Passion of an Evil Lover:lst chpt,pg 37,jul28

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Dis is super hot updt dishu 😳
❤️ed abhiya chemistry & bio 😆
piya hs found true passion of luv . Bt wil happen nxt mrg ? I m afraid

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Dishu man what was that? 😲 That was one erotic sensous update I ever read ☺️ But it was apt given the circumstances n u have done a fab job 👏 Pia's dilemma was brilliantly written. How she reflects on Misha's words n how she ponders over her relation with Kabir which lacks passion. Reading Abhay's part literally gave me goosebumps 😲 esp reading this part:

"Tonight, I am here to show you the right way a woman should be loved and worshipped. A thing which men in your world have forgotten."

Their love making was sensous. Nothing like the racy stuff we read in novels n many FFs here.

Pia is made to believe Abhay craves to take her for a soulmate n she now thinks what she shared with her fiancee is some kinda compromise. Now she is in a trance but when it breaks will she still feel so strongly for her passionate evil lover? 😕 The forbidden seduction was portrayed brilliantly in this update 👏

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: sukugeny
omg!!!!!

very talented abhay...kha se aata hai kha ko jata hai..loved abhiya part a lot.plz cont.lets see how they r gng to kill abhay..bt pia ko mish k trh treat mat krna hn...!!!

no Pia is strong here. Even if she has to die, then it will be her choice and not murder

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: luckdiya
Dis is super hot updt dishu 😳
❤️ed abhiya chemistry & bio 😆
piya hs found true passion of luv . Bt wil happen nxt mrg ? I m afraid

next morning will form the ultimate base for pia's course of actions 😉

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: ..mandy..
Dishu man what was that? 😲 That was one erotic sensous update I ever read ☺️ But it was apt given the circumstances n u have done a fab job 👏 Pia's dilemma was brilliantly written. How she reflects on Misha's words n how she ponders over her relation with Kabir which lacks passion. Reading Abhay's part literally gave me goosebumps 😲 esp reading this part:

"Tonight, I am here to show you the right way a woman should be loved and worshipped. A thing which men in your world have forgotten."

Their love making was sensous. Nothing like the racy stuff we read in novels n many FFs here.

Pia is made to believe Abhay craves to take her for a soulmate n she now thinks what she shared with her fiancee is some kinda compromise. Now she is in a trance but when it breaks will she still feel so strongly for her passionate evil lover? 😕 The forbidden seduction was portrayed brilliantly in this update 👏

Thanks mandy for the lovely comment. I always prefer sensuality over explicit mention of lovemaking. and here it was important that I made it only sensuous and not lusty at all. Hmm... don't think Pia was really in a trance. It all happened for real 😉 and something else will happen in the morning which will determine Pia's ultimate choice.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

wow its hot update dishu... but i wish if u write abhay raichands pov...

a fabulous update...

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
wow its hot update dishu... but i wish if u write abhay raichands pov...

a fabulous update...

I am really sorry dear, but its not possible to give Abhay's POV here. it will kill the beauty of the story. Dracula till this date remains an enigma because different people view him differently. Had his side of story been given, it would have killed that mystery behind him. So, it's not possible for me to give Abhay's POV here.

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ipi2011

@ipi2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Lovely update. Glad you gave a little bit of insight into Abhay's mind.
Loved the Abhiya scene.extremely well written-the passion as well as Pia's dilemma

Awesome⭐️ 👏

Edited by ipi2011 - 12 years ago