Raining Desires - An OS (part 2/pg10) 22nd june - Page 12

it was amazing part dear...
loved dis os very mchh...

Amazing zara ! it was such a beautiful upd . The confused piya in starting was adorable and abhay was confusing her more being casual 😆 abhay's jealousy part was so cute 😳 and simply loved the way piya said " kiss me " , wanting to to give him love which he deserved . That was a lovey scene ❤️ and oh well the ending was pretty hot ☺️☺️

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

Amazing zara ! it was such a beautiful upd . The confused piya in starting was adorable and abhay was confusing her more being casual😆abhay's jealousy part was so cute😳and simply loved the way piya said " kiss me " , wanting to to give him love which he deserved . That was a lovey scene❤️and oh well the ending was pretty hot☺️☺️

Hoping to see more of your writings on abhiya😃

Awww ThankYou sooo muchhh !!! Glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: nupsie

Zara...I finally read it...😛

Sorry for being really late in unreservng😃

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n now wen I've read it, I feel like u hav ended it too quick...it cud hav been so much more...I wanted to read more about how he ignores her for her own gud n how she gets more n more attracted towards him!! 😆

But i knw 2 stories wud've been too much for u at same time😆

I loved it...Especially Abhay's parts...how he follows her everywhere n still manages to hide his emotions n talks to him so casually n even gets jealous wen he sees her wid sum1 else😆

I loved how Pya accepted him the way he is n even initiated the kiss😳

n the DESIRES n KISS☺️

there were so many hawwwt kisses in this part...too hot to handle☺️😆

I loved Abhay's dialogues n u knw wat, I cud actually visualize ur VD😆

<strong>Aweeesommee Writing yet again n I absolutely loved it❤️🤗

Ikr ?? I ended so early 😔
But had no option na ... 2 FF's handle karna mere bas ka bilkul nahi hai 😛

But I'm glad u liked it 🤗 and u could visualize VD

ThankYou sooo very much Purrr ... Love u ❤️❤️

Wow I loved this os so far please add me to your pm list

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Wow I loved this os so far please add me to your pm list

Abhiya together yippie

ThankYou so muchhh 😊

Amazing Update

Hot too ☺️

great update... that was so lovely os
finally in end abhiya together 😃
well written