FF- Time And Again- Book 2- Book 3- Link added - Page 80

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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I was really waiting for this one. Fabulous. So i was right indeed. it was Maithili tricking Pia as Abhay and he indeed saved her. Abhay's concern and his fear for Pia was nicely written but i felt it should have more depth emotionally. it was good anyways. Pia can NOT love Abhay.. how naive of him to think even he himself could stop her to love him. their moment was beautiful and tender. how did Alina reach there. Abhay is connected to Pia but how come she is and she even knows it's maithili 😕

Very very good point.I wonder how no one else saw that. Thanks, Tanzie!

As for depth...I always do that. its my fault coz I didn't want to go OTT hence understated it too much i guess...no probs. will work on it.

Alina and Abhay's banter was cute. they were playing chess.. reminds me of Harry and Ron whenever i heard about chess 😆 and Haseena.. she is funny.. n i love how she silently or verbally taunts Abhay 😆

and ending... yesss.. Sid is finally a full fledged vampire 😃

update soonish...

Harry and Ron😆 yes i love Haseena too😆 thanks a lot for commenting and liking🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Ohh Thank God Abhay save Pia timely🤗...That Bloody bitch Maithili😡Abhay good image stake her😆Ohh God why they not accept both love eachother😕Love Alina-Abhay-Pia moment...Ohh God now Sid feel he turn vampire again...continue soon dear🤗

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

god

what will happen now

pia is safe

loved the update

Originally posted by: Trouble.

I read the previous chapter an hour ago & when I logged in,I thought I'll comment then I opened my inbox and saw your PM.Am I that late?😳

The last part in the previous chapter was wondrously written,something really amazing!

Originally posted by: didlr

sid vampy ban gaya:D loved abhiya moment...hate that maithali, idiot!

Gfeat writinthanks fr pm

Originally posted by: -Monayaholic-

Sorry i was unable to reply before some net problems had strucked.

all the updates were awesome as usal. talking about this one

it was really funny and wow conversation of abhay and alina his room.

and loved the abhiya's beautifull moments. and ... it was a fabulous😃 update and thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

well maithili was obvious, wasnt she? neway, gad that abhay saved her, and oh my the way he was ogling at her, was too good.

and in the last scene, is Sid finally going to expose himself, or will Alina save the day in the right time?

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

muje to pehle hi pta tha I mean kuch bhi ho akhir hai to wo hero hi na...apni heroine aise thodi na marne dega...🤣

well wo kya kehte hain use...ah yes...kisi ko kuch bhi bolne se pehle apne app ko dekhna chaiye...Ahay my dear if piya is an idiot u are double idiot...and moreover u are right she is an idiot that's why she fell in love with an idiot like u na...😆

waise metz ek tarah se tumne acha kaam kiya😛

Moti dekh maine kitna bada comment likha hai😛

Originally posted by: Janani24

wow that was one super update👏 thank heavens that abhay reached on time n saved pia😊 that maithili😡 i want alina to save sid somehow😕 continue soon😊