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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Dear,I readed your whole ff in one go and really loved it alot.โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ
You are really an Amazing and Mind-blowing Writer! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธ
I love kabir-misha-pia trio and I want a new member in their trio i.e Abhay. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I think Misha and Kabir will understand that Abhay is a good vampy soon and Misha will surely approve him then. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I want to see what role will Sid play?Becoz I love Sid alot from pkyek.โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜ณ I know his role will be positive as you said in Charachter Sketch and He is guilty of his actions and can do anything for Abhay.I think He will play cupid for Abhay-Piya.Pls Show him more yaar.And Uske Sath Panchi hogi ya Alina?! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
I notice One thing about your FF,Even when I read the Charachter Sketch.Vampire leader ka chehra sab ko unknown hai aur Mujhe usi waqt shaq hogaya tha ki Abhay hi leader hai aur last part padke yakin hogaya.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณAur yahi hai Abhay ka secret ki Wo sabse jyada powerful vampy ya ye bhi ho sakta hai ki wo sabse jyada powerful supernatural ho...
All the best for your Exams.๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผI hope they will go well.I will pray for you.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Pls Continue Soon.And Pls PM me.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Exams hone ke baad pls regular update karna.๐Ÿ˜ณ
And Your note of your PC before update was Hilarious.๐ŸคฃYou cracked me up with the Doctor and Virus thing.๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saachi-

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Thanks๐Ÿ˜Š ...btw when r updating?????
i will be eagerlly waiting for ur update

thanku dear. i will update very soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: janvie

Hey Dear,I readed your whole ff in one go and really loved it alot.โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ
You are really an Amazing and Mind-blowing Writer! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธ
I love kabir-misha-pia trio and I want a new member in their trio i.e Abhay. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I think Misha and Kabir will understand that Abhay is a good vampy soon and Misha will surely approve him then. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I want to see what role will Sid play?Becoz I love Sid alot from pkyek.โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜ณ I know his role will be positive as you said in Charachter Sketch and He is guilty of his actions and can do anything for Abhay.I think He will play cupid for Abhay-Piya.Pls Show him more yaar.And Uske Sath Panchi hogi ya Alina?! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
I notice One thing about your FF,Even when I read the Charachter Sketch.Vampire leader ka chehra sab ko unknown hai aur Mujhe usi waqt shaq hogaya tha ki Abhay hi leader hai aur last part padke yakin hogaya.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณAur yahi hai Abhay ka secret ki Wo sabse jyada powerful vampy ya ye bhi ho sakta hai ki wo sabse jyada powerful supernatural ho...
All the best for your Exams.๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผI hope they will go well.I will pray for you.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Pls Continue Soon.And Pls PM me.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Exams hone ke baad pls regular update karna.๐Ÿ˜ณ
And Your note of your PC before update was Hilarious.๐ŸคฃYou cracked me up with the Doctor and Virus thing.๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿ˜†



thanks dear. omg i had not recieved that much big comment yet. but you did it. thanks again. yaa dear about ff, i also love the sid's character so i made it positive and in future sid will become the important part of this story.. for him about panchi or alina, i have not think yet.. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š hahaha about pc, my pc really cracked my mind. i was angry on him but what can i do. yaa i will udate soon. again thank u dar. and my exam r finished 1 month before. this note is old.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pls update soon. Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls update soon pls update soon pls update soon pls update soon pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

pls update soon pls update soon pls update soon pls update soon pls update soon


Hey i wil update soon. Now i m just suffering frm very serius personal issue.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: visu12


Hey i wil update soon. Now i m just suffering frm very serius personal issue.


