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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: barki
wow eksath do do update good for us thank you😊👏

Ha ha ha
yaa good for u.
and thnku for coment

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Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya
amazing update...
ek saath do do update...wah
padh kar bahut mja aaya
thnks 4 pm dear...

next time also 2 update at same time

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Originally posted by: alisha.a.s
awesome update...
beautifully written...
loved it...
thnx for pm...

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#54

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
wow nice update... thanks 4 pm... i think jeh is also werewolf

Thanks and i will give the character sketch of jeh and his family letter when condition apply

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome story
merry christmas

Mery christmas dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: bellaaa
lovely updates
so finally piya and all gang see abhay fight with ware wolf and now believe that supernatural existed too..thats gud they prepared for it
wow piya knows all history about abhay so now she play the role of maihtili with abhay???
poor abhay crying for his love
wow in entry abhay hitted jeh gangs
cont soon

It will be amazing when abhay will know about play

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chapter - 5 , the hurtfull past

everyone was staring to the direction from where the abhay was gone. everyone was shocked when they saw the condition of the boys who messed with abhay. many student expected the big fight between them but abhay complete the fight within 3 minutes. some of the student was standing outside the principle's office to hear the cold bar batween principle and abhay.
(NOTE- GUYS ISS FF ME PRINCIPLE KHURANA'S KA AADMI HAI SO WO HAMESHA JAY KA SATH DEGA.)

principle's office

abhay enter in the principle's office without permission and take chair. principle become angry
prin- how dare u to walk in my office like that. this is not ur home. dont u have manner's.
abhay- ( silent )
princi- r u hearing me? what is ur name and what u want?
abhay- abhay, abhay raichand. new in town. and last ans, this is college so officialy i m here for study. if ur introduction is completed, can we discuss buisness.
princi ( after heard the name of raichand ) - oh, u r the son of mr. raichand. ok today mr. raichand talked with me. u can go now. i already completed ur document. u can study in this college. congratulation abhay now u r the student of mount college.
abhay just about to go but princi called him from behind
princi- abhay if u can than u should have keep control on ur attitude.
abhay- whatever..and abhay going from the princi's office to the direction of his car but he saw a girl giggling with her frnds. her back was facing to abhay but then she turn and abhay froze. yes abhay froze at the place when he saw her face. he whishper " mathili " without knowing but he saying.

abhay's pov
i was going to my car but then i saw some girl's were talking about mathili. they were saying to a girl that mathili was beautiful like her and that girl was laoughing with her frnds. i feel like my anger was increasing. first that principle and now these girls and boys comparing my mathili to that girl. how can they. but then she turn and i felt like i m freze on my place. no, she cant be her. how can she be her. but her face. just stop abhay she cant ur mathili. she has curly hair but mathili's hair was straight and mathili die 200 year ago in the fire. but if she is not mathili then who is she. i was thinking about mathili and then i whishper " mathili " without relising that the girls and bous were staring at me. i hv to go from here. i cant stand here.
abhay's pov end

piya's pov-
i was standing with my frnds and we r talking with each other about the play. i showed them the pics of mathili which i found from the net when i was reserching on mathili. they all were shocked when they saw the pics of mathili and next moment they were stering to my face. i was not surprised becuse i know it will come. when i seen that photo then i also was shocked after seen her photo. she was just like me. we hv only one diffrence that the hair style. i hv curly hair but mathili's hair was straight and she was looking very beautiful. then my frnds told me that i m joking with them but i told them that it is truth. after sometome's shock they come back to their sence. they start joking with me. we was lughing but then ruhi said me that the boy who was fought with jay's gang was staring to them wih angry expresion. i turned to him and i saw his expression changed. his expresion changed from angery to confused. he was staring at me with his confused look and then he wishper something which i could not here becuse i was bussy to saw him. stop piya why r u staring on him like a bimbo. my heart was beating with the speed like it will come out within second. but then he turn to his car and went from there. then i saw my frnds, they were staring at me with shock. i asked them
piya's pov end

piya- what? why r u staring on me like that.
misha- piya, he know her. he know mathili.
piya- what? how u can say that?
misha- what? r u out of ur mind. u did not hear what he say when he saw u?
piya- no, what he said.
misha- day dreamer, kabhi toh sapno se bahar aa jaya karo.
piy- misha shodo je sab and tell me what he said.
misha- when he saw u he said mathili.
piya- what? r u sure?
kabir- yes piya, we all heard this. guys this man has hiding something. u know his attitude and how he alone fought with them. and now he know about mathili.
misha- yaa kabir. omg then may be he can help us for this play. we hv to talk with him.
all- ok , wait for tomarrow.
misha- hey pia, kya tumhe abhyendra ki photo mili.
piya- no misha. i searched many sites but i cant found the pics of abhyendra.
misha- ok. now lets go, we hv to go home.

