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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Janani24
oh my god 😲 dude it seriously cant be abhay😲 i was gulping down my saliva dear i have read dark stories where the hero is the saviour but here😭 pls dear dont let it to be abhay pls pls pls

dear,i am really sorry😭 !!!but he is abhay !!!!i cant change it !!!!i always try to bring freshness in the story😳 !!!!!!i have already give the warning that this ss is really dark😭 and in the upcoming chappy !!!!you will gone feel like stabbing a wood inside his heart😡😡 !!piya gone suffer as there is no hero in this story😭😭 !!!and abhay is himself a villian !!!😭

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: vampireking

i cant change !!!!it 😆dear ,in this ss abhay is himself a villian !!!!😳😆

😲what he is villan😭😭don't plzz😭

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Noone hero...ohh God,,,poor my Pia😭...okk continue as u wish...but pm me dear plzz😉

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

its intresting start
look like in this story , noone is innocent , all are devil + I'm hoping some angel quality will be there in leads
thanks for pm & continue soon

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Prerna...its awsome...I really want abhay to be a bad guy..actually. ...how he changes into a better person will be good to see...this is a daring ff and I surely dont want u to change a bit...

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

starting was gud but what this guy is really abhay :(
he is bad boy than must sure piya will make him learn his lesson
cont soon

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Noone hero...ohh God,,,poor my Pia😭...okk continue as u wish...but pm me dear plzz😉

hehe she will gonna pay!!i am surely gone pm you!!

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Prerna...its awsome...I really want abhay to be a bad guy..actually. ...how he changes into a better person will be good to see...this is a daring ff and I surely dont want u to change a bit...

i am glad di that you liked it so much!!abhay is very evil !!so dont expect love in this story but yes you can expect hotness in this story for sure

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: bellaaa
starting was gud but what this guy is really abhay :(
he is bad boy than must sure piya will make him learn his lesson
cont soon

dear,do you really think that piya can make him learn a lesson as he is a vampire!?i will try to update soon

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

new concept..nice...but its too faster...updt could be better if u had described the agony of helpless misha and darker side of abhay more deeply...good start..

Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago

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