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OMG Prerna!😲😲That was Awesome!!👏👏⭐️

wow great story plz update soon
cong on the new story
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: samwllms

new concept..nice...but its too faster...updt could be better if u had described the agony of helpless misha and darker side of abhay more deeply...good start..

thanku so much😳 i did not expect that you will comment here coz you dont like my ff and ss !!!!😭!!!!but how could i show that i mean i want to write whole story with piya pro !!!😳

Originally posted by: janvie

OMG Prerna!😲😲That was Awesome!!👏👏⭐️

I don't know what else to say,I'm still in shock.How can My Angel Abhay do that to a girl,and that too My GUNDI Misha?!😲😡🤢

I see Abhay will be evil or simply saying a Villian hereSo Pia will be fighting alone with this DEVIL+VAMPIRE=ABHAY.😉 😛

Poor Pia,Ab Shaadi ke baad iska kya hoga,I can't even imagine.😭😭

And No Hero to save her Bcoz Hum Sab ka Super-Hero toh khud hi Villian ban chuka hai.😲😛😉

Btw Your Quotes to the Comments cracked me up.🤣 🤣

And What do you mean by We all would want to stake a wood at Abhay's heart after the next Chappy?!😲😲

Oh God,Now I can't wait for the next part.Pls Continue this one Super-Soon unlike your other SS's and FF's,OK?!😉😛😳

And Sorry for commenting so late.😭I didn't got time before.😭😳

And A Biggie Waala Thankyou for the PM's.😃 🤗 🤗

omg !!!!you are the first😳 !!!!i think who have read my chappy carefully !!!big comment😳 !!!thanku so much dear😳 i am glad that you liked it😉 !!!!so much!!!he can do anything 😉!!!!you will see!!!what he will gone do to piya😡 !!!i dont think piya can fight him she will just gone suffer 😭😭!!!!dont imagine i will write you will just read and enjoy😆 !!!!really 😆😆!!!!i promise you dear !!!!this abhay is very very evil 😉!!!!thodi jalak toh mil hi gayi hai (misha )😳i wish i could do that but you know what my ss or ff did not got response so i used to discontinue them !!!thats it !!!we write ff for readers not for ourself !!!if readers did not like the ff then there is no matter that i will continue them !!!this is my take why i dont update or discontinue my stories !!!ohh !!!why are you thanking me i should thanku dear for such comment !!!!😳😳😳

Originally posted by: vampireking

<font size="2">thanku so much😳 i did not expect that you will comment here coz you dont like my ff and ss !!!!😭!!!!but how could i show that i mean i want to write whole story with piya pro !!!😳</font>

who said that i don't like ur ff or ss!!..i like every fresh story based on abhiya...and Do write through piya's point of view but just describe her emotions deeply...it will glorify ur concept...thnks

Originally posted by: samwllms

who said that i don't like ur ff or ss!!..i like every fresh story based on abhiya...and Do write through piya's point of view but just describe her emotions deeply...it will glorify ur concept...thnks

Cont. soon dear...!!!

Originally posted by: Sanderalla

Cont. soon dear...!!!

But plx plx naaa...we'll dont mind if ur story relate wd others cox every concept nd story has their own uniqueness ,taste,nd flavour...yummmyyy😉

Plx na...!!!

I never pleaded to any writer in forums cox I rarely comment...!!!🥱

But I'm gonna love it...!!!😳😛

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so sweet of you dear that you comment on my story!!i am glad that you liked my story😳!!dont worry dear my story has a very interesting storyline you will going to loved it😉 !and my story is different from any other story in this forum😉 !!btw again thanks alot for commenting!it really encourages me a alot to write😳!!

Originally posted by: vampireking

<font size="3">i will try to do that !!!!but i am really bad in showing emotions like other0„2writer0„2but still i will try just want to one thing !!!!as you are very honest !!!!i want to ask something !!!</font>

<font size="3">my story is not promising or what that i am not getting comments ???huh😳??please be true!!!!i will not feel bad !!!</font>

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well you are getting good amount of reader in my opinion..actually for me every single reader is precious...i never count them...be it 1 or 10..i m allways happy with just one single reader bcs i write for myself..i m a reader of my own work..i read my works as a normal reader after writing them only to understand my reader's view...if u insist me to suggest u, then all i can say is u need to relate more closely with ur work to make them more alive so that others can relate to ur story instantly..and one more thing..pls don't mind but u should check all the spelling and grammar after writing..I also make mistakes while updating but i try to correct them again and again...don't count number of readers every time...one reader is like one precious gem...:-)..enough of my bak bak..it will eat up ur brain..:-P

Oh god that was shocking but i am loving your ss.
Wow abhay himself is villian here. Interesting and totally new concept.
Plz update soon and pm me always.