in raichand villa

hasina- abhay abhi tak aya kyon nahi. usko aa jana chahiye tha aab tak.
chand- relax hasina, he will come.

in deep forest

abhay was runing in the forest. the face of piya was flashing in front of his eyes. he was hurt. why, he dont know but piya's face making him week. he was runing and runing. then he stoped near a grave. mathili's grave and fell down on his knees. the past which he want to forget was now front of him.the wounds of that crule night which was somehow healed but still not completely.. he was not forget her. he always cried for her in every night. but his wound was now healed with some limits. he was living somehow. but today he want to die but he cant. yes the wound which was somehow healed were now again start hunting him. her screams were now dying him.and again he shout "mathili" her name. but today something changed. everytime in these 2oo years he cried for her but also controlled himself. but today he want to control but cant be. again the night passed like the others night but something was changed today and this changes was the proof of that storm which is now ready to come and will be the cause to destroy many lifes.

frnds next part on next page

Edited by visu12 - 12 years ago

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chapter-6 - mission abhay raichand

next morning mount college

piya misha and all the gang was sitting in the class. abhay enter in the class and sit on the last banch of the class. the teacher enter in the class.
teacher- so students , u know that this is ur personality development lecture. but today we will discuss about love. love is very i mportant part of our life. so stude nt i want to know ur pov ab out love.so lets start from ruhi.
ruhi- mam love ke b are me main nahi b ta sakti kyonki muje toh har boy se love ho jata hai jo hot ho. log kehte hain ki love ek baar hota hai but mere sath aisa kyon hota hai ?
teacher- ruhi, jiski baat tum kar rahi ho usko love nahi, attraction kehte hai. sit dow n. kabir tum batao
kabir- mam love ek aisi feeling hai jo humare akelepan ko bar deti hai. hum jiko pyar karte hain uske bina ek pal nahi reh sakte.
angad- (looking to ruhi) love...
teacher- angad sit down. we know about ur love. piya tum batao
piya- mam i hate this love. yeh sab bakbaas hota hai. actualy love hota hi nahi, sirf attraction hoti hai. everyone play with others emotions on the name of love.
( misha, kabir, ruhi and angad these four were listening the every word of piya. they knew that why piya saying all this. she did not forgive her father yet for her mistake. the mistake which has do her father and the mistake which was the reason of her mother's death. she love her sisters and her mother madhu very much. she also love her father but she cant forgive him.)
teacher- ok. now misha ur turn
misha- mam piya is also right but love is not always bad. love can make a person happy. love is feeling which can make anyone's life easy. a person who hates his/her life, love make him happy. mam paana hi sirf pyar nahi hota, pyar me kush khona bhi padta hai. love is heaven mam.
abhay- if love can make a person happy then the love is also the cause of person's pain. if love can make anyone's life easy than love also can make anyone's life hell. love only give pain. the pain which cant be erase in thousend years. due to love, a father can burnt her doughter alive. due to love a princess can meet to a death. love can make a alive person dead, a walking dead, a monster. love can destroyed the life of many peoples within the second. due to love a person cried everynight for his love.
after saying that abhay left the class. teacher was confused about the statement of piya and abhay. misha and her frnds knows about piya but they r wondered when they heard the statment of abhay about love.

misha's pov
i was sad becuse of piya's condition. she loves us but she did not want to forget her past. i know that dad makde a very big mistake in past so it is difficult for piya. but i m shocked and wondered when i heard abhay's statement. i always consider the positive facts of love but he tells the negtive fact of love. i know he was true but i m thinking that why not i thought about this negtive facts. he make completely negtive to my positive thinking and he was also true. what next i m shocked when he says "a father can burnt her doughter alive. due to love a princess can meet to a death. love can make a alive person dead, a walking dead, a monster". was he talking about mathili. i knew that he know about mathili. his these lines touched my heart. and he talking about walking dead, monster. but he want to say omg vampires also walking dear. its means, no this cant be happen may be he wanted to say anything else. but one thing sure that kabir is right. he is hiding something and i hv to find out this. i hv to talk with piya and kabir becuse if i talked with ruhi, she will says this to all college and if i says to angad then he will tell to ruhi and the same problem.
misha's pov end

