NEW ABHIYA SS:Rainbow Beyond The Rain..pg10..13SEP

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Chand is a devil in human here.So cheap he is!I LOVED LOVED LOVED the way you described AbhIya's scene.It was so PERFECT!Excited to know next!

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

update was intresting
this chand is monster in form of human disguised - hope he got deadfull punishment for cruel action
abhiya scenes were great & enjoyable , & there cute nok-jhok
happy abhay save pia & pia started feel forabhay
hope abhay know this monster chand & his mother muderer is none other than his father
waiting for nxt update
thanks for pm & continue soon

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

god chand is such a b*****d

abhay saved pia

loved it

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Raatry

@forever.alone

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

chand is such a 🤬 he killed haseena also 😡 ..and abhay is really a gentleman 😳 khadus also😆..feeling so bad for piya..hope abhay will save her from the goons...

Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

OMG, this first chapter was breathtaking. Chand is such a 🤬

oh dear, I hope Abhay doesnt take her back there

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

its a fabulous starting ... chand is such a beast here ... abhiya scenes are mind blowing and it seems both faced hard time in their lives ... hope abhay will save piya ... cont soon

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

i loved❤️ it dear,the first chappy was just mind blowing!!!👏

i just loved❤️ this arrogant abhay !!!this makes me remember of pkyk days !!

and innocent piya!!specially the shirt scene☺️ !!!ohh!!!i wish abhay would

have changed her dress😳😳 !!!!the conversation between abhiya was quite funny😆😆 and sexy☺️ too !btw i forget to tell you that i loved that part where abhay was looking @lip and thinking it was inviting!!!chand is such a 🤬 !!1how could he think of such low for his *hone wali bahu *😆

please update as soon as possible😳 !!!i cant wait to read what will happen next as there is so mystery !!!😳

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

omg so chand kills haseena as she came to knw about him being involve in girls trafficing... its shame and poor pia is victim and abhay is unaware of his dads dead... interesting story...

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

simply amazing update.

chand is such a lowlife here and sadly abhay don't even have an iota of idea regarding that .

abhay even though was too arrogant and cold towards pia but deep down he cares for ppl and saved her life . he is a betrayed person.

it was too tragic to see ur parents dyeing in front of u...no wonder she has a phobia of water.

simply brilliantly written.

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Awesome first chapter👏 Chand is involved in girl trafficking here! Iss that what he was trying to do with Pia😲 Glad Pia escaped and found Abhay😳 The Abhiya part was well written!

Chand killed Haseena Why? Pia's past is sad! Hope she remains safe😊

Update soon and thanks for the pm🤗