Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168 - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago
:o
Res
will try and unres asap.. :P

Shreya.. 🤗 Here I come, see..
Awesome update yaar.. Lovely..!!!

The beginning.. I was wondering whether I missed something in the first chapter.. on reading further I heaved a sigh.. thank god it was a dream.. I loved Abhay's concern and his interpretation of the dream or nightmare as Piya said.. But.. I dunno whether I'm going towards the right direction but I think the dream has something to do with the painting.. (I somehow am not able to remove the painting out of my mind..)

<Abhay had resigned himself to being completely mute when she watched, in order to avoid being hit by a flying slipper, cushion, or anything that was within her reach. So he would often shut himself up in his room and steer well clear of her.>
^^ Me too would do that for PKYEK.. Lol..

<The first time she asked him why he had given her, he'd completely denied it, instead saying that she probably had a bad memory and got it herself, or perhaps one of the servants had a major crush on her.>
^^ Lol..


<She realized now that he didn't like talking about himself. Whenever she came back from office feeling particularly jaded or angry, somehow he always asked her about her day, gently poking her till she opened up and ranted in great detail about her irritants.>
^^ Awww..

The journey back home.. the hearty conversation.. it made me feel that Abhay has as many secrets as Piya does..

<'So what am I?'
'You?' he said, looking down at her upturned face. 'You are someone who I'm sort of using for a business deal.'
The words hurt more than she would have imagined, and it took all of Piya's guts to look him directly in the eyes and say,'But do you know what you are- to me?'
'Apart from a former enemy, you mean?' he said, opening the lock and ushering her in. They stood in the drawing room, looking at each other. 'Go ahead. What am I?'
Piya turned away. She knew he needed her next words. 'You are someone I used to be jealous of- and someone I have come to care about as a good friend,' she said quietly. 'It's all right if you don't consider me your friend, you know. I still consider you a friend. So you know, next time you believe you aren't worth much to anyone- You are the only person I consider a friend, next to Leena. So remember someone would like you to live, too. Goodnight.'>
^^ That was heart wrenching..

<<'Friends?'
'Forever.'>>
^^ Yesss..!!!! Haha.. but as they say.. "Ek Ladka aur Ek Ladki kabhi acchhe dost nahi ho sakte.." Ahaaa..

<<
PS. Right, I need you lot to remind me that typing this whole thing on mobile-in the freezing cold- and updating in the middle of my preboards- is worth it. :D>>
^^ Of Course it did..!!! It was a super duper awesome update Shreya.. You're really great considering you did this in such conditions.. Thaaank You for the update..!!!


Update whenever You can.. 🤗

Edited by Divya6696 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--


I understand Dhrish... Exams suck big time!
Main keh rahi hoon Dhrish I will BURN that Nirmala book after my boards...
Anyways...yeah I love Leena too...
And thanks... I always love your comments!



Oh trust me they do.. and its the worst when you have exams literally every week..!!!
Haan kar dena.. the book deserves it.. Lol..

awww..
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Posted: 12 years ago
shreya. that was a beautiful update and yes i do wonder what went wrong with abhay. was it as simple as a relationship gone wrong or something much worse
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Shreya,
My God, you are analyzing the dreams as Abhay. Now I should get an appointment with you to discuss my dreams/nightmares :D
Ofcourse Abhay is a psychologist but still the way you showed his concern for Piya's dream was really good. I mean like a true professional, he cannot ignore a person's dream without analysing notwithstanding the fact that she is not his patient.
Thank you very much for updating despite your tight schedule with your boards and the inconvenience of updating via mobile + the weather.
And ofcourse this will not go in vain because I keep on waiting for your updates. Its just that I dont explicitly follow up because I know your pressures and studies are the first priority
You have no idea how much I am waiting for your update Time and Again. So many things to unfold.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
i thought it's pia who had a problem but now what's up with abhay...i think someone must have betrayed him and therefore he is like this.
lvd it.
all the best for ur exams and thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ... liked it very much..abhiya convo was very interesting..but you typed it whole in mobile!!![:O] oh GOSH...you are really outstanding👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update as usual both Pia n Abhay are such a mysterious people over here n u want to know n read about them more n more to understand them n know their past and change in behaviour and persona really gud job Shreya
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW SHREYA I NEVER KNEW U WRITE SUCH AWOSME STORY 👏AS I NEVER READ THIS ONE DUE TO BUSY SHEDULE!😛 SERIOUSLY U R MINDBLOWING! ⭐️WELL READ ALL THE CHAPTERS IN ONE GO,.WONDERING WHAT HAPPENED WITH ABHAY!🤔 I AM GLAD THEY R FRIENDS NOW...😳WAITING FR NEXT CHAPPY. 😉BEST OF LUCK FR UR EXAMS TOMATO😉
Edited by flora212 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.👍🏼
earlier i thought it was pia who had a problem in her past.but from this update itz quite visible that abhay had to go through some hard moments in his past life.waiting for next update.
and all the best for ur exams.

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Posted: 12 years ago
there is definitely some reason behind piyas nightmares.abhay have some dark past is it related to his parents or to piya.best of luck for exame.bundle of thanx for pm.

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