#new abhiya ff:sajni(my beloved)#

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hello guyzz at last i managed to finish this mega update somehow😆!!cause every1 knows jab main abhiya ke bare me likhna suru karti hoon to mere emotions cntrl nahi hote😛.this two parts were extremely long!!and i'm affraid that kahin jyada emotions mein maine chappter ka halwa na bna diya ho!!!hope u like!!!pls reply soon.i'm allready bitting my nails😕😕

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~chapter 7~

part 1

piya was on their hotel room,sending her pictures to arhan and mehak via mail.it was amost 1 o clock at night.piya's parents were allreasy in deep sleep.after completing her work she turned off her lappy and arranged all things properly.her mom had ordered her to go to bed as soon as she finished her works.but piya didn't feel sleepy at all.although for the whole she ran hear and there in forrest to catch the pictures for their article but she wasn't feeling tired a bit.rather,she was feeling excited.like something was going to happen soon and her heart was giving her any indication.piya laughed quitely.unlike other girl of her ages she always preffered her mind first and she never flow with emmotions.then what's going on with her now.dad was r8!this place had something which can easily get over any1.piya smilled and looked outside through the glasses of window.it was a fullmoon n8 and her frnds said that hill area looks so beautiful in moonlight!why shouldn't take a glance at outside?!piya looked at her dress.she was wearing a 3qtr sleve salwar top with a patiyala pant.it was not enough to prevent the cold freezing weather outside this room warmed by heater.so she quickly took out a stole and wrapped herself properly.she came out in the broad balcony.with her first glance towards the scenery she was all startled.the moon was glowing on the sky with his all glory.there was a little cloud surrounding it but cldn't be eable to hide his silvery shine anyhow.the hills and forrest were like bathing in the silvery moonlight and everything looked marvelous.piya was all amazed and thanked her fortune.if she went to sleep she wld miss such a beautiful sight.she felt so lucky to be there at that time,at that night when everything was so beautiful.this resort was situated just at the edge of forrest lines and so close to that old ruin.just five mins walk through that narrow track at other side of road.the chilly wind ruffled piya's curls.there's something spacial about the n8!piya cld hear this on vains.she stood at the edge supporting the iron bars and closed her eyes to fill the magic in chilly air.the cold wind brushed her face and suddenly she heared a sound!piya pooped out her eyes in surprise.what's sound was that.the sound seemed low at first but after some instant it became loud enough to hear.it was not just a sound.it was a harmony!!!some1 was playing any kind of musical instruments!!may be guiter...!!!!yes,definately.she cldn't be wrong as she freq listen arhan playing guiter.but who cld be the crazy person,playing guiter at this time.she had to admit the sound was so beautiful and maddening.she never hard some1 to play guiter so beautifully and perfectly.not a single fault on the cord.piya didn't know why she was feeling so restless as soon as the music reached to her.she badly wanted to go outside and search for the guiterist!!he never felt that much urge for something.she looked inside the room.her parents were sleepimg soundly.'what am i thinking!?no i shouldn't do that!!it's so reckless!!!"piya tried to console herself.but it didn't work!she was never so desperate before.grabbing her mobile she tiptoed her feet and swiftly got out of the room locking the door and came out at the frontyard.the main gate was locked.the music was more loud than before.she thought again to go back to the room but it was so late.the music was like haunting her like a magnet!piya rushed at the backside of the building.yesterday she observed a very old little gate behid the bushes while she was wandering alone through the whole resort.it was kept all broken.might be the stuffs and crews of those hotel didn't remind or know about the existance where any thieves cld easilly enter inside the resort.but she didn't know she had to use that gate anyhow.she quickly got inside the bush and she got out of the broken iron bars of the gates so easilly.she didn't even know why she had to do all those weired stuffs?!what got into her.but like she had no controles over herself.after coming out she cld easilly detect the direction of the guiters beautiful sound.to her surprise it was coming from the direction of that dense forrest where the old riun of pandher palace situated!without thinking further piya quickly covered the main road and came in front of that narrow forrest track.she again hesitated for a while.but at that instant a voice came along with the music.some1 started to sing along with that music with his beautiful manly voice.piya cldn't resist her feets anymore and her feet automatically mooved foroward.she didn't know where her feets taking her.she had no controle over them.all she cld sense was that music and that attracktive and so perfect male voice who was singing.she cld clearly hear each and every lyrics as she was mooving foroward.