its ok friend , we will wait for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey please update soon
can't wait to READ NEXT
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Posted: 11 years ago

chapter - 12

Lost in her past, she did not even realize when tears star flowing from her eyes. Her life always betrays her and crashed her many dreams. When she was far away from dehradoon, she was happy somehow but as she comes in dehradoon for studies in Mount College, everything changed. She made some special friends here like misha, kabir, ruhi, angad and panchi. In first day of college, she made such sweet frnds but kabir was not only her frnd but also her secret admirer. First she did not notice him but then she start felling a change in him. She comes to know about his feelings toward her but she made him clear that they can't be more then best frnds. Later he also understood this. But the annual day changes many things. She comes face to face to her past. She saw her father with her best friend. She remember the last many years which she passed with the news of death of her father, her mother who took her last breath with her last wish only to see him last time. She felt betroyed. Anger took over her. On that day, everything becomes wrost. Her relationship with misha, panchi and her gang, everything changed. She shouted on all of them. And today again she was feeling the same. She loves him but he is not human. He belongs to some other word. She can't love him then why. Why she fall for him. Why she fall for a heartless monster. It pained her. She wishes she could erase her memories, his face from her mind. But she knew he also gone through from pain. She could feel his agony. She had seen in his eyes. She had seen many emotions. Emotion of hattrness, pain and guilt. No, she can't think about him. Her mind starts screaming. He is blood sucker. Misha is right. She has to forget him. "pia, what r u thinking?" asked worried misha and she come back to present. "m calling u from last 5 minute but u r not responding." " u r right misha. I hv to forget him" saying this pia crushed down on ground. Misha understood about whome she was talking. Misha run to her but her eyes struck on pia's. misha's eys widened in shock. She saw the same eyes which she had already witness of some years back. She start trembling but with her whole strenth she called a no.

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She was screaming her name. Running in the middle of wood with tears flowing through her eyes, she was screaming her name. After seeing a figure standing far away from her, she runs toward her. She saw her eyes with shaken voice she spoke" why pia, why r u running from me. What I hv done. Pls don't." she saw pia's expression changed. Her eyes were showing a different type of emotion. The emotion with the fear of lossing someone precise. She heard saying her something "you r daughter of arnav dobreal. U r daughter of the person who betrayed my mom. He is the reason of my mother's death. U cant be my friend. I lost u" saying this she fall on ground. "pia" with heart breaching scream misha come back to present. Her eyes drifted toward the room in front of her eyes with "ICU" written on it. She felt kabir beside her with worried face. Misha hugged him tightly. Today, after witnes of the same emotion in pia's eyes, a fear of loosing her made her restless. Kabir knew something is wrong. But he think to ask her later.

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Running from some wolfs her head start spinning. Her feet give up. She turn backside and saw a group of wolfs staring toward her. She knew it's over. She could not do anything aspect waiting for her death she closed her eyes tightly after seeing a wolf jumping on her. She waited sometime but did not feel any pain. She opens her eyes slowly. A girl with curly hair was standing in between her and wolfs. She could not see her face. Pia could only see her back. Her eyes start roaming other side. Her eyes widened after seeing a lifeless wolfs in front of eyes. She heard something. That girl said her "run pia, I will see them. U goes and run" hearing this pia starts running. But something struck in her legs and she scream in the fear of falling. "What happened pia? U r in hospital. Bad dream?" asked worried madhu from pia. Pia did not say anything. After talking with all she asked from panchi' panchi, misha kaha hai?" panchi did not said anything. "dnt know pia why but misha had not speak a single word after u got unconscious" said kabir. Pia knew her sister very well. She told all of them to go and send misha alnone. Misha enter in room with trembling legs. " tommy, m fine na. What happen?" hearing this misha run to her and hugged tightly. pia understood that something is runing in her mind. "What happened misha? I know something else is bothering u?" Ask pia. Misha starts crying." u r not angry with me pia. Hai na? Last time, u left me. This time, I will not let u do that. " pia understood now everything how she can forgot that incident. " pagal, m not gonna leave u. k. u r my strenth. Now go because I don't need u. I need my brave tommy sister." Misha start laughing. And then stop " hey, u moron, u said me weak. M not weak. Misha dobreal is not weak" saying this she hugged pia tightly.

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In the middle of woods, two person was arguing with each other. A girl with curly hairs and a boy. " what the hell u think u r doing. U r playing against nature. It could not be possible" said angry boy to girl. The girl gives mysterious smile to him and said" no bro, m not doing anything wrong. It will happen. I cant see him like that. I want him back. I want to see him smiling and for this, if I hv to go against nature, then I will go. U also want same na then don't stop me." The boy did not say her anything. He just nodded and next moment, with supernatural speed, they both lost in darkness of wood.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome beautyfull update
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