New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7)

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^^ I donno, depends on time. just started writing.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: forever.alon
abhay is so lonely😒 poor him...and has to suffer so many disgusting things😡...ya really they actually strangely similar😛but did abhay bring her in his apartment??is he really that jerk😕..btw awesome update 👏continue sooon😃

she is a escort, Abhay is paying her for her time. man has his need and he doesnt want to be lonely n Pia needs the money - veyr realistic and normal equation thats it. every man is not saint to sleep with just one woman in life n thats his wife. i know it sounds harsh just saying the truth of real life.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
another amazing update .To say that the story gets more interesting with every update would be an understatement tanzie.
lvd how pia literally told him on his face that he is too lonely and i can understand why abhay is like this after everything he has endured. actually there's no one to care for him and everyone he trusted has betrayed him.
i hate men who treat women like garbage and pia's client was a terrible men.feel bad for her too as even though she hated these things still she has to bear all of this . the restaurant scene was lovely.it was good and light hearted.
i hate farzia!!!

Thanks a lot Megha. you are one of the few people who are actually liking the story, others responses are very discouraging. Abhay has gone with his lonely and gone too far to look back and think about it now anymore. Pia's profession is life this, men assume they bought HER n not just her time 🤢 n perhaps Abhay's diff behavior and treating Pia as a human will make all the difference for both of them in the world.

Originally posted by: -SanaLuvAbhay-
Amazing update..!!
Story is so interesting both Abhiya are so diff and mysterious loving it..!!

Thanks so much Sana.. im glad ur reading my story 🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Tanzie soo lovely update dear🤗...Abhiya moment soo sweet...waiting for next Abhiya meeting with a toxic affair😉...continue soon

Thanks so much kakoli...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: flora212
tanz i didnt read this story except the first chappy.😊...and i didnt read the chappys which u recently updated of other stories!! the reason is i am extremly busy with my studies and i dont get time enough to come online and read!!😭 i am sorry but dont stop pming me...i will surely read when i get time!! u know that i love ur stories😳sorry again

Thank you naf and I do understand and i know you always read my stuff... 😳 read whenever you get time.. will be waiting for your comment

Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Awesome Chapter so Pia knows Abhay is lonely and he is not accepting it but I think both has started liking each other's company. Waiting for the next update eagerly.

Thanks so much. they surely like each others company. will update within this week.

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani
Amazing update 👍🏼
ohh!!poor abhay😔kitna akela hai!!!felt bad for him..😒
love all abhiya scenes..😃
oh god!!Farzia is too much..hating her.

Thanks Ipsha..glad u liked them. u might feel even more bad for Abhay in next update.

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Originally posted by: anjali0111
superb update
liked it very much
it is very close to reality...you have shown the reality, power games, tricks, emptiness of glamour world aptly. when you mentioned about farzia i could easily imagine that kind of women working in a corporate house...your writing, the plot of the story...characterization of abhiya...everything is very believable.
liked the abhiya date n convo...both are lonely ...hope they find some solace in each others company.

Thanks Anjali. im trying my best to stick to reality, lets see. I have met enough woman like Farzia in my life to despise them. thanks for the comment :)

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
hey dear one like from my side... plz dont mind like button not working...

anyway its really great update feel like i am live watching story thanks to ur writing... hey one thing i want to say i dont get y u called farzia khan a villan as u already mention earlier that every character of this story, even leads too have flaws then how could farzia charcter left out its just i feel she is more evil then other and the way everyone think of their own benifit if farzia take advantage of herself 4...

Thanks. here Farzia is a villain bcoz she spoils other peoples life for her own good. thinking of self beenfit is one thing and harming someone else for your own benefit is something else. its not jus selfish but morally WRONG. offcourse my lead has flaws but farzia is a neg character here n thats how i will portray her. i always keep even good vibes for my villain n thats how i will portray her.

Originally posted by: Syed695
Awesome..!!! very nice...Waiting for next nTjhanks for the PM!

Thanks so much dear.

Originally posted by: ..juhi..
fantastic update!!!! loved abhiya convo in that japanese restuarant...and also in abhay's flat...!!!!!

