NEW ABHIYA SS:Rainbow Beyond The Rain..pg10..13SEP

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

nice update Tora jungle part was good for Abhay it will be really shocking to know his fathers truth but that is not gonna happen any soon I guess and Chand he came as a huge shock reading CS and prologue never thought of him in this way hope Pia will be safe

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

That was totally amazing Tora.👏Amazing start!

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Oh god, no, what would happen if Chand catches them-

no. I won't think of that.

I absolutely loved the scene where she tells him about her mother. What will Abhay do once he gets to know what Chand does?

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

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oh god! Stry is gtting interesting day by day
abhiya moments were b'fully written
she vil b safe as long as abhay is wid her 😃
thks 4 pm
dis is 1 of my fav. Story ❤️ keep writing

Edited by luckdiya - 11 years ago

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

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wht an update sir ji...too good n beautiful...loved it a lot..

he is such a khadoos boy..she is not chor re...
loved written each word Tora..each emotion of both writtn fab..he missed his meeting coz f her..

Loved abhiya scene very very much..too nt hot bt cute n tochy..splendid...
moon chacha..drugz..vomet..bygod.ye too bigda budha..hope abhiya vl b safe...n abhaY ko pta chle wht his father hv dne!

keep giving us fab update darling!god bles u!tc.

Edited by sukugeny - 12 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I hope Pia remains safe, whatever other twists u may plan for the story.

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

nice update
hope pia will remain safe ...nd abahy take her to doctor before tellng anythng to chand

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Rope_of_Hope

@Rope_of_Hope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

excellent update..cant wait for the next update..pls update soon thanks for the pm😃

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

I absolutely loved the update. All the small moments how two strangers come close were so beautifully written Tora. just loved it. 👏 I love the moment when they speak about their moms. this can be a prime moment which will make them feel connected. I love how you write the small beautiful moments. seriously too good 👏

Chand seems more evil than I thought. I hope he wont harm Pia or wont find them to harm actually. its good to read your stuff always 🤗