piya's pov
i was very week. i wanted to cry. i feel helpless. i want to forget my past but today i could not helped me. i says many wrong things. but then i heard the abhays statement and i turn my face to his face. i saw the pain in his eys. i felt like he was talking about himself. but then he said something about walking dead and a father which burned his doughter. omg kahin wo mathili ke bare me toh nahi keh raha. but then he run from the class. how can he know about mathili. shut up piya, jab tum jaan sakti ho toh wo kyon nahi. yesterday misha told me that he was called me mathili so may b he knew about mathili.muje kabir and misha se baat karni hogi. muje misha ko sorry bhi kehna hai kyonki main janti hoon ki wo meri baton se hurt mehsoos kar rahi hogi. yeh maine kya kar diya. i hv to talk with them.
piya's pov end

misha, piya and kabir was talking about abhay.
misha- piya, abhay mathili ke bare me kush jyada janta hai.
piay- yaa misha, u know jab wo je sab keh raha tha toh muje aisa laga ki wo apni baat kar raha ho.
kabir- maine pehle hi kaha tha ki kush gadwad hai.
misha- yaa and lets start mission " abahy raichand." it will be fun.
piya- misha tum janti bhi ho ki tum kya keh rahi ho. hume toh vampires ke bare me resarch karni hai
misha- piya wo rearch hai and it will be fun. main na iss sadu ko itna tang krongi ki woh apna attitude bhul jayega. ha ha ha ha
kabir- je nahi sudrne wali. aab kisi ladke ka psha karna padega. misha kyon na hum kisi ladki ka pisha karen?
piya- kabirrr. tum dono na. i hate this idea.
misha- ok then main and kabir hi pta laga lenge.
piya- omg, nahi main bhi tum logo ke sath jaungi. ok done.
kabir- yaar je bahar itni crowd kyon hai? lets se.
trio goes outside and they saw the jay was blocking the way of abhay.
jay- tumhari itni himat ki tum mere frnds par hath uthao. i will see u.
abhay- hey i m free. if u dont mind then u can see me today. bdw they were ur frnds? omg they all were very weak.
jay- today i hv an important work. but i will see u in boxing match. last time bhi kisi ko sabk sikhaya tha.
misha comes and said
misha- hey looser, maine tumhe warn kiya tha ki agar kabir ke bare me kush kaha toh acha nahi hoga.
jay- i will u see u and ur kabir also. and u abhay, wait for boxing
abhay- yaa i m waiting.
jay left from there and misha turn to abhay
misha- hi abhay, i m misha dobreal.
abhay- i know that and i hv to go.
misha-hey abhay, yaar why r u behaving like that moron jay. muje tumse help chahiye.
abhay- i m not interested
abhay left from there
misha- sadoo. all the rich boyss r same
kabir- wat u mean misha?
misha- m sorry kabir mera matlab je nahi tha. iss abhay ne mera mood kharab kar dia hai.
panchi and danish also come nad then they all gone to reharsal hall.

in reharsal hall

panchi- so piya tum mathili ke role ke liye perfect ho. tumara face bilkul mathili jaisa hai. ( panchi start thinking)
piya- panchi tum kya soch raahi ho?
panchi- piya agar abhyender jinda hota and tumhe dekhta toh kya hota.
pia- panchi... jo ho nahi sakta uske bare me kyon soch rahi ho.
panchi- ok. yaar abhyender ka role kon karega.
voice- jay karega abheyender ka role.
misha- who the hell r u?
all the boys and girls turn and shocked
princi- kya hua misha. aise kyon dekh rahi ho.
panchi- par sir jay kaise/
princi- maine keh diya toh jay hi karega role.
another voice- realy? but i dont think.
princi turn and see the boy standing behind him
princi- abhay u know that u r talking with principal. and bdw how can u change my decission.
abhay- check ur college's rule book. in college rules, it is clearly mention that anyone can take part in any game and play.
princi- u think anyone can stand front of jay.
abhay turn his head to the boys. all the boys said they cant stand against jay. princi smiled and about to go but abhay said
abhay- i will.
princi know that if he start compidition between abhay and jay to show their acting skills then audians will chose abhay becuse jay only know to hurt others. jay cant be show love to anyone. so he think something else but he was not know that he was making a big mistake.
princi- so tomarrow hv a compidition between u and jay. i will announce the task tomarrow. it will be surprise. lets see what happend and after saying that he left.
misha- oh no, aab toh jay hi jeetega kyonki princi jay ko pehle hi task bata dega.
abhay- wait and watch loosers.
misha- abhay tumhari problem kya hai? hum tuse frndship karna chahte hain par tum ho ki hume attitude dikha kar chale jate ho. why?
abhay- becuse i dont deserve ur frndship misha.
piya- what u means abhay?
abhay- tum log nahi samjoge.
saying that he also left from there.

frnds plese like and coment. i m waiting.