Main teri aankhoon mein rehta hoon
tujhe pata na chale
tere har pal mein gujra hoon
tujhe pata na chale
Kare toh phir kya kare
tere bin kaise jiye
aaankhoon mein pyaar liye
bolo kahaan kahaaan phire
piya was all dumbstuck!!!the lyrics were so heart touching,beautifull and as well as painfull.and the voice!!!although it was beautiful but so much broken and shattered.she never heared some1 to justify pain so beautifully before!!!she wandered how much pain cld be in that persons heart who was playing and singing like this?!she was all drifted away by the words...

Khafa to hum bhi hai tum bhi ho
humein pata na chale
judai ka mujhe gham bhi hai
koi aisi khata na karein
Kare toh phir kya kare
tere bin kaise jiye
aankhoon mein pyaar liye
bolo kahaan kahaan phire
Sajni paas bulao na
ki dil aaj toota hai
aaj toota hai
sajan maan jao na
ki woh aaj rootha hai
aaj rootha hai
koi use manaye na
Jaane ja
dil tujhe hi chaaahe na

piya didn't know why the song was affecting her so much!!she never sensed so strong pull in her whole life evershe felt like the song was calling her.she cld feel the pain of the person through that song.she cld felt her heart melting for the first time like this.to her unknown a teardrop automatically rolled down from her eyes as she mooved through the shades of trees like a hypnotized.

part 2 below😳

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

pic by me😳

part 2

piya didn't know how and when she came near the old ruin.she looked towards everywhere.no one was arround.every1 was panicked by the mysterious murderer and the old palace was standing all alone with it's broken huge brick skeleton.piya cld still heared the music from inside.she stepped through the bricks and came inside.going through the dark alley following the sound,she came at the huge hall.her eyes fell at the corner where moonlight was coming through the broken wall and falling over piyashree's oilpaint.she saw a fig seating near the oilpaint over the broken stairsteps with a guiter.his feature was not clearly visible as he was all in shadows.but ut was clear that he was the source of that song and music.piya felt a shiver through her spines.whose that guy??!!why he was at a place like this in such an odd time?was he responsible for all the murders?she forowaded her steps conciously through the broken bricks and came foroward.but somehow she didn't dared to go infront of that guy.she stood beside a coloumn and watch over as the sadowish fig started his song again after a long musical pause...

Humein dil se bhulao na
yehi ab kehna hai
ab kehna hai
tum paas aaoona
aao na...

piya was again drifted away by the song and forgot the surroundings.she felt such a strong pool to that shadowish fig like she wanted to go infront of him and soothe his pain somehow!to her unconcious her feet suddenly got stumbled and kicked some stone chips making a huge sound.piya quickly came out of her transe and her eyes became wide in hoorror.

abhay cldn't found his piece anywhere after he saw that girl whose face was look allike of her piya!although it came out to be just a dream,why he cldn't believe that it was just an illution!!he was going crazzy and felt so much weak.he hated it.he didn't want to feel that much powerless again!!after rushing furiously at each and evrey corner of forrest he at last came at the place where he cld find his peace.coming inside the old ruined palace he got out his fav guiter from the hidden place.he came near piyashree's oilpaint and sat on his usual place.after that he poured his all pain of dead herat in that song which he played for his beloved!he was so lost in that song that he didn't have the sense of time and surroundings!!he didn't know why he was feeling so restless!!it necer happened to him for ages.but suddenly a cracking sound let him out of his transe.he again got allerted and sensed a presence arround.and his feature suddenly became hard!he again sensed the overwhelming blood which he sensed before.again the incident of that night flashed into his mind.the rain,that amazing pool towards the heavenly blood,that girl on the rain,her face...she was hear!!!again to make him crazy!to feel him powerless again!!!no he cldn't allow any1 to make him weak.spacially any mere human!he clenched his feast and his eyes caught all deep red in furi as he sensed the footsteps fading at distant.at that instant a cloud appeared infront of moon and everything was covered by darkness.

