NEW ABHIYA SS:Rainbow Beyond The Rain..pg10..13SEP

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

great update ...
shit hope chand will not catches them ...
love the scene when abhiya sharing their parents past ... looks like both suffered a lot ...
cont soon

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diana

@vampireking

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

i loved it dear👏 !!!it was just fabules😳 !!!the abhiya cozy scenes ☺️!!!😳!!!you have written each and everything in detail😳 !!i could just imagine whatever you have writting 😉!!!thanku so much for such amazing update 👏!!!!hope chand will not do anything to abhiya😊 !!!!i aam expcing some more abhiya romance☺️ in next update !!!hope you will update soon !!😊

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

loved the update
the scene where abhay realize that they both have lost their mother was so touching.
finally abhay is not doubting her of stealing the coat...thats a progress.
n chand...he is so disgusting here...selling girls for profit...what will happen when abhay will find out about him...poor abhay...he will face the biggest shock of his life.

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rkmad

@rkmad

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

i love this update
story is going superb
plz update next episode soon
eagerly waiting to read
thanks for superb story🤗

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

a beautiful update tora👏 Oh no will chand find them now???😲 no!!!!!!

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

look am here! 😉
and That was an amazing update tora.👏 very very well written!! ⭐️
ow...Pia cudnt stand on her own n abhay had to take her in his arms! 😉Our pia is always so fragile lol...😉 bt loved their little moment. ❤️😳
and next this line-
"Of course not. People pretend to
care and love, but when the need is
over, they throw you away like trash.
Everyone can fake care and love and
kindness. That's not hard. I may be
faking it right now."--wonderful lines. Honest! Picked from the leaf of Life..🥱
Ones ur trust goes its utterly difficult to bring it back altogether again.

Continue plz.😊 And sorry for dis short comment bt right nw i am kind of empty wth words. Hope u understand princess.😔
p.s. Will read the other two later n comment for sure.and once more great update.🤗

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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