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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
a v nice n amazing story.abhay n piya getting married n panchi is abhays sister.piya is helping panchi against danish n in da process a piece of her saree got stuck there im worried if its going to create problems fr piya in da upcoming chapters.thanx fr pm .continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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comment updated on page 3 , sorry for this much late didu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Hi...
Da update was hilarious ...😆
Update soon..
Pmm me also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVELY STARTING DEAR PLEASE CONTINUE AND PLEASE PM ME
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Its very nice:-)
can you plz pm me when you update ?
loved the update<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter - 3

Hilton Hotel (8.00pm)

Pia and Panchi just give a last glance at the unconscious Danish and goes out of the room only then they both release that their saarees and pallu's and other things are little disoriented so they both goes towards the washroom of that hotel and clean themselves as quickly as possible and Pia told Panchi to put all the stuffs in Purse and just gets out towards the main door. Both the girls sits in the taxi and told the driver to Rizvi Road Circle and the driver started to drive and both the girls were throwing glances at each other and still shaken with the recent events but not saying a word suddenly the driver puts a brake and both the girls comes out of their trances and Pia asked "What happened why did you stop the taxi and why are we going through this road as it is a long way to reached Rizvi Road Circle" to this the driver smilingly "Madam the road from where we gone to Rizvi Road Circle was a one way and we cannot go back from that road so we have to take the long route for that and there is a traffic jam head due to some Barat who has just blocked the whole road but don't worry it will be clear within 2 to 3 minutes as the vehicals are slowly moving from the side of the road so you don't worry." But the tension on the faces of Pia and Panchi were clearly visible and Panchi asked in a low voice to Pia "I hope this is not the Barat of the person whom I am thinking about." To this Pia replied calmly "You are wrong I don't know about any other marriage in Dehraddun today so that means it is my Barat only." After saying this Pia just gets tense and told the driver "Bhaiya there is any other way we can reach Rizvi Road Circle faster than this." To this he replied directly "No madam this is the fastest way and you don't worry we will reach their in just 10 minutes." And he started to drive from the side of the Barat and Pia and Panchi looked each other and Pia puts a hand on Panchi shoulder just to calm her down and told her in a voice "Nothing will happen, till now we are alright and the situation is under control you don't worry we will reach there on time." After listening to her Panchi gives a relaxing smile but suddenly her face turned gloomy again as simran who was with his Dad was smiling looking towards her from the car which was parallel to her Taxi and Pia looks in the directions where Panchi was looking and pulled her back and told her strictly "Hide your face in the shawl and don't let them recognize us otherwise our secret will out and we both know what that means." And Panchi became alert and hide her face in the shawl and turns her face from them.

Pia also hides her face in the shawl and told the driver to drive fast as they are in a hurry and took a glance towards the Barat hiding her face she was looking for someone desperately and at last caught him at the back seat of the last car, the first thing Pia has seen was the heavenly blue eyes, the perfect straight nose, fair skin and the tight jaw line and Greek god like face which she always sees in her dream in a Golden Colour Sherwani and Dark Brown Pagdi smiling widely showing off his 100dollar dimple smile to everybody showing his happiness to everyone present there. Suddenly the driver horns to the people of the Barat who are walking and this brought Pia back to the present world and the situation and she just hides her face and looked at Panchi and gives an assuring smile.

After 10 minutes both the girls reached the Rizvi Road Circle and Pia searches for her little money purse and mistakenly drops one of the love letters of Panchi in the taxi but didn't notice it in the hurry and gives money to the driver and both the girls leaves the taxi their and hire another taxi for Dobriyal Mansion.

Drobriyal Mansion. (8.30pm)

After seeing the clock Misha was getting desperate and started to think that something is not right and what she should do first wait for Pia and Panchi for another 15 minutes or tell their parents everything about the situation but rejected the thought as soon as it came as it means a disaster they will totally freak out and between the whole house is full of relatives and guests and if even one person gets to know that the Bride is not in the House the whole situation will be worse than she can control and decided to go personally there she slowly sneak out of the room and goes towards the back door but as soon as she opens the door to go out she saw Pia and Panchi coming out of the taxi and a strange relive spread through her all body and she just literally runs towards them and hugs them and said in a crying voice "You two dumbo's, next time don't do like this as this tension thing is not for me because it was killing me inside and I was coming there to look for you two what happen there did that bas***d tired something come on tell me." To this Panchi reverted in a worried tone "No this is not the time for Question and answers the Barat has reached on the Rizvi Road Circle till now and we have only half an hour for Pia to get ready for her dream marriage now come on we don't have time." Saying this Panchi started to walked into the Mansion pulling Pia and Misha with her and after reaching the room called the beautician for the remaining work of her but after seeing Pia's condition she just freaked out and asked "What happen to you I have already done your make-up and hair." To this Misha revert "Actually we were sharing some old memories and we three had a little fight so it happened accidently" and Panchi too nodded but the beautician told them "But I don't have enough time to redo it, it will take time to redo it single handedly." To this Misha and Panchi looked at each other and in from the beautician that they will help her with the task of making Pia the perfect bride for the dream wedding of her.

