FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 8

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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this was my first impression after reading ur update!!
Yep! Long time..bt am here!😉 n good day to start, isnt it? ;)
anyway cuming to work-
"and he was tired of fighting himself.Why couldn't
he let her in? "Because you know how badly you want her, bravo! Bravo! Bravo dear! 👏
"And because you won't be able to handle it when she leaves you." Was he pushing Piya away because
he was...afraid of getting hurt?" I have to admit am impressed!!! Very impressed this time! Well..that am always..bt this time its diffrnt! U have explained abhay-like abhay! 👏

"He lay
down on the cool ground and closed
his eyes, willing himself to sleep. He
was so tired... Would it be so bad to give in after
all? was the last thought that flashed
through his head.." ⭐️ i really dnt knw what else to say...sorry..bt just 1 thing i would like to say-for all the povs/thoughts..that u hav written-on abhay-i guess this one was the best! And Its just my opinion as ur reader.

and cuming to the fight scene-i cant quote/pick a single line because the entire action scene-from Pia being held by dipannita to alina taking a traumatized pia away-is just marvellous!! Outstanding!! Brilliant writing!!👏 👏
and i dnt knw wat u mean by weak points...me-i didnt find any...! All i know is that-this update is a full packed one-wth emotion-to action-to drama-it has covered all! A full on entertainment! Loved reading it.😃
p.s. And the alina-Mrs Gupta convo was very well done. Liked it.😊
will try to comment on the next one soon. :)
P.p.s. See i didnt take 1mnth!😉

awsm update shreya ...