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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnku guys for liking abhiya meeting...

Chapter 6

Next morning :
Pia woke a bit late ..cuz last night she was so tired plus after coming home she went thru all d memories she had of abhay..specially d last time she saw him n slept without realising .

Flashback,pia n abhay age 13 yrs, pia's home
"Abhay I'm leaving tomoro now ..muje bilkul mann nhi h jane ka ..bt I hv to go."

"Pia muje bhut bura lag ra h..mai tere bina school mai masti kaise karunga"

"I'm sorry abhay..bt muje jana hi hoga..ye le meri taraf se..taki tu mujhe hamesha yaad rakhe" pia gave abhay a watch..

"Pia mai tujhe kabhi nhi bhulunga. Pia 8 saal se hum frnds h. Tuje kya lagta h aasan hoga "

Pia hving tears in her eyes "abhay u knw it wud b difficult par hume kuch choices aise krne padte h jisse hum badal nhi skte .tu janta h na mere dadu dadi hi sab kuch h..agr vo chahte mai bahar jao to I need to"

"I undrstnd it..bt " he spoke aftr sometime "u r right pia, I'm just creating a fuss out of it..I'm being too selfish, sirf apne liye I'm saying u no to hv abroad education"

"Nhi abhay aisa ni h..u r hving a wrong feeling.."

" no cut d topic here..n u r going ..dat too happily..ye pakad..maine apne pocket money se khareeda h.." abhay handed her a black sweatshirt.. " n ab ek jhappi to dede..na jaane hum kab mile..mile bhi ya na" pia immediately hugged abhay
"Shut up bay(shortcut for abhay,as pia in childhood Called him)..aisa kuch ni hoga. we'll.. for sure meet someday.." they parted their hug.

Flashback ends.

In morning again:
Pia wakes..
"Oh god ..I'll b late.." quickly she got out of home..without hving breakfast. She felt agitated wid herself cuz she couldn't work on any plans to crack her nanu..plus she's late aswell n missed d delicious mom cooked breakfast ..bt in between a bit happy to c abhay today.. she reached d class

Seeing pia at d door abhay rose his hand to give a hi-5 ..but T,ahead of pia was about to hi-5 him n very attentively he removed his hand..
"Urggh...don't give urself so much importance.." abhay said n gave his dimpled smile to pia..n pia smiled back ..n hi-5ed abhay giving d widest of her smile..this had to become d gossip to today.

Pia sat behind abhay with misha

"Hi misha"

"Hi dude..abhay haan"

"Friend ..misha..kal juice mai hi talli hogyi thi kya, jo yaad nhi"

"Just kidding yar" both giggled..every one was paying special attention to pia evn more than first day.

Classes got over,lunch break now..In all classes pia n abhay didn't really talk coz of back to back 3 lectures .

At end of 3rd class ,abhay spoke to pia
"Aaj to jaan hi nikal gyi..itna padh liye hum"

"So true..chal na humare sath lunch krne..maine suba se kuch khaya nhi h"

"Pia since wen did u became so careless"

"Jb se u got brains. .chl ab" pia was happy.. "let's go misha kabir.."

"Uh..ya" they all 4 went

All got their lunch
"So chuddy buddys right?" Kabir asked

"Eiuu..kabir..childhood bst frnd ..so much btr dan dis chuddy buddy" pia said

"Muje to chlega chudds budds ." Abhay said happily

"Ye hui na baat" kabir hi-5ed abhay "oye mish ,akash ne terko bulaya tha.pia hum 5-10 min mai aate h" n they went

"So good sort of friends u hv made pia"
Pia grinned

"Come on I guess tu dehradun ka sabse famous ladka lagta h muje agr auro ki nazar se dekhu. Toh jaise u didn't got friends..girlfriends" pia was curious to know if he really love anybody..
Pia kaisa pucha ye sawal tumne mujhse..tere ilava I dnt wnt any,abhay thot

"Pia I'm hv nvr been in any relation uptil now. "

"U r kidding"

"I m serious..koi mere layak mili hi ni..bani to h koi zaroor..shyd mere aaspaas ho.."

"Ya koi na koi to h tere aaspaas" pia was so happy deep inside bt cudnt show anything..

"Acha vo chod.."
Pia immediately spoke "no I dnt hv any too"

"Wat? U dnt hv wat?" Both confused by each othrs misundrstnding

"Wat..tu kya puchne wala tha"

"1st u tell "
Pia now embarrasing n confused said "boy--friends"
Abhay laughed loudly..

"Pia I'm nt dumb tu kisi ladke ko dekhti tak ni h I knew dat already..bt iska ye bhi matlb ho skta h dat u love somebody n he cnnt b wid u" oh no pia I really really hope aisa na ho abhay thot

Pia thot uff abhay..kya bolu mai ab..ki mere dil mai sirf tu h ..u guessed it half right bt I cnt tell u ki vo insan tu hi h.

"Acha nw tell wat were u asking" pia y did u chnged d topic ab kya conclude kru mai..no pia mera dil mat tod yar ..pichle 5 saalo mai roz tuje pyaar kra h..aur zada n zada..abhay thot

"Pia y r u in dehradun..pls bta na"

"Sorry I cnt tell u..tu baat baar kyu puch ra h..just excuse me.." n pia left..

"Pia wait..I'm sorry" abhay became really sad


Precap::
"Congratulations pia rai u hv been selected as a eca member .." one of ECA member

"I hv bt I hvnt confirmed ur confirmation..".

"Sorry ,wat do u mean?"

"Inshort..I hv a condition!..kroge accept.."

"First tell"

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Happy u got a glimpse of past, bt I know a shocking sort of ending.bt I still hope u liked it..do tell ur reviews..abt flashback , d lil fight, n precap pls
Dat also means dnt forget to drop ur commnts
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sirf like se ni kam chlega pls comment too na...pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
am now officially addicted to this ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update... but precape is confussing... waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kya mera ff pakao h..to pls tell me I won't write thn ,after reading ur conments maza ni aata I mean I expect ki wen i'l open I'll c those big comments.bt my expectations r always lost...koi ch k part k bare mai kyu ni btata...acha atleast criticise wat u dnt like. Dat wud encorage me a lot ..I knw most of u wnt read this evn...bt whoevr does usse ek request h ki pls tell me abt howz d plot..which scene u like n which dialogue was best . I hope u take in a positive way n understand..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a v interesting,cute and lovely update.abhay and piya both love each other but cant express it.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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im really v fond of dis ff.plz dnt think like dis.eagerly waiting for piyas plans execution.hope she tells abhay about her mission.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update.
Loved d flashbak scenes of childhood of Abhiya n their frenship.Waiting 4 their love story to start.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing and Awesome Update!Loved it.!❤️
Hey pls dont think negative.This is not boring at all but very interesting and wonderful FF.Really love reading it alot. 😊
And I loved the flashback scene it was very cute and emotional one.And Also loved how pia replied that she don't have any boyfriends till-date.And then Abhay burst out laughing.😆That scene was really Amazing!Superb and Brilliant job.!👍🏼
Regaraing the precap,I didn't actually got it...So can't comment on that.
Pls Continue Soon...Thanks for the pm. 😊
And Sorry for my late reply.My final exams of 11th just got over yesterday.And I was very tired to read or comment yesterday. 😊

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