite shows is the uniqueness of the characters. The characters of Abhay, Piya, Chand, Haseena, Siddharth, Misha, Kabir, T etc. These characters, their dialogues, actions, everything was unique and consistent. These characters perfectly fit into the tracks which were segregated by order and method to give life into the concept.( I dont want to comment on the last tracks of the show as it was messed up due to the channel going off air)
You, in this fan fictions, not only depicted the characters in the same way as in the show (with exception to Alina), but also refined them (much better than in the show),perfectly patched up the missing links, and introduced them into the tracks and woven the tracks around in such a way that it is really difficult to segregate the characters from the tracks. It gives the feeling that the characters and the tracks are the part of the same system. ( I dont know if I am putting this properly because I have seen movies, shows where we get to see the star - doesnt matter what movie he/she acts, you get to see the same. But there are certain movies/shows, where you dont just see the actor but the character. The character and the show are inseparable)
The way you understand and portray characters (at this young age), my dear, you will go places, not just in these creative works but also in handling real life people, situations. My best wishes to you.
Coming to the update, the reactions of the characters to the present situation is mind blowing
First, I was wondering how come Piya's people would keep quiet that its late in the night and she has not yet reached home and there you explained. Alina taking over charge and tells that they were attacked by some guys and Abhay came to their rescue. Hope Dobrials take notice of this. Once again Abhay to the rescue (Ofcourse Misha now knows that Abhay really cares for Piya)
The Piya-Alina conversation was totally fabulous. I can imagine Piya not letting to let go Alina to leave her even for a moment. The night had been a hell of night for Piya. She was almost killed. If that were not enough, she would have lost Abhay in the fight that followed. And above all she had killed a person whom she knows very well (To her Dipannita is still a a person). She may have recovered from the shock of the shock of an attempt on her life. She may have felt relieved that Abhay was safe after all. But the fact that she actually killed someone. That is a huge trauma which cannot easily overcome. No one can comfort her - not even Abhay. She had killed Alina's mother and she wants every assurance of Alina that its okay that she had not killed Alina's mother but a wolf which was about to kill Abhay. She only had acted to prevent the wolf from attacking Abhay but not with the intention of killing it.
The way Alina comforted her was even mind blowing. She could have been a psychiatrist (I mean you would really be a very good psychologist or psychiatrist if you chose to study medicine). The only way she could bring Piya out of the shock was to make Piya feel the loss of Abhay. She had not just said the words that Abhay would have been dead, but she made Piya feel that Abhay might have been lost for ever if she had not killed Dipannita. This one treatment is the highlight of the update (Not exactly, I find many things in the update worth to be highlighted)
Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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