piya had sensed the danger allready as soon as the song was stopped midway.witout looking beside for a single time she rushed gathering all her strength.she cld understand she had seen something which she shouldn't and she had to go far away from this place as soon as possible!!she was having a gr8 difficulties to detect the path as the moon was darkened by cloud.she knew she had gone to another path rather than the way to risort.but she didn't have the time to think about that!she stopped at some further distant from palace as she was all out of breath.she stood there supporting a tree.she was taking heavy gasps when the mobile on her hand got her view and she quickly dialled the number of her dad.but alas his mob was switched off."damn!!"piya whispered and looked behind and was suddenly frozed by two pairs of blazing red eyes looking directly towards her.before she cld think further two pairs of still hard hand which was colder than even a dry ice pinned her so tightly with the tree walls behind.piya never felt that much affraid in her whole lifetime.she cldn't c anything in darkness rather than those pair of deadly blood red eyes and cldn't feel anything without that inhuman stone grasp over her forearms.the hands were so cold which was freezing her vains and all senses.she felt so numb in fear that she cldn't even scream for help.she hard low growls coming from the direction of that blazing eyes.who was he?what was he?was he even human?an animal or any demon came straightly from hell to take her with him?piya cld c the end in that blazing red eyes.as that eyes shifted more close to her piya cldn't stand anymore and sqweezes her eyes shut in fear!!

abhay cldn't c the human girls face as it was dark suddenly.but she cld feel her senses and mostly her heavenly blood!that same sense which was attrackting him crazilly on that night.she was hear again and these time he wldn't left her allive for driving him upto these crazyness!!he let his inner demons got over him and bended to human girl's lightly visible feature in darkness.but destiny,always played it's trick at time.at that instant the cloud mooved from the moons face and again everything became crystal clear.at that instant abhay frozed looking at the girl shivering in his stone grasp closing his eyes tightly.what!!again that face???...that dream again???but how cld it be dream???!!!she was so close to him!!!he was even feeling her with all her human senses.dream cldn't be that much clear!!!so it was not an illusion.the girl really exist!!!she was real.abhay suddenly felt a huge rush of that dead emotions which was lost long ago.his inner beast again became powerless and he continued to look to her angelic face glowing in moonlight.

piya was waiting for something to happen.but nothing happened.she felt the stone grasp suddenly loosing over her arms.she felt confused.and at next instant she felt that stone ice cold hand cupping her face gently.what's going on.piya opened her eyes to look into that deadly eyes but she was hell surpried.where's that eyes were gone?she was looking to a pair of most beautiful oceanic blue ice ever.she cldn't resist the amused gasp came out.what happened?where did that red eyes had gone?the feature of that guy was not visible to pia as the moonlight was only fallen over his eyes.but he had a quite height over her and he seemed inhumanly strong.but the thing which caught her was none other than his oceanic blue eyes!she was feeling afraid as well as amazed.at a time she was thinking about to run away from this stranger's stromg grip and at next instant she was longing to look into those pairs of eyes forever.she was all confused by those two opposite emotions in her heart.his broad strong icy palm was freezing her warm chicks and making her numb!

abhay had allready understood that this girl was not her piyashree.she was only a lookalike of her.she didn't had the same presence and sence that piyashree had.but still he was not eable to turn away from her big wide eyes looking towards him with the mixed expression of fear and amusement!she was awakaning the same feelings which was lost long ago.

both continued to gaze to eachother like the time had stopped arround them.the moon smilled at the dark night sky while the cold wind brushed over them after so many ages.

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so guyz,i'm stoping hear😆nahito chapppy bahut lamba ho ja raha hain😉,now pls pls reply soon!!!!

ps:this sajni paas bulao na is one of ma fav songs😃.and also this somg is the inspiration for these ff!!sajni's storyline came in my mind when i was listening to this song!!😳.also when i heared this song i only imagine our beloved abhiya always😃

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

wow...amazing updates

finally he had seen her...it' awsum .lvd the way u have written about the entire night and their meeting sequence ...it's beautiful

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barki

@barki

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

wow superb finally they meet 👏

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

aaj to maine tumhare PM karne se pehle hi update pe puhach gayi...<3

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

wow lovely update... finally illusion become real... hey i heard first time dis song i want to download dis plz tell me its of album or from some movie... song is really pepping...

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Full on emotional update.Loved d emotional pull dat Piya experienced due to Abhay's singing n finally they met.
Cntinue asap.

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm

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Aaliyah

@--Aaliyah--

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Nice update .
Abhiya's emo's were beautifully written .
Continue soon and thanks for the pm .

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Wow...such a beautifully written chapter.Abhiya finally met.I'm a big fan of Jal...one of their most beautiful tracks is Sajni.Im glad to know this beautiful song inspired you.

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