New FF: Unknown To Love updtd (chp 3,pg7)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index
Character sketch: pg1
Chapter 1: pg 3

Chapter 2: pg 5
Chapter 3: pg 7



Character Sketch

Fernandis Family:

Abhimanyu Fernandis(Abhi): Is a tall, fair ,handsome guy with piercing eyes. He can melt any girl with his looks 'but he is a very reserved guy,he talks less and has a great personality.He drives a black Porche and is very stylish! Abhi got into business at a very tender age of 18, as his father had died. He used to help his mother but now Mrs. Fernandis as taken a leave from office work as Abhi handles it expertly. He is only 23 and his world revolves around his family! He hates Love or is unknown to love!


Mrs. Fernandis: Abhi's mom. She is a very sophisticated and caring mother...she wants the best for her children.

Rianna Fernandis (Ri): Abhi's younger sister...she is only 5 years old. Very cute, chubby and sometimes naughty, she maintains a distance with her brother and Abhi does the same. Ri feels scared to interact with her big bro but she loves and respect him a lot. Abhi also loves her but does not show it!



This is Abhi's car. They Live in Shimla.


This is Fernandis Mansion! Abhi's family stays here.




Mathew: Abhi's friend and collegue. He knows that Abhi has a golden heart but he reserves his feelings and has a strong reason for that! So despite Abhi's rough behaviour Mathew is always there for him.

Dsouza Family


Pia Dsouza: basically she is an orphan but Dsouza family had adopted her . Pia thinks that Mr and Mrs Dsouza are her real parents. Pia is a simple , sweet, caring girl, She has a natural beauty. She can be nave at times but has a golden heart. She loves to make friends and spread a smile! She is little childish at times. Her room is filled with sift toys and she can not sleep without her teddy bear, She is 18. She is not stupidshe is much mature at times! Pia is also Unknown to Love!


Pia's teddy bears...she loves the pink one most!


Dsouza House! they live in Naldehra, a small town near Shimla!

Mrs. Dsouza: After the death of Mr.Dsouza Pia is the only reason to live for her, She is a sweet mother!Though they are not very rich,,but are very nice people!

Chiki: Pia's best friend , who is like a sister to her. They share everything with each other.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome character sketch & look like great abhiya story
pls give prolague also
pls continue soon
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loved the cs...😳
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nice Cs...interesting u change Abay name,,,Abhi sound sweet...continue👍🏼thanx 4 pm
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Lovely CS. Waiting 4 d story to kickstart.
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Thanks a tonne for ur lovely comments😳 will be posting the chapters soon 😊
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wow amazing start and a v nice cs.ur method of portraying was different too.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Amazing cs .
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Chapter 1

"Oh God! It's so dark here! Yeh Chiki pata nahi kaha chali gayi hai."Thought Pia nervously.

Suddenly she felt someone's breath on her shoulder. She quickly turned away and yelled, "tum"?!

"you seem to have a very sharp memory."

"stay away from me, . Help!" Pia stepped back with fear in her eyes.

"oh! I just can't!" And he tried to grab her wrist, she jerked back and fell on the floor,hitting herself on the back of her head. Darkness fell in front of her eyes.



6 months later,


"C'mon yaar,its ur wedding not someone's funeral.Thoda sa toh smile kar yar".Mathew tried to cheer him up,

"I don't know,it does n't seem to be a good idea".Abhi is looking very handsome in the black Armani suit.(image posted below).And instead of the bow he is wearing a light grey tie.

Mathew:well it's quiet late for that.Besides tu yeh sab aunty ke khusi ke liye hi toh kar raha hai'right?


Abhi is wearing this suit (without the bow)


At that moment,the church's bell rings,

Pia is in her bridal attire,walk down the aisle. With one side her mom and a little in front of them is her maid of honour Chiki.

Mrs. Dsouza: beta, aj mai bohat khush hu, thank u fro letting me walk you down the aisle.

Pia:ma!papa ke jaga toh ap hi lenge na!

Mrs. Dsouza smiles ,kisses Pia on the forehead and gives her hand to the groom.

Pia is looking divine in her white wedding gown (pic postd down) Everyone looks at her with admiring eyes, except for her groom who seems to be lost somewhere.


Pia's bridal attire!


The wedding vows starts,

Priest:Mr. Abhimanyu Fernandis do u take Miss Pia Dsouza as ur lawfully wedded wife and promise to be with her in all terms of lifetill death tears u apart?

Abhi is silent,with his eyes fixed on the floor and a serious expression on his face.

Priest:Mr. Fernandis! Do I need to repeat it again?

Everyone has their eyes fixed on Abhi, who is silent. Mathew gives him a little jerk over his shoulders.

Abhi: ha..hmm..what happened?

Mathew(in a lower voice):yar kya kar raha hai?where r u?

Abhi (confused):woh..mai...

Mathew:just answer the priest!

Abhi looks around , then at the Priest,

Abhi: "I do".

The same procedure is repeated with Pia who also says "I do",but at a lower voice.They exchange the wedding bands and sign the bond and are officially pronounced husband ..wife.


Abhi and Pia's wedding bands!


Priest:u may now kiss the bride.

Abhi and Pia get really uncomfortable. He moves his face towards Pia's cheek without touching her with his lips.

The wedding ceremony takes place nicely and everyone seems to have a nice and happy time,except for the bride and groom,who were just sitting numb during the whole time.

Abhi is staring at the floor and Pia is fingering her bracelet,both has the same sad and confusing expressions on their faces.They do not have their first dance .The guests starts to congratulate them and leave.

It's now time for the bride and groom to leave .They have a heart touching goodbye and Pia is with Abhi alone in the car.

Edited by DarkAngels - 12 years ago

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