I am really curious to know more about Oedipus 🤔 He is certainly not someone who can be brushed aside and it is obvious there are higher stakes involved where he is concerned. Chand's edgy behavior was testimony enough for that. He is so insecure where Abhay is concerned and from Chand's tone it seemed to imply that he was desperate to stake his claim on Abhay and though he emphasised this to Oedipus repeatedly the uncertainty reflected in his words for no matter what Chand has to say, at the end its Oedipus who will have his say. His cool demeanor was enough to suggest that he cared a darn for Chand's threat for he is confident its his will that shall be fulfilled and Abhay will yield to him and it is he who has the power over him. This really frightens me now
I liked Rohan and Pia's friendship. Rohan's feelings for Pia may be more than just the platonic norms of friendship but he is willing to give her space and I guess even Pia is aware of this. We all have one person in whom we can confide all our deepest secrets, something we cannot do with our family even. We know this person will not judge us and neither will that person press you to share your problems not unless they know their friend wants to share it but are not able to.
Is Nitin a slayer? 😲 Not able to recollect if you had mentioned him in your previous update but his investigation may shed light on the truth and what will happen then? Well this makes Abhiya relation truly forbidden here for her family this is a reality they had never fathomed staying in the safety of their human world. They had never had a brush with the supernatural all their life but their daughter will drag them right into the center of it. Neither will the supernatural world accept a human into their folds.
About the three boys who got injured was it Abhay or Oedipus who hurt them? I find it hard to believe Abhay has done it since Pia had got to him before. I doubt if he would go back to being a monster but from what Animesh said that seems to point at him. I could sense Pia's fear when she confirmed that those brutal killings could be the work of someone who resembled a human but was not one. And did I sense a heartbreak or was I reading too much into the lines? 😕Rohan has certainly noticed something is off with Pia and I wonder when he will get to know about Abhay.
I loved the last scene when Abhay cornered her in the changing room 👏 Very well written! And when Abhay confessed he did not wish to hurt to them but he did. Is he referring to that rampage or the recent incident?😕
This story still has so much to tell. I know u intend to finish it off in a chapter or two and will miss this
P.S - Please post a summary before you update the next part. Just a few lines. Since this has been updated after a long time.
Waiting eagerly for the next part 😃 and so sorry for the late comments
Edited by FieryHeart - 10 years ago
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