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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here are the Character Sketch for the story

CHARACTER SKETCH:

The Raichand Family:

CHAND RAICHAND.:- Kind, loving and principal oriented person loves his wife and children very much he is a well-know Judge of Dehraddun City who is better known for his justice. He is truthful and loving yet strict and hard by nature. He loves his wife Haseena more than his own life and Panchi and Abhay are the apple of his eyes. He has a rich family hair loom and a high Society tag to himself but has never considered it as a big thing and is always ready to help those who are in problem no matter what his society status is.

HASEENA RAICHAND.:- She is Wife of Chand Raichand and mother of Panchi and Abhay, kind, loving and caring in nature. She is the main supporter of the family and the back bone of the House. She is a Hose wife and also a social worker who helps girls fighting society norms and other Old aspects. She loves her Husband Chand very much, respects and sees him as an inspiration to help the society improve.

PANCHI MEHRA.:- 26 years old, daughter of Chand and Haseena, wife of Siddhart Mehra and mother of Simran. fun loving, kind, caring yet a total cry baby in nature. She is a shy person but at the same time very straight forward and to the point. She loves his brother Abhay and her three best friends from childhood the most that are Pia, Misha and Maya. She loves Siddharth but has never been so friendly with him because she is scared of him even after 3years of marriage she has not been able to understand his mood swings and nature yet.

SIDDHARTH MEHRA.:- 27 years old, he is Husband of Panchi and father of Simran. He is the son of Chand and Haseena friend who died in an accident long ago and from than he is living with the Raichands only. He looks after the family business of the Raichands. He is handsome yet ruthless, cold-hearted but sometimes becomes as adorable as anyone can imagine. He is the most moody person in the whole world. Kind and loving but has a certain limit of showing it and when it comes to his family he is totally a control freak. He loves and respects Chand and Haseena very much and treats Abhay as his own brother.

SIMRAN MEHRA.:- 2 years old, daughter of Panchi and Siddharth cute an adorable baby.

ABHAY RAICHAND.:- 24 years old, Kind, naughty and a total Prankster of the Raichand Household. He is the son of Chand and Haseena Raichand. He is jolly but yet stubborn at some point as he will do what he wants and don't listen to anybody silently, he has a expanded business of his hair loom but instead of being a business man which was a easy way for him he studied Law for 5 years and became a CBI Officer and now is posted in Dehraddun. He has only two dreams in his life one was to become a CBI Officer and another and the most important is to marry Pia his childhood sweet heart. He is totally a work freak when it comes to his job as his crime solving ratio is 100% for which he is appreciated by all.

SURAJ RAICHAND.:- Younger brother of Chand, He is also a CBI Officer and the Head of Abhay in the department of Dehraddin. He is very strick but when it comes to Chand he is just a bhigi billi in front of his big brother. He is just has one dream in his life is to be like his big brother in every way possible. All though he shows he is happy sometimes he feels alone after his wife's death the only reason for him to live is his son and this family who loves him. He has the habbit of saying "I know, I know."

SAMEER RAICHAND.:- 10 years old, Kind, naughty, cute but yet the most intelligent and important part of the family. He is the son of Suraj Raichand. His mother died during giving brith to him so from that day Haseena has taken all the responsibilities of him. He is the life of the house. He loves Abhay and Pia the most as they treat him like their friend only and whenever they don't agree at something they come to him for a solution.

The Dobriyal Family:

ARNAB DOBRIYAL:- He is a business man and a family friend of Raichands from ages both Arnab and Chand were best friends from their childhood only. He is a simple business man and also a partner of Raichand Industries. He loves his Wife and 2 daughter's Pia and Misha the most. He knows everything about Raichands inside and out and considered Abhay as his son only.

MADHU DOBRIYAL:- Wife of Arnab and mother of Pia and Misha. She is a loving person and very kind at heart. She is also the best friend of Haseena. She is like a guide for her daughter's but is always troubled by Misha attitude towards her life.

PIA DOBRIYAL:- 24 years old, eldest daughter of Arnab and Madhu. She is kind, intelligent, fun-loving, caring and beautiful daughter and human being. She has only one dream in her life from childhood that is to marry Abhay who is her life from childhood. Although she has to wait till Abhay reached his dream to become a CBI Officer but she has no regret for it. She always knows her life starts with Abhay and will end with him only. She is very shy in nature with everybody else but when it comes to Abhay or her friends she just becomes a jungly Billi who can cut anybody necks if provoked.


MISHA DOBRIYAL:- 23 years old, second daughter of Arnab and Madhu. cute, adorable yet a total Prankster. She is a care free girl. She is a little tomboy type and never worries about her looks. She loves her sister the most and knows about her dreams from childhood. She loves Kabir a lot but never shows him that she loves her.

The Rathod Family:

KABIR SINGH RATHOD:- 24 years old, Best friend of Abhay from childhood and now is working as his assistance in the CBI. He is the partner in crime of Abhay in everything he does. He is a total flirt but secretly loves Misha a lot and always tries to impress her by one way or other and she always dodges him.

MAYA RATHOD.:- 24 years old, Cousin sister of Kabir, very shy and conservative by nature. She is a total nerd at times but is always busy in herself. Her parents died in a plaine crash 10years ago and from that time she lives with Kabir and has become friendly with the Raichands and Dobriyal Children's as she does not any other friends apart from them.

Other Characters.

DANISH SINGHANIA.:- 27years Old, He is a total flirt but in a negative way. He thinks all the girls are just a body to please and throw out. He is a total freak and evil in every in human way. He wants to bed all the beautiful girls of Dehraddun. He has a difference with Pia long time ago and she was the first girl who knows about his games but he cannot do anything against her as he knew Abhay and Pia are in love and their respective families have already engaged them and if he do anything to her the whole Raichand and Dobriyal house hold will never leave him for it.

Other characters will come in later as the plot develops

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
interesting character sketch... i feel u xchange role of sid and abhay, like u make sid moody and abhay prankster but in show we have prankster sid and mood swing abhay... really its fun and interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice CS. Waiting for d story to start.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HAPPY DHANTERAS to All of you and HAPPY DIWALI in advance.
Below is the next chapter.

Chapter - 2

After saying this both Pia and Panchi took some old shauls and cover their faces and goes out from the back door of the mansion and hire a taxi from outdoor and Panchi was about to say Hotel Hilton but before it Pia tells him to Rizvi Road Circle and Panchi gives a confused look to Pia and she just tells her to calm down. After reaching their they both came out of the taxi and then stood there until that taxi leaves and after that hire another Taxi to Hotel Hilton and he starts to drive after reaching their the girls tells the driver to stand there for 5minutes as they will back in some time and the driver tells them to hurry up both of them enter the Hotel and Pia signals Panchi to go inside and she goes towards the reception to talk to someone who can help her.

Pia asked the receptionist "Hello, Can I know the Room No. of Mr. Danish Singhania"

To this the receptionist just looks towards the Manager Mr. Sharma and he just looks at Pia and then gives a smirk and then in from her he is in Room No. 452 to this Pia asked the way to the lift and he shows her the way both Pia and Panchi reaches the room and Pia signals Panchi to knock the door and after 5 to 7 minutes Danish opens the door and is shocked to see Pia there with Panchi and signals both of them to come inside to this Pia replied rather sternly "Just cut the crap out and give us what we want and we both are not interested in coming to your room." To this Danish reply smiling "You are still the same wild cat like you were in colleage 3 years ago but let us talk inside as this is a corridor and all the rooms are full on this floor and if anybody listens to our conversation you will have a problem I don't mind it." After saying this Danish just got into his room and both the girls looks at each other and then enters the room "So how come Ms. Jungli billi comes here if I am not mistaken today is your marriage in another 2 to 3 hours with your prince charming then what landed you here and I thought you don't like me" saying this he just gave a crooked smile to the girls and again Pia started "Just Shut up and tell us what you want, if you want money we can give you whatever you want and hand over to me what I want." to this Danish goes towards the table and picks the bottle of rum and started making his drink and then calmly goes towards the bed and sit on it. "You already know what I want but after seeing you here I think you both are not ready to give me what I want then I think I have only one way I should go to Sid with all the stuffs I have and prove him that I am the true lover of his so called beloved wife." to this Pia replied angrily "You bas***d how dare you, I know you have nothing to show him you are just a pretty liar who just wants to sleep with my best friend because she was the only girl who knows your true face and who kick you on your bump before you play your tricky games with her."

Danish just gets up from the bed angrily and replied "I know she is the only girl whom I cannot get to bed and that is all because of you but now she has to come to me and you cannot save her this time and about the proofs I can show you what I have." Saying this he just goes towards a cupboard and pulls a file out and shows all the love letter's and Photographs to them and said in a rather stern voice "As you can see I have all the proofs with me and all I have to do is go to Sid and convince him that Panchi was forcefully married to him by his Dad and Mom that is your future Father in Law and Mother in Law and she don't love him and her life will be shattered into pieces." And laugh imagining his win and Panchi and Pia goes towards the bed where the file is kept and take the file and then just looks inside rather shocked as when and where this pictures were clicked as Panchi never goes this closed to anybody before Sid and Pia asked in a astonished voice "When and where you clicked those pictures as I know Panchi did not got this closed to you ever in her dreams also" to this Danish answered evilly "Yes some of it are fake one and some are real but you cannot spot the difference so that doesn't count." To this Pia replied rather angrily "Why are you doing this cheap things if you want money we can give you a lot more then that" to this he started laughing and sit on the nearby chair and told "I don't want money I want her in my bed and this time you cannot stop her because she is under my control and if you want you can keep this copies with you because I have the scan Copies and all the other details in my pen drive so decide fast as I know you have a wedding to attend and one more thing Pia you are looking gorgeous"

After listening this Panchi started crying and Pia just held her hand and told her "You cheap she will never sleep with you we are going from here and if you want you can give all the fake proofs to Sid and I will show you hell as you know Abhay will never leave you for this." And both of them started to leave but in a matter of second Danish came forward and hold Pia's wrist and pulled her towards the other side and pushed her down and she badly hurt her head with the border of the sofa and laid their unconscious and then he goes towards Panchi who was still standing there like a statue who could not understand what was happening was brought back by the pushed as Danish literally pushed her to the bed and came up on her and tried to kiss her and started to pulled her saree of her shoulder and she started to struggle under him and tried to pushed him of her telling "You dog just get off me" to which Danish replied in between the struggle "I am dog that I know and for your kind information you should thank me that I am having you as my toy for tonight not your would be Bhabhi instead of you as she is more beautiful and sexy than you but I know if I touch her that Abhay will fry me alive" and started to pushed his weight on panchi and tried to kiss her again but this time Panchi pushed him with all her forced and he is just thrown a few meter away from her to the side table and hit his head which is bleeding now and then she just gets up from the bed and goes towards Pia who is lying unconscious in a corner and tried to awake her up "Pia please get up, say something to me are you alright, Please answer me". Slowly Pia started to open her eyes and sees Panchi in a devasted state and then sees that Danish is standing near the bed and his head is bleeding and is looking devilishly at both of them.

Pia just gets up with the help of Panchi and hide her at the back of her and both the girls started backing up and Danish was just walking towards them and told them rather smiling "Now you both have to pay for this and I know what I have to do with you two" but before he can attack them Pia gets hold of a nearby flower pot and just picks it up and smashes it at Danish head and his head started to bleed vigorously and he fell on the floor unconscious and Pia then shakes Panchi who was still shaken by happening comes to his senses and told her to collect all his belongs and puts the shawl on again and Pia started finding the Pen - drive in the nearby drawer and cupboards and finally find it and closed the drawer shut but accidently her saree is caught somewhere in the table and she pulled it leaving a little piece there and just tells Panchi to run out of the room with all the belongings to the taxi.

Dobriyal Mansion:

Here at Pia House Misha is having a hard time keeping the door shut for long time and is getting tense seeing the time in the clock which is showing 8.00pm to her and also indicates the Barat has already left from Abhay's House for his House and if Pia and Panchi did not reach in another 10 to 15minutes she has to do something or this marriage will become the joke of the town and all of Pia's dreams will be shattered to ashes.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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didu 1st of all - a million hugss to u 4 making panchi abhay's official sister
And amazing character sketch , i mean show mein toh raichand family sabse choti thi but idhar toh isne dobriyal family ko bhi maat dedi *lol* . Also loved the character chand is playing - a judge This suits him very much . u have also switched abhay and sid's character . coldness , mood swings etc. etc. were abhay's trademarks . 😲😆

well coming to 1st chappy - i still think panchi should have informed abhay about this , come on abhay is his brother a CBI officer , abhay would have postponed his marriage for a day or two and would have closed the chapter of danish singhania . 😡

Now i am worried as i think danish is dead now and pia will be accused for this .
I wish all the last traces of danish- panchi photos are in the pen drive only *fingers crossed * . danish is really a bas***d
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i wish abhay wont be the one handling danish singhania's murder case as then it will be difficult for him because he will get stuck between his duty and love 😭. i know if even abhay will ask pia the truth she will not open her mouth and wont spill panchi's secret . *sigh*
just waiting eagerly for the next chappy .
😃
Edited by withered - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
hope abhiya marriage doesn't suffer😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Y m feeling dat pia is going to be trapped in danish's murdar? :( hope abhiya will remain together. Thax fr pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update. So they managed 2 get d pen drive. Bt I m afraid there r more problems coming.
Update soon n u dont need to write whole chapter in PM. Just PM d link.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hope pia and panchi reach before wedding... nice update and this danish is womanizer...
gud that pia beat him...

thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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damn that danish will create more problems now..hope abhiya's realation wont get affected..btw really nice update..cntnw soon..

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