Thanks Juhi.

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Originally posted by: Achilles_Styx
Such a light and an entertaining update Tanzi.Totally loved it! It was so heartening to see Pia's blabbering and Abhay convincing just as a normal couple.Thoroughly enjoyed that.And the last scene..Ah!wish for things like that more.Gosh girl you left me hanged by those red colored fonts..Expecting the next update soonish!

Thanks a lot Renu 🤗will try to update soon;. writing.

Originally posted by: biyaahmad
Vry vry exciting story,keep writing
waiting fr more

Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: .VivaciousSoul.
wow... luved ths part tanzi... awesome...

n yes luving office stuff too... plz include it... 😊

Thanks so much dear 😳

Originally posted by: mire220
A beautiful uodate ... loved it !!!
You are doing a superb job dear !!
Thank you for d Pm ;)

Thanks so much dear.

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Originally posted by: bellaaa
well written update tanize ...
agree its such a close to reality ...
farzia khan well know that type of womens ... want to see development in her character ...
abhiya conversation that took place in restaurant mind blowing
felt pity for both of them ... i guess so they both are tough cookies to break so have to wait for their love affair ...

Thanks so much beenish. farzia will be here for time to time. thanks for liking their convo. they are very tough cookies and they dont wanna even think about love forget about falling in love 😆

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya
amazing update
happy atleast one person have for abhay in this world n in future she will become his partner ( hope so )
love the convo b/w abhiya in restaurant n after in abhay home , seems like both indirectly attracted
thanks for pm n continue soon
* sorry for late comment

Thanks so much. whats your name? 😳 glad u liked it. yes they found each other in the dark n lets see how long they take to realize it.

Originally posted by: vmpy
wonderful n amazing update.loved it to core.loved abhay n piya dinner n convo.
so per spoiler da toxicity of their affair is going to start soon.waiting eagerly fr da next one.thanx fr pm

Thanks so much Aqib 🤗

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thank youuu everyone 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Tanzie !!! 😃 What an awesome ff , I loved it and ahhh I m so sorry for being late . 😆

In the previous upd I loved the message convo . There talks are adorable and what an horrible client piya got ! Ufff I feel bad for her . Why can't she do some other job And well abhay he is such a sweetheart and oh boy what a workaholic he is 😆 I m soo glad he didn't give in to demands of farzia . I really wonder how can such kind of women exist . These kind of people are so horrible ! And misha saw her dad with a girl . I really hope she finds out the truth 😃 And abhiya's date was really fun to read . Piya's sushi trial was nice 😳 I m loving this abhay u know 😃 And next upd , looks so exciting . Upd soon tanz 😃

The ff is beautifully written tanzie , I love your way of writing . I literally imagine every expression of abhiya and your stories are so hatke . Love em . Fantastic job tanz 🤗Btw sorry for the chutku comment 😳

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Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
Tanzie !!! 😃 What an awesome ff , I loved it and ahhh I m so sorry for being late . 😆
In the previous upd I loved the message convo . There talks are adorable and what an horrible client piya got ! Ufff I feel bad for her . Why can't she do some other job And well abhay he is such a sweetheart and oh boy what a workaholic he is 😆 I m soo glad he didn't give in to demands of farzia . I really wonder how can such kind of women exist . These kind of people are so horrible ! And misha saw her dad with a girl . I really hope she finds out the truth 😃 And abhiya's date was really fun to read . Piya's sushi trial was nice 😳 I m loving this abhay u know 😃 And next upd , looks so exciting . Upd soon tanz 😃
The ff is beautifully written tanzie , I love your way of writing . I literally imagine every expression of abhiya and your stories are so hatke . Love em . Fantastic job tanz 🤗Btw sorry for the chutku comment 😳

Thanks a lot Rosh. no problm im always late in updating too 😆 you will know Pia's story slowly.. im not going to reveal it soon 😆 u will understand once u will walk into a much tougher world n your workplace. i wish u never face these. i tried my best to make convo of abhiya very diff from what i have written before. light, humourous n not the usual. i will try to write soon. thanks a lot dear 🤗