Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20--

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Hi guys next chapter has been updated!!! 😳

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

..:-( ...i too felt gloomy when i started reading it...but This was amazing...

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Seema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

brilliant.loved da way u portrayed piya emotions n nw waiting fr abhay pov.
thanx fr pm

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Awesome one...so pia indulged herself in books...and wat did she see at the last...😕

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Disha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

i wonder what happened that made Abhay so reclusive

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

You wrote Pia's emotions very well. Each passing days of emotions was well furnished but what I cannot understand is what is wrong with Abhay but when you said you will write his pov then I relaxed.

In the end Pia saw Abhay right??? So will Abhay accept her or not or will they live like this only. This questions are coming in my mind still. She deserve love which she longed for so long and hope Abhay gives her one.

Thanks for updating and sharing. Loved it. Keep writing and also thanks for pm.🤗