ss- Take Away My Heart discontinued note pg-17 - Page 8

hey jack amazing part... wow pia gudluck nawabjade ke saath accha kiya... and abhay ne private detective pia ke lia hire kiye hai... nice one...

Awesome Update loved Abhiya convo the most

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey jack amazing part... wow pia gudluck nawabjade ke saath accha kiya... and abhay ne private detective pia ke lia hire kiye hai... nice one...

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

lovely😊aww soo cute idea pia met Abhay...continue soon

comment edited on pg 10 😛.

Originally posted by: withered

read the chappy at last 😛😆 .
YIPEEE bhai u gaye me mine pia back , the same independent khudgarz one , now she is not gonna beg abhay to help her . Saddu raichand can go to his smirking land , where he can smirk all day long . 😲 he hired a detective to stalk pia , badtameez 😆 , pia and abhay ne role reverse kr liye 🤣 . what is with this Adi thing , change it ji , GHSP ka koi bhi character iss forum mein not allowed 😡 😛, kabir likh do iss ki jagah , usse stammer krte hue imagine krne mein bhi maza aayega 🤣

Originally posted by: jack-12

Thnk u ji itne aache comment ke lie😃

Yar names ki thodi problem to ayegi kyuki ye story vause gheet wale forum ke lie planned thi...

jo bhi ho ji , u are the writer , copyrights aapke hain , u can make aal the amendments u want , pkyek forum mein tepa maar kar post kiya hai toh uske according isse adjust toh krna hi padega 😎 ... 😛 mazzak kr rahi thi , aadi mahashay bhi chalenge 😆😆

Originally posted by: withered

jo bhi ho ji , u are the writer , copyrights aapke hain , u can make aal the amendments u want , pkyek forum mein tepa maar kar post kiya hai toh uske according isse adjust toh krna hi padega 😎 ... 😛 mazzak kr rahi thi , aadi mahashay bhi chalenge 😆😆

Wow amazing updates