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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey u mistake u write part 1 instead of part 2 plz correct it... and oops dmg ki yaade dilane ke lia thnx

and welcome for thanx i like it dmg
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
where is ridzi and y arman searching 4 her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

where is ridzi and y arman searching 4 her...

my story is like sukirti kandpal is riddima,seddishwari,saakshi,pia,jazz and why my story is like this becouse its A FUNNY ONE and why armaan is searching for riddima becouse she is worried for riddima and riddima is somewhere else fine now you understand 😊 😉😃👏
Edited by tara-kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for late update
part 4
armaan search everywhere but ridddima dont get .and big thing is that riddima as pia in dehradoon
pia:aaahhh (shouts)abhay tum yaha kya kerhahi ho tume sharam nahi aati ke ek masom larki ki kamre mein ate hwe
abhay:pia sorry
pia: sorry se kya hota hai besharam larka
abhay:(shouts)piya😡
pia starts crying😭
abhay:s.s.so.sorr. sorry
pia: sorry se kya hota hai tum kitne besharam ho ek masoom se larki ke kamre mein aye aur upar se mujhse shouting 😭
abhay starts laughing😆
pia:tum has kyun rahe ho
abhay:kyun ke pehli war tum... mujhse shouting kaha (laughing)its wrong english yaar😆
pia:mujhe pata hai wrong english hai aur tumari himat kaesi hui ki mujhe yaar kahne ka mein ek larka nahi samji😡
abhay:ok ab sorry to boldya ab to maaf kardo na
piya: sorry se kuch nahi hota tum utak betak karna parega wobi 10 times
abhay:jo hukum
abhay starts utak betak and pia laughing at him
misha comes
misha:oh my god abhay what are u doing in my sister's bedroom
abhay:kuch nahi
misha:kuch nahi... to tum yaha kyun te ok mein tume maaf kardeti hoon aagese isa mat karna to dake marke bagadongi ab jao
sorry guys if you want to know why i stoped then plzz read laali is not in this ff ok
so tommorow i will do part 5 bye😊
Edited by tara-kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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o wow nice may be arman ko ridzy ki jagha sideshwari ya jaaz mile jaye jise wo ridzy samajh lai and then the funny convo betwn them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

o wow nice may be arman ko ridzy ki jagha sideshwari ya jaaz mile jaye jise wo ridzy samajh lai and then the funny convo betwn them...

yes you are right thank you to give me suggetions
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsomeee Abhiya but srry dear woh part1,2,3 ka charecter malum nhi coz i don't watch tht searials...I'm only watch pkyek & nw MB &RSSI only but Abhiya part nice👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5
in london ranbir is searching for any guesses 😆jazz ok
ranbir:😕jazz kaha chalegye
daljeeet:kise doondrayhai ranbir ji
ranbir:tumse koi matlab
daljeet:theeke mein jaaati hoon agar zaroorat ho to mujhe batadena bye
ranbir stops daljeet
ranbir:nahi daljeet ajau yaha par kya tumne jazz ko dekha hai
daljeet:jazz yeh jazz kon hai ranbir ji
ranbir:jazz meri girlfriend
daljeet:mujhe pata nahi
ranbir wispers:to kisko pata hoga
daljeet:kuch kaha tumne ranbir ji
ranbir:kuch nahi ab jao
ranbir says in mind:lagta hai mujhe jana parega dehradun waha pe hoga mumkin
ranbir goes to her bedroom and sleeps
and when it's morning ranbir is packing everything becouse he is going dehradun then suddenly daljeet comes
daljeet:ranbir ji tum kaha jarhi ho
ranbir:ghar chor ke
daljeet:kya!😲
ranbir:mazak karehe hoon yaar mein dehradoon jarhi hoon
daljeet:kiskilye
ranbir:of course jazz ko dundne keliye
daljeet:bye ranbeir ji 😭
ranbir:bye
he arives dehradoon
ranbir asks one man
ranbir:yeh dobriyals house kaha hai
man:edher se uder tikke wahi dekhna waha lekha hoga dobriyal mansion wahi hai
ranbir:thank you yaar
he goes there was a hotel he goes there and sleeps in his room🥱
sorry now tommorow i will continue it bye😊🥱


Edited by tara-kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for late update
part 6
in mumbai
armaan is thinking some thing
armaan(in mind):konsi contry mein nahi jaya... hmm...dehradun mein dehradun nahi jayen mujhe jana parega
then he sleeps
in the morning
in sanjivini hospital
in locker room
armaan:hi guys
all:hi
armaan:hey guys mujhe tumlogo se kuch kehna hai
anji:to kaho na kon tume roka hai
armaan:thanks mera ek plan hai
all:plan!!!!
armaan:haan plan aur plan yeh hai ki hume dehradun jana parega riddima ko dhondne keliye to mere saath kon hai
anji:ofcourse me
atul:are mein to ho hi
muskaan:hero mein inkaar kaise karsakti ho mein tumhare saath hoon
rahul:me also
armaan:to tikki kaam ki baad hum apne apne packing karte hai
sound:saare interns dr.kirti ko report karyi
in reciption
dr.kirti:riddima kaha hai
dr.anji:pata nahi maam munkin dehradun mein hoga
dr.kirti:tikke to dr.anjali and dr.atul children ward
dr.armaan and dr.rahul icu and dr.muskaan to shaushank ko asist karogi kyun ki riddima nahi hai
dr.armaan:maam i have a suggetion
dr.kirti:haan kehiye
dr.armaan:hume paanch ko dehradun jana parega waha petions bohat bemaar hai to kya hum jaa sakte hai kal aaj nahi
dr.kirti:tikke hai
sorry i dont have mood so i stop here tommorow i will continue i will telll you why i stoped becouse i go to school at morning and then i do my homework then my mom take my laptop now she gave me now i am did this part so tommorow i will continue🥱😊bye👏
Edited by tara-kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arman and ranbir ko dehradun ka hi idea kyo aya...

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