It has become my habit I guessđ, resing n then not updating d comment. I feel so bad when u update n I havent even updated my comment. I m extremely sorry, I ve been running here n there in past few months forgetting things n then remembering them at odd timesđ.
Coming 2 d update it was fantabulous Shreya! Oh I wish! We had something like this track in d serial too coz d point u ve chosen 2 start ur story is exactly d point when show started getting ruined wid fillers n unwanted elements!
So Piya was dreaming abt some *ahem ahem* wid Abhay n she got it fulfilled toođ˛,đ. Bt I dunno 2 what extentđ,đ.
I just loved how u wrote helplessness of Abhay n d way Piya interpreted it was just Superb! Reminded me of a scene in d show when Piya came to know abt Abhay's Bday n she pities him seeing him sitting alone.
"Abhay was so used 2 handling things on his own dat he doesnt know how 2 ask 4 help", trust me I face this prob dunno how many times! Vulnerablility n helplessness coupled wid mixed signalsđ i.e Abhay bt Piya knows him inside out!
n OMG dat little moment of comfort made Abhay loose control*blush blush* Shreya it was damn hottt! U know i could literally hear "Yes" frm Abhay when Piya called out to him!
Bt as usual, coming back 2 reality was harsh bt at least this time Abhay cud explain dat it was not her alone, it was him as well who lost d control[all other times, he does loose d control bt blames our poor Piyađ]. Awkwardness of d situation was described so well.
I m just waiting 4 d time when he will come 2 know dat Piya is Piyali herself!
So Alina resigned! Waiting 4 Sid's rxn to it. ROFl "Yours(not really)! He already is pissedđ.
Ye Kabir-Piya ki Misha ko impress cum jealous karne ki game kahin Abhay ko depress cum Jealous na kar deđ.
Update asap.
Edited by Andromeda001 - 12 years ago
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