After about half an hour Pia was ready with all the jewellery, Dress and make-up looking beautiful and breath taking and all the three girls bread a sense to relief after seeing that Pia is finally ready for her marriage and smile at each other that the task is finally completed which seemed impossible in half an hour and told Pia to look at the mirror at herself and slowly Pia opened her eyes and sees towards the mirror to look at herself and suddenly imagine Abhay standing behind her in his groom avatar without the pagdi and just whistle seeing her and she hide her face in her hands and all the three girls started looking at her astonished and then Misha told her "Don't worry she is just imagining that dumbbo here." And this breaks Pia thoughts and she looked towards misha, giving an angry look to her and she just shuts her mouth and shows a zipper sign to her.

Pia and Panchi thanked the beautician and she took a leave with Misha after some time Panchi told Pia to come with her and both the girls sits on the nearby bed and Panchi told in a sad voice "Thank you so much Pia, you again saved me from the jerk and that to risking your marriage which was your only dream and for which I am indebted to you for a life time and I don't have enough words to thank you for it." To this Pia replied in a smiling voice "No Thank you and sorry in friendship remember and everything is alright see the whole situation is under control and my dream wedding to Abhay is happening in another 10 to 15 minutes max so please don't give me these sad looks any more please smile for me, Abhay and our whole families sake as if anyone will see you in these state they will surely understand that something is not right, Ok" and Panchi started to smile a little and then asked Pia "Pia please promise me one thing you will never tell Abhay about anything that happened today." To Pia asked surprised "But why and I cannot do that I have to tell Abhay about it as you know we don't have any secrets between us." And gets up from the bed towards window and Panchi also gets up and followed her towards it and told her in a low voice "Pia I know you two don't have any secrets but think about it Pia what would you tell him that I had a crush on Danish in collage and used to send love letters and gifts to him and all this was a game for him to get me into his bed for one night and you just save me from him at that time and today he just came back and tried to black mail me again for it, but now if you tell anything about him to Abhay he will surely take some action against him and our secret will be out before the whole family and Sid which I don't want and Danish has already got what he deserve so please burry this matter here only and don't tell anyone about anything that happen in the last 2 to 3 hours just forget it" Pia then thinks for sometime looking at the shinning night sky and suddenly the loud sound of music and dhol starts piercing her ears and she looks down towards the road and sees that the Barat has finally arrived and Panchi told her "Look Pia look down both our families are so happy they are enjoying their every moment now and if we will tell them what happen I am sure all their happiness will be gone so just forget everything and think only about the most wonderful dreaming moments of your life for which you have waited till now and cherish it for a life time." And Pia just gives a little nod to her and forgetting everything just smiles a little looking at Abhay.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Update.👏 👏 ⭐️I just loved it.❤️ 😳 ❤️ God I hate this Dumbo Panchi,Taking Stupid Promises from Pia to save her ownself and respect in front of her husband and family.😡 Now I so want My Sid to divorce her when later truth come out.😆 I know lot of MU's coming on as Pia I think Will soon behind the bars in murder case of Darnish and Abhay will incharge and Pia kuch nahi batayegi bcoz of Dumbo Panchi.But Why I Feel that 10yr old kid of Chand's bro will help in the case as His symptoms are intelligent and Why I think My Sid will also be helpful in Pia's case Or better say I really want him to be the Helpful Abhiya factor in the story and come out as a Super-Strong Charachter.😳 Pls Continue Soon and PM me too.😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
continu soon & plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter - 4

Dobriyal Mansion:

The Barat reached the Dobriyal Mansion and everybody gathered around the gate for the welcome and Abhay, Kabir and Sid just get's down from the car and comes towards the gate. Chand and Haseena also comes towards the gate and Arnab and Madhu welcome them with the garland of flowers and then Madhu does the aarti of Abhay and tried to pulled his nose but Kabir and Sid saved him by pulling him back but at last after 2/3 tries Madhu successfully pulled his nose and then welcome them inside towards the Garden where the beautiful Mandap is set for the wedding and all the Baraties settled themselves in their chairs but Abhay was getting desperate and looking here and there as he was searching for someone or something and Kabir notice it and asked him "What are you looking for as you already know Pia has not been called down till now then what are you looking for." To this Abhay replied "I am looking for her security guard who threatened me to chop me into pieces if I tried to get into her room before marriage." Kabir give a knowing smile to him and assured him that she will also be in the room with Pia.

After settling all the Baraties and every one Arnab told Madhu to bring Pia down as the Mahurat for the marriage has already started and Madhu nodded and goes upstairs towards Pia's room where all the girls are gathered and tells them to go down. She entered the room and tell Misha and Panchi to go out for some time as she wanted to talk with Pia for the last time as her daughter and knowing what she mean both the girls go outside the room and tell them before leaving that they are waiting below the stairs for them to come. Madhu came towards Pia and just kissed her forehead and tell her "I know this is the day all the parents dream off when a daughter is born in their house and I like to tell you that you were the best daughter anybody can get an I am proud of you and I don't know how to express the feelings which me and your dad are having right now, because there is a sadness around us that you are leaving us forever but we also are very happy that our daughter will be someone's wife from now on but this is not easy task to handle as you will be not be only his wife but the whole families Bahu also so treat everyone with Love and respect and make them your family like us and make us proud of you like you always have." And just looked at Pia with a tear rolling down her cheeks, Pia just rubbed the tear and tells her in an assuring voice "You don't worry Mom I will always make you and dad proud of me and will always love you." And started crying slowly with her mom at that time suddenly Arnab appear on the door and asked smilingly "Everybody and Abhay is waiting down there for both of you and what are you both doing crying over a small thing, Madhu your daughter is not going anywhere she is here only the only difference is she will not sleep here." And after this Arnab also started crying and turned his face to the other side of the room but Pia already notice his tears and turns his face towards her and tells them "I love you both very much and I will never let you down." And hug's both of them and then Misha enters and asked everyone in a smiling tone "Why is everyone crying over here it is her marriage and the one who should be crying is Abhay who don't know he is the bali ka bakra today. By the way I have never seen anyone this happy on the day of his suicide." Saying this she goes towards Pia and started cleaning her eyes which are already moist "Now if you cry more your make-up will be ruined and then you will look like a chudial and after seeing you Abhay will surely run away from the Mandap so we cannot take this big risk so just control your tears for your dreams sake." And they all rubbed their tears away and started taking Pia downstairs.

Here Abhay was getting desperate as why Pia was taking this much time to come down for their marriage and has already asked about it to Kabir around 20 to 25 times in last 10 minutes. "Where is she? How long will it take for her to come down?" that was the only Question coming to his mind again and again. From past 1 week neither Abhay has talked to Pia or seen her so this distance was not going well with Abhay's mood. Then suddenly Kabir told Abhay "Look up my Majnu your Heer has come and that to, to marry a lallu like you." And Abhay eyes shot up to look towards the gate of the mansion from where all the girls were coming and in the middle of them was the face for which he was desperately waiting to see from last one week and Pia also looked up towards the Mandap here and there only to find Abhay standing near it surrounded by all the Raichand House hold and give a shy smile looking at him directly into his eyes but after seeing Pia in her Bride form Abhay was totally lost into her beauty and was just staring at her and she too was staring at him and both were lost in each other's eyes for some time and then Misha sees it and leans towards Pia and brings her out of that trance only to remind her she has to go towards the Mandap for the marriage rituals to be with Abhay first and then Pia slowly started to come towards where Abhay was standing still in the trance looking directly at her not knowing around what was happening and then seeing it Misha just got irritated and thought "When will this love birds understand that there are other people around them" and Kabir recognized her looks and brings Abhay back to the present just by shaking him and told him "Control man, control after 2 hours she will be yours only and that to for a life time so just control" and gives a knowing smile to this and Abhay just gives him a shy smile and told him to "Shut up, I not such a Despo" and Kabir reverted "Don't say to me that, I know you inside and out so don't ever try to lie to me".

At last Pia and Abhay reaches the mandap and the pandit told them to do the Warmala first and then both Abhay and Pia picks up the warmala from Kabir and Misha and than Pandit told them first the girl will place the mala to the boy and Pia tried to put the warmala around Abhay's neck but he was not letting it at last after 3 to 4 trials Pia put the Warmala around Abhay and everybody claps and then Abhay tried to put the warmala around Pia and this time Misha just pushed her head here and there and not let Abhay do it easily Finally Abhay told "Hey Kabir don't do it" to distract Misha and it worked and he put the Warmala around Pia's neck and everybody claps again. Pandit told them to sit at their respective places and started enchanting the Mantra's for the ceremony but Abhay was constantly stealing glances towards Pia who was just sitting their keeping her face and eyes down towards the earth. Abhay knows what that means and understanding her uneasiness, shyness, fear, joy and happiness just gets his hand out of his pocket and slowly placed it on Pia's hand which was at his side and assured her to look up. After understanding what Abhay was doing slowly pia lifted his face and turned it towards Abhay and look up into his eyes directly and Abhay slowly pressed her fingers with his thumb. After some time the Pandit told them to get up for the phera's and they both finally gets up and the phera's started and after that again both sits at their places and then the Pandit told Abhay to tied the Mangal sutra around Pia neck and slowly Abhay takes the Mangal sutra from him and tied it around Pia's neck carefully and then at last the Pandit gives him the sindur and told him to fill her mang and Misha helds the mang tika up to help Abhay fill her Mang and when Abhay filled Pia's Mang a happy tear which she was holding from last 2 to 4 hours just escapes from her eyes and slides down from her cheeks and seeing this Abhay just caress her cheek gently and then the Pandit announce them Husband and Wife in front of everybody present their and tell them to take the blessings from all the elders.

After completing all the marriage rituals Abhay and Pia slowly gets down from the Mandap and goes towards Chand and Haseena first and take their blessings, then they goes towards Arnab and Madhu and take their blessing, then they goes towards Suraj chachu and he told "I know, I know have a wonderful life ahead" and everybody started to smile, then they goes towards Sid and Panchi but they did not let them touch their feet and hugs both of them at last they goes towards Misha, Kabir and Sameer and they happily hugs them and everybody congratulate them for their